Poetry The End

[Jimmy D]

They fall like flies,
The children of mankind,
Fighting for a future,
That will bring freedom,
The dead sound the call,
The living answer,
History will repeat itself,
Forever bloodshed,
The screams of the fallen,
Shall forever resound,
In the ears of thier killers,
The innocent blood shed,
In the name of war,
Delivered to the blood god,
Smiling to see thier deaths,
The sad reality,
In a reality of doom,
Death will soon reign,
Over the earth,
In this last hour,
It might be,
A losing battle,
But it will be our,
Finest hour,
Bless you childern of the light,
Bless you protectors of the world,
Join in one voice,
Fight to your dying breaths,
We will shout the loudest,
Before death takes us in the night,
We will not rest,
Even in death we will fight.

 

[Dark Child]

Pretty good! I like it. Your poet skills are remarkable. But we could all use improvement.

 

[Adrius]

Nice rhime man.

 

[Ximruccilim]

I am not such a big fan of free verse, but yours is some of the best I have seen.

 

[Tidus Blade]

sounds like a speech, but it sounds really good