Poetry The Shadows

[Savior of the Damned]

Blackness can caress you
Warm you to the heart
Scare you till you run away
Sream out of the dark.

Piercing like a needle
Soft just like a brush
Peel away you feelings
Sufforcate you to death

Open space around you
Afraid you might just fall
Grabbing onto sanity
Trying to pull through
Unknowing can be freaky
Make you want to die
Just cling onto reality
And hold your head up high

Tell me what u think , thanks

Come on people read it plese

 

[Lilly]

oh woww thats nice!!
your a poet!

 

[Savior of the Damned]

lol glad u like it

 

[Lilly]

mee too!!

 

[Savior of the Damned]

Come on people tell me what you think!!!!!!

 

[Leki]

Great, I say. I'm no good at right poems. I think this kinda broke up the poem abit:

Peel away you feelings
Sufforcate you to death

Kinda like it didn't fit as well.