Original The story (rough)

[Oblivion_XIII]

Well, this is the story behind that exert I wrote. I will be putting parts up as I write them. This will not be the final story, only the rough, so I will be looking for feedback. There will be a separate thread for feedback at this link http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/original-works/discussion-tip-s-story-40721.html

Enjoy!
PART 1: HASTE

"Tip! Sie kommen, wir müssen um unser Leben laufen!" Tip Engel woke to his friend, Luis Amsel, shaking him. " Sie werden uns umbringen, wenn sie die Chance bekommen Eile!" Tip had no clue what Luis was talking about, but he did understand one thing, and that one thing was Eile, Haste!

" Warum müssen wir laufen? Why must we run?" asked Tip

"No time to answer. Wir müssen laufen, we must run!" Luis yelled as he pulled Tip out of bed. "They will be here any second now! Eile!"

As soon as Tip got out of bed, he ran with Luis. Ran like he had never ran before.

" Wohin gehen wir? Where are we going?" asked Tip.

" Überall, nur nicht hier, anywhere but here."

 

[Oblivion_XIII]

PART 2: RUNNING

"Luis, warum haben wir noch uns? Why are we still running? It's been quite a long time already, we're about 10 kilometers away from home." Tip asked. Tip was quite tired from all the running, he was breathing heavily. His body was covered with sweat. Luis looked the same way, except that he had a scared look on his face.

"We must keep running! They will surely catch us if we don't keep running. Eile!" Luis started running faster, Tip hardly managed to keep up. Suddenly, Tip stopped.

"Who are we running from? I may be young, but still. Ich need to know! Tell me Luis, sag mir!" Luis stopped, and walked over to Tip. Luis knelt down, looking Tip straight in the eyes.

"Tip, sie werden uns töten! They will kill us! We must keep running! Eile! There is no time to waist."

"But who is this that we're running from?"

"TIP! Wait until we are far enough away to make camp and get our rest, then all will be revealed to you. Can you wait?"

"Ich...Ich erraten. I guess."

"Gut. Now, we must run away from our hometown of Berlin, then find a nice hidden area to make camp." They continued running. Tip was exhausted, the only thing keeping him and Luis going was adrenaline.

A few kilometers later, Tip started crying, "Ich kann nicht! I can't take this anymore" He fell to his knees crying. Then he passed out.

***

"Tip!" Luis called to Tip, but he did not wake. Tip had been out for quite some time, at least 2 hours. That was enough time for Luis to find an area for camp and to clear a sleeping area.

"Uhhhh..." Tip moaned.

"Tip!" Luis cried. He splashed a little water from the near-by stream on Tip.

"Dass wurde angenehm. That was pleasant" Tip said weakly. He sat up, looking around at his surroundings. There wasn't much to see, just a small little stream in front of him, and the bags that Luis had brought acted as Tip's pillow. There was a large rock there, but Tip didn't seem to take notice of it. Weakly, Tip said, "Why are we running? You said that you would tell me after we made camp."

Luis sighed, "I was hoping you would forget, but I'll tell you. You know that I am not your real brother correct? And that meine Mutter und Vater aren't your real Mutter und Vater, correct?"

"Ja, I found out a few months ago."

"Tip, you appear to be only a young boy, but you are much older than that. You have lived for longer than I. There is something special about you, and the bad guys want you so they can do bad things to you. They want to use you as a waffe! A weapon!"

"Ein waffe! How would they even achive that, I am nothing special!"

"But Tip, you are! Even I don't know everything. I'm not supposed to tell you anymore, you must wait."

"Okay. I think it's time we should get some sleep."

"Ja, Ich zustimmen, I agree."

"Gute Nacht, good night."

"Nacht Tip, I will see you in the morning. We will continue running, just at a slower pace." Luis laughed, then fell asleep.