Original Damaged: Story Discussion

[Diana]

DAMAGED​

If you have read or are reading the story, you can discuss it here. Tell me what you like, and what you don't like. This is a place for you to discuss my story. I'll post updates here too on how I am working on the story.

April 6 2010 - 2:42PM: The prologue and the first chapter are up.
April 6 2010 -3:37PM: Chapter two is up.

 

[Joey Starfire]

Diana, So far this is brilliant, You're fantastic at this.
I'm loving the theme, but maybe describe your characters a little bit more. Not that I can talk....

But i think this is going to be a fantastic read.
Looking forward to chapter 2!

 

[Diana]

I haven't described the main character, because I want you to imagine who it is. But thanks for the compliment. I want the reader to create their own character for this story. If they interpret themselves into the main characters lifestyle, then they can become one with the story and enjoy it. I hope

 

[Monster]

Pretty good, Diana. I liked both chapters. You've put thought into this.

I like it, and will continue to read

 

[Diana]

Thank you, Drew.

I hope you continue to read it.