krazy_fool_X
I <3 Quina!
This is my story thats like FF, but not. So its not a fan fiction, its my original. This is just an intro while i work on the proper thing, so please enjoy. I'm open to any critiscim.
----Introduction----
It was a clear day. Not a cloud in sight. A perfect day for sailing, not that a pirate would care.
"Your rum, cap'n." The captain snatched the bottle of rum and gulped it down, most of it being down his shirt. He kept one hand on the wheel and both eyes on the sea.
"That was a big wave." Laughed the captain. "Oy, more rum."
The captain threw the empty bottle into the sea, but he heard no splash.
"Your rum, cap'n..."
"Shh," He pressed his finger next to his lip. "Listen."
They both listened hard, and they could hear a faint cry.
"Is that a baby Cap'n." The pirate headed for the edge.
"Wait!" The captain threw himself against the side and stared hard.
The pirate joined him and stared as well, "It's nothing, Cap'n."
As they headed away, there was a definite wail.
"Sweet jesus, there is a baby, get the boats out!" The captain swung round, rum in hand, "Get a boat out to that baby!"
There was a rush for the cradle it was in and in a matter of minutes, theship had a baby on board.
"What do we do with it, Cap'n?" Asked one of the pirates.
"I dont know, what d'you think?" The captain was laid open for suggestion.
"I have an idea." A man in a cape came forward, a hood over his head.
"Who the hell are you?" The captain reached for his sword.
"I'm here to save the world." The mysterious man edged forward, his hand on his own sword.
----End of the Intro----
Im open to any criticism.
----Introduction----
It was a clear day. Not a cloud in sight. A perfect day for sailing, not that a pirate would care.
"Your rum, cap'n." The captain snatched the bottle of rum and gulped it down, most of it being down his shirt. He kept one hand on the wheel and both eyes on the sea.
"That was a big wave." Laughed the captain. "Oy, more rum."
The captain threw the empty bottle into the sea, but he heard no splash.
"Your rum, cap'n..."
"Shh," He pressed his finger next to his lip. "Listen."
They both listened hard, and they could hear a faint cry.
"Is that a baby Cap'n." The pirate headed for the edge.
"Wait!" The captain threw himself against the side and stared hard.
The pirate joined him and stared as well, "It's nothing, Cap'n."
As they headed away, there was a definite wail.
"Sweet jesus, there is a baby, get the boats out!" The captain swung round, rum in hand, "Get a boat out to that baby!"
There was a rush for the cradle it was in and in a matter of minutes, theship had a baby on board.
"What do we do with it, Cap'n?" Asked one of the pirates.
"I dont know, what d'you think?" The captain was laid open for suggestion.
"I have an idea." A man in a cape came forward, a hood over his head.
"Who the hell are you?" The captain reached for his sword.
"I'm here to save the world." The mysterious man edged forward, his hand on his own sword.
----End of the Intro----
Im open to any criticism.
