Claire's Poems

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I decided to share with you some of my poems as there written =)
And start off =)
Here is my lastest one I have written with my thoughts in my head onto paper in a special form =). Enjoy reading as I was nearly crying writing this :lol:.

Gone
When the night draws in
I lay my head down
to dream,
songs of the stars

What am I to do?
Whos there to laugh
to smile me warmth
to comfort.
When all else fails.

What can I do?
My arm is cold,
Theres no one to place it around.
My hands are cold,
there is no other hand in its touch.
My minds at a dead end,
no memories to share with someone.

Where shall I go?
With no one by my side,
i'm lost.
With no defence by my side,
i'm beaten.
With no love by my side,
i'm cold.

So when that night draws in.
I speak three different words.
As the tear falls down my cheek
" I Miss You"

~:Clairemere
 
I liked it actually. I'm not usually a fan of poetry, especially when it comes to ones without rhyming schemes, but for some reason I really liked that one. It' actually better that it didn't have a rhyming scheme. 'Twas good indeed. Keep up the good work (though hopefully the next one won't have to be inspired by a sad event).
 
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