Dark Knight
Blue Mage
i've been studying to be a game designer and started writing a script but it is my first time and i need to know if it any good so i need some feedback and you people like it i'll keep posting as i write it
Scripting form 1
<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com
fficeffice" /><o></o>
Opening film<o></o>
Darkness
A woman’s voice: what was then has past what happened that night started the story of the rest of my life
<o></o>
The darkness turns to light
A small town under attack, men with swords run though the town killing who ever gets in there way. In a small farm just out of town a girls father gets a dagger from a table, the girl aged 11 stands in the room the father hands the dagger to the child.
<o></o>
Father: your sisters are still in the town, I have to go and help the town guard you take this dagger and you go out the back of the farm don’t worry about the town just run and don’t look back do you understand
<o></o>
Girl: y-yes
<o></o>
From a room at the front of the farm comes a crash
<o></o>
Father: there here run now and don’t look back and no crying you are strong
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
In the back barn of the farm
<o></o>
Two town guards walk in the barn
<o></o>
Town guard one: those two man came in here
<o></o>
Two men in black jump down and slit the guards throats
<o></o>
The girl behind a crate try’s to keep herself from screaming
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
The girl runs out the back gate of the farm she looks back and see two man in black running after her the girl keeps running the man pull out some sort of weird weapon the men fire a shot and the ground blows up just behind the girl and she goes flying forward when she opens her eyes everything is black her vision is gone not knowing what to do the girl gets up and keeps running in the direction she was running before she fell over in to the wilderness
<o></o>
After running for a long time the girl falls to the ground tired and filling sick and not knowing where she was and not being able to see she starts to cry and rain starts to fall the camera slowly rises up into the air
<o></o>
The opening film and tutorial of the game is over
<o></o>
The start of the game
<o></o>
A black screen the words come up on screen
<o></o>
6 years later
Her call comes
<o></o>
Film the camera centres in on a room in a building in a large city
In the room a girl of 17 wakes with a close shot on her eyes she opens her eyes her eyes are white with no pupils she gets out of bed and grabs a stick
<o></o>
The stairs out side the room
<o></o>
The girl swings her stick from side to side as she walks down the stairs she walks out the front door
<o></o>
The girl walks down a street, 5 men show them selves the girls sense the man.
<o></o>
Girl: who there
<o></o>
Man one: uh hay sweets and what would you name be
<o></o>
Girl: I am flay why who are you?
<o></o>
Man one: well flay hand over the stick and that purse of gold you have
<o></o>
Man two: yea this is a hold up give what we won’t and you won’t get hurt
<o></o>
Flay: oh stealing off a blind person that is not good you leave now and you won’t get hurt
<o></o>
Man three: what there’s no one here who’s going to help you now give us the staff
<o></o>
Flay: no!
<o></o>
Man one: fine
<o></o>
The man start to draw swords and head towards flay
Flay takes her stick grabs the end, and pulls a sword out
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
After the battle
<o></o>
Flay walks on and turns on to a main street
<o></o>
From across the street an elf boy of 20 yells
<o></o>
Elf: flay you’re here what took you so long
He walks over
<o></o>
Flay: sorry site I had a bit of trouble but I’m here
<o></o>
Site: ok we better hurry and get to the shop
<o></o>
The two of them run off to the south
<o></o>
Site stops flay
<o></o>
Site: what rally happened back there?
<o></o>
Flay: nothing
<o></o>
Site: I see the blood on your hands
<o></o>
Flay: ok I was robbed but I stopped the attackers
<o></o>
Site: oh flay you should have just given them the gold
<o></o>
Flay: why I got rid of them didn’t I
<o></o>
Site: yes but I don’t want to see you get hurt you can’t see you can’t fight the last to battles you were in were just luck it won’t last if someone wants to attack you call on me for help
<o></o>
Flay: you look to little on me site it is not luck that I killed 5 men I can fight site you have to have more trust in me
<o></o>
Site: ok just be careful
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
Out the front of a shop
<o></o>
A man: uh it’s flay and site you two are late
<o></o>
Flay and site: hello moreo
<o></o>
Moreo: you two are taking this package to the next town today I want you to leave in 3 hours it’s a day and a half trip so be prepared come and see me when your ready
<o></o>
Flay and site walk off
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
After a time back with moreo
<o></o>
Moreo: ok I need you to take these crates to the next town site you will be armed I’ve herd of bandit being on the road of late when your ready head over to the west gate follow the road and it will take you to the next town
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
That night sit and flay sit around a camp fire
<o></o>
Site: we should get some sleep
<o></o>
Flay: you herd moreo there are bandits on the road we can’t sleep
<o></o>
Site: it don’t mean both have to stay up flay you get some sleep and I’ll keep watch
<o></o>
Flay: your good to me site I promise I will help you find the people that killed your family
<o></o>
Next day
<o></o>
Site: let’s go we should reach the town by night fall
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
On the road near the town
<o></o>
Smoke raise from the town
<o></o>
Site: flay stop the towns under attack from here it looks like goblins
<o></o>
Flay: we have to go and help come!
<o></o>
Site: no we wait until the goblins have gone lay down flat
<o></o>
Flay: but-
<o></o>
Site: no but flay just get down now
<o></o>
Flay: no site we have to help
<o></o>
Site: get down!
<o></o>
Flay runs towards the town
<o></o>
Site: (yelling) flay get back here (whispers) why won’t she listen
<o></o>
Site starts running after flay
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
In the town in the heat of battle
Site: flay come we to get out
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
The goblins run away the battle for the town is other
<o></o>
Flay walks other to site
<o></o>
Flay: did you see me site I told you I could fight
<o></o>
Site: yes flay just go and take the crates to the warhorse
<o></o>
Flay: but what of you aren’t you going to help
<o></o>
Site: I let you sleep last night you do this for me
<o></o>
Flay: ok
<o></o>
Flay takes a crate and heads for the warehouse
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
Site is standing at the gate
<o></o>
Site: come flay we leave
<o></o>
Flay: why are you in such a hurry
<o></o>
Site: the goblins mite come back now come
<o></o>
Flay: fine (whisper) why is he in such a bad mood
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
That night flay and site sit around a fire
<o></o>
Flay: I can’t wait to tell Moreo about the battle
<o></o>
Site: no
<o></o>
Flay: hu why
<o></o>
Site: flay do you remember when we first meet
<o></o>
Flay: yes five years ago you were the one who found me after my town was attacked you took me in and helped me
<o></o>
Site: 6 years ago do you remember the two man that were running after you did you ever think of what happened to them
<o></o>
Flay: yes I stopped running and they never came for me
<o></o>
Site: it was me who stopped them and came for you
<o></o>
Flay: i thankyou, if you did not save me I would not be here right now so are you going somewhere with this
<o></o>
Site: when I took you to the town Moreo took you he said to me this girl is young and she has lost her site. you saved her no one else lived in the town I think this girl was ment to live and I think you were ment to find her she has no where to go you will look after her this girl has a great power I can fill it you will be her guardian you will put her life in front of yours
<o></o>
Flay: what how come you never told me this before
<o></o>
Site: I fort you knowing I was your carer would be a bit weird so I never did
<o></o>
Flay: ok so why are you telling me this now-
<o></o>
Site cuts in
<o></o>
Site: today I told you to stay back but you went anyway you didn’t listen to me if anything were to happen I would be to blame
<o></o>
Flay: like I said you think to little of me I can look after myself
<o></o>
Site: no flay I want you to promise as a friend you will listen the next time I tell you to do something
<o></o>
Flay: ok if it means that much to you I will listen
<o></o>
Site: thankyou now get some sleep
<o></o>
Flay slept and had a dream she dreamt of running from the farm and of her sisters and her father site was the only person she had left
<o></o>
Flay awoke
<o></o>
Flay: (whisper) someday I will find the people that stormed my town and kill them
<o></o>
Flay dose not know if it is day or night and if site is awake
<o></o>
Flay: hey site are you awake he was to keep watch hey site wake up site
<o></o>
Flay starts to use her stick to look for where site is sleeping
<o></o>
Flay: site where are you he must be gone but why this could be bad I’ve got to get to the town if I use my stick to walk down the road I should be alright
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
Flay swings her stick and hits stone
Flay: I’m here, I can do things myself
<o></o>
Flay waits for the guards to ask her entry but their voices never came flay did not want to wait so she opened the gate and walked inside she herd screaming and sword clashing she pulled the sword out of her stick
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
Flay: did I come the right way or am I back at the town the goblins attacked it must be, how could an enemy get in my town (yells) site moreo hey where are you
<o></o>
Two man run up to flay and smash a sword across her head she’s been knocked out the man drag her off
<o></o>
Screen goes black flay awake to the voice of site
<o></o>
Site: your awake
<o></o>
Flay: site what happened where are we
<o></o>
Site: sorry I left you flay I was taken here man I was hopping you would be alright
<o></o>
Flay: where is here?
<o></o>
Site: focon dungeon and if you want to know why, I don’t know. Moreo is here to and so are other people from the city
<o></o>
Flay: I know I was taken from the city but what’s going on
<o></o>
Site: flay where going to escape I’ve got a simple plan you can wounder around if you want but there are some pretty bad people around here
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
Flay walks in to a room and hides behind a box there are three man talking,
<o></o>
Man one: so you are ready
<o></o>
Site: yes
<o></o>
Man two: it is time for you to return to the plaint
<o></o>
Man two stabs site though the chest site falls to the ground
<o></o>
Flay begins to shack with rage she did not see site get stabbed but she felt it and herd it she was trying to keep down but she couldn’t help her self she gets up and draws her sword
<o></o>
Game play
Flay runs though a door and felt air she is out
<o></o>
Flay: where am I to go? What am I to do? Well it seems simple now, run
<o></o>
Flay runs off
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
Flay running to tired to continue and falls to the ground
<o></o>
Flay: why is this happening site why what am I to do I don’t know where I am I can’t see and- and I’m talking to myself
<o></o>
Flay begins to cry she was tired she needed to sleep she would think of what to do tomorrow she lay and slept when she awoke and opened her eyes she was able to see just a little bit she could just make out objects she got up glad but why?. Why now?
<o></o>
Flay: the gods have blessed me, this must mean something
<o></o>
This should be a very drastic moment I want this to be the bit when a person falls in love with the game I might need to fix up the wording later on I would hope this would be one of the defining moments of the game this is very important
<o></o>
I would say this is the end of part one
<o></o>
Scripting form 2
<o></o>
Form two will be the point when the game starts to open up and the story start to get more interesting there will be no more in ended battles and the game will be open from now on from now the story will not be lined the person will choose when they want to continue or they can just do side story’s or just do random fighting it will be up to them but there will be bits when the game story will force the player to follow the story but the player will be warned before this happens in ending this in the next two forms all the characters will be put into the story
<o></o>
Flay: i must find the path
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
When flay finds the path she will walk it a map will come up on screen showing the continent and all of the country’s a message will come up on screen it will say this is the map when you walk out of a land you will be taken to this map when you will go to the next land if you decide to exit a country from a town or city you will be given a chance to choose to go to one of the country’s that around the one you are in. this is how travel works later in the game you will be given an item that let you travel where you want
<o></o>
Flay travels the path and crosses the border line into the next country. A rocky waste land flay must travel to the nearest town and rest she was weak
<o></o>
Flay kept travelling across the land a dead land with nothing for flay to eat
<o></o>
Flay: it would be a shame to die here I want to go somewhere that’s worth looking at
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
Almost too weak to walk flay hires music playing and people singing and cheers
Flay started walking forward and the music started getting louder flay kept walking and the music and singing kept getting louder but flay could not see any city’s or light or even people at that point a lot of men come out of no where and attack flay
<o></o>
Game play
<o></o>
The man keep coming and flay was weak to start with flay know she had to keep her sword up to keep alive but she couldn’t keep it up and fell to the ground a man slash into flays chest flay began to feel her live slipping away and then
<o></o>
Flay: I was going to die there and I just let my self go what is live worth live if everything you hold dear has been taken away from you I was ready to for death but-but that changed I had a dream I was on a path leading to a light and I-I I saw site standing in my way and then
<o></o>
Site: why are you here flay you were not you are not to be here I gave you a chances to get away and this is what happened you got your self killed why?
<o></o>
Flay: site I you were killed what was I to do I was lost in my mind and I was lost in a new would I had never seen before
<o></o>
Site: flay turn around do it now Flay!
<o></o>
Flay: I did as site said and
<o></o>
The screen will go white
<o></o>
Flay: from this point my life picked up but life is never an easy ride not for me
<o></o>
Flay wakes in a bed she sat up her body hurt bad she got up and walk across a pretty room and opened the door standing in front of her was site flay hugged him she was so happy
<o></o>
End of flays introduction
The game will change a lot now it won’t be full of killing and blood shed but it will be more dramatic and by the end of this introduction the player will be stick to the game
<o></o>
<o></o>
<o></o>
<o></o>
<o></o>
<o></o>
Ok characters
<o></o>
Main character Flay
<o></o>
Ok so first thing Flay in the first scene as a little girl of age 11
Looks:
I want this game to have an anime fill to it so the eyes will be done in that style so flays eyes are blue
Hair long hair fair blonde
Skin white
Being a young girl her skin will be smooth
<o></o>
Ok now older Flay of age 17
Her eyes will be completely white
Her hair has gone more light brown
Skin type light olive
Skin is still smooth
<o></o>
Next character Site
Green eyes
Hair short brown with ears sticking out the top
Skin type olive
Skin is smooth he has a small cut just under his hair
<o></o>
Next character Fam
Red eyes
Long shoulder length hair black
Skin type white
Skin is smooth
<o></o>
That’s it so far next and last main of the party member coming
<o></o>
Scripting form 1
<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com
fficeffice" /><o></o>The blind she warrior<o></o>
></o>></o>Darkness
A woman’s voice: what was then has past what happened that night started the story of the rest of my life
<o
></o>The darkness turns to light
A small town under attack, men with swords run though the town killing who ever gets in there way. In a small farm just out of town a girls father gets a dagger from a table, the girl aged 11 stands in the room the father hands the dagger to the child.
<o
></o>Father: your sisters are still in the town, I have to go and help the town guard you take this dagger and you go out the back of the farm don’t worry about the town just run and don’t look back do you understand
<o
></o>Girl: y-yes
<o
></o>From a room at the front of the farm comes a crash
<o
></o>Father: there here run now and don’t look back and no crying you are strong
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>In the back barn of the farm
<o
></o>Two town guards walk in the barn
<o
></o>Town guard one: those two man came in here
<o
></o>Two men in black jump down and slit the guards throats
<o
></o>The girl behind a crate try’s to keep herself from screaming
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>The girl runs out the back gate of the farm she looks back and see two man in black running after her the girl keeps running the man pull out some sort of weird weapon the men fire a shot and the ground blows up just behind the girl and she goes flying forward when she opens her eyes everything is black her vision is gone not knowing what to do the girl gets up and keeps running in the direction she was running before she fell over in to the wilderness
<o
></o>After running for a long time the girl falls to the ground tired and filling sick and not knowing where she was and not being able to see she starts to cry and rain starts to fall the camera slowly rises up into the air
<o
></o>The opening film and tutorial of the game is over
<o
></o>The start of the game
<o
></o>A black screen the words come up on screen
<o
></o>6 years later
Her call comes
<o
></o>Film the camera centres in on a room in a building in a large city
In the room a girl of 17 wakes with a close shot on her eyes she opens her eyes her eyes are white with no pupils she gets out of bed and grabs a stick
<o
></o>The stairs out side the room
<o
></o>The girl swings her stick from side to side as she walks down the stairs she walks out the front door
<o
></o>The girl walks down a street, 5 men show them selves the girls sense the man.
<o
></o>Girl: who there
<o
></o>Man one: uh hay sweets and what would you name be
<o
></o>Girl: I am flay why who are you?
<o
></o>Man one: well flay hand over the stick and that purse of gold you have
<o
></o>Man two: yea this is a hold up give what we won’t and you won’t get hurt
<o
></o>Flay: oh stealing off a blind person that is not good you leave now and you won’t get hurt
<o
></o>Man three: what there’s no one here who’s going to help you now give us the staff
<o
></o>Flay: no!
<o
></o>Man one: fine
<o
></o>The man start to draw swords and head towards flay
Flay takes her stick grabs the end, and pulls a sword out
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>After the battle
<o
></o>Flay walks on and turns on to a main street
<o
></o>From across the street an elf boy of 20 yells
<o
></o>Elf: flay you’re here what took you so long
He walks over
<o
></o>Flay: sorry site I had a bit of trouble but I’m here
<o
></o>Site: ok we better hurry and get to the shop
<o
></o>The two of them run off to the south
<o
></o>Site stops flay
<o
></o>Site: what rally happened back there?
<o
></o>Flay: nothing
<o
></o>Site: I see the blood on your hands
<o
></o>Flay: ok I was robbed but I stopped the attackers
<o
></o>Site: oh flay you should have just given them the gold
<o
></o>Flay: why I got rid of them didn’t I
<o
></o>Site: yes but I don’t want to see you get hurt you can’t see you can’t fight the last to battles you were in were just luck it won’t last if someone wants to attack you call on me for help
<o
></o>Flay: you look to little on me site it is not luck that I killed 5 men I can fight site you have to have more trust in me
<o
></o>Site: ok just be careful
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>Out the front of a shop
<o
></o>A man: uh it’s flay and site you two are late
<o
></o>Flay and site: hello moreo
<o
></o>Moreo: you two are taking this package to the next town today I want you to leave in 3 hours it’s a day and a half trip so be prepared come and see me when your ready
<o
></o>Flay and site walk off
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>After a time back with moreo
<o
></o>Moreo: ok I need you to take these crates to the next town site you will be armed I’ve herd of bandit being on the road of late when your ready head over to the west gate follow the road and it will take you to the next town
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>That night sit and flay sit around a camp fire
<o
></o>Site: we should get some sleep
<o
></o>Flay: you herd moreo there are bandits on the road we can’t sleep
<o
></o>Site: it don’t mean both have to stay up flay you get some sleep and I’ll keep watch
<o
></o>Flay: your good to me site I promise I will help you find the people that killed your family
<o
></o>Next day
<o
></o>Site: let’s go we should reach the town by night fall
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>On the road near the town
<o
></o>Smoke raise from the town
<o
></o>Site: flay stop the towns under attack from here it looks like goblins
<o
></o>Flay: we have to go and help come!
<o
></o>Site: no we wait until the goblins have gone lay down flat
<o
></o>Flay: but-
<o
></o>Site: no but flay just get down now
<o
></o>Flay: no site we have to help
<o
></o>Site: get down!
<o
></o>Flay runs towards the town
<o
></o>Site: (yelling) flay get back here (whispers) why won’t she listen
<o
></o>Site starts running after flay
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>In the town in the heat of battle
Site: flay come we to get out
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>The goblins run away the battle for the town is other
<o
></o>Flay walks other to site
<o
></o>Flay: did you see me site I told you I could fight
<o
></o>Site: yes flay just go and take the crates to the warhorse
<o
></o>Flay: but what of you aren’t you going to help
<o
></o>Site: I let you sleep last night you do this for me
<o
></o>Flay: ok
<o
></o>Flay takes a crate and heads for the warehouse
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>Site is standing at the gate
<o
></o>Site: come flay we leave
<o
></o>Flay: why are you in such a hurry
<o
></o>Site: the goblins mite come back now come
<o
></o>Flay: fine (whisper) why is he in such a bad mood
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>That night flay and site sit around a fire
<o
></o>Flay: I can’t wait to tell Moreo about the battle
<o
></o>Site: no
<o
></o>Flay: hu why
<o
></o>Site: flay do you remember when we first meet
<o
></o>Flay: yes five years ago you were the one who found me after my town was attacked you took me in and helped me
<o
></o>Site: 6 years ago do you remember the two man that were running after you did you ever think of what happened to them
<o
></o>Flay: yes I stopped running and they never came for me
<o
></o>Site: it was me who stopped them and came for you
<o
></o>Flay: i thankyou, if you did not save me I would not be here right now so are you going somewhere with this
<o
></o>Site: when I took you to the town Moreo took you he said to me this girl is young and she has lost her site. you saved her no one else lived in the town I think this girl was ment to live and I think you were ment to find her she has no where to go you will look after her this girl has a great power I can fill it you will be her guardian you will put her life in front of yours
<o
></o>Flay: what how come you never told me this before
<o
></o>Site: I fort you knowing I was your carer would be a bit weird so I never did
<o
></o>Flay: ok so why are you telling me this now-
<o
></o>Site cuts in
<o
></o>Site: today I told you to stay back but you went anyway you didn’t listen to me if anything were to happen I would be to blame
<o
></o>Flay: like I said you think to little of me I can look after myself
<o
></o>Site: no flay I want you to promise as a friend you will listen the next time I tell you to do something
<o
></o>Flay: ok if it means that much to you I will listen
<o
></o>Site: thankyou now get some sleep
<o
></o>Flay slept and had a dream she dreamt of running from the farm and of her sisters and her father site was the only person she had left
<o
></o>Flay awoke
<o
></o>Flay: (whisper) someday I will find the people that stormed my town and kill them
<o
></o>Flay dose not know if it is day or night and if site is awake
<o
></o>Flay: hey site are you awake he was to keep watch hey site wake up site
<o
></o>Flay starts to use her stick to look for where site is sleeping
<o
></o>Flay: site where are you he must be gone but why this could be bad I’ve got to get to the town if I use my stick to walk down the road I should be alright
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>Flay swings her stick and hits stone
Flay: I’m here, I can do things myself
<o
></o>Flay waits for the guards to ask her entry but their voices never came flay did not want to wait so she opened the gate and walked inside she herd screaming and sword clashing she pulled the sword out of her stick
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>Flay: did I come the right way or am I back at the town the goblins attacked it must be, how could an enemy get in my town (yells) site moreo hey where are you
<o
></o>Two man run up to flay and smash a sword across her head she’s been knocked out the man drag her off
<o
></o>Screen goes black flay awake to the voice of site
<o
></o>Site: your awake
<o
></o>Flay: site what happened where are we
<o
></o>Site: sorry I left you flay I was taken here man I was hopping you would be alright
<o
></o>Flay: where is here?
<o
></o>Site: focon dungeon and if you want to know why, I don’t know. Moreo is here to and so are other people from the city
<o
></o>Flay: I know I was taken from the city but what’s going on
<o
></o>Site: flay where going to escape I’ve got a simple plan you can wounder around if you want but there are some pretty bad people around here
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>Flay walks in to a room and hides behind a box there are three man talking,
<o
></o>Man one: so you are ready
<o
></o>Site: yes
<o
></o>Man two: it is time for you to return to the plaint
<o
></o>Man two stabs site though the chest site falls to the ground
<o
></o>Flay begins to shack with rage she did not see site get stabbed but she felt it and herd it she was trying to keep down but she couldn’t help her self she gets up and draws her sword
<o
></o>Game play
Flay runs though a door and felt air she is out
<o
></o>Flay: where am I to go? What am I to do? Well it seems simple now, run
<o
></o>Flay runs off
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>Flay running to tired to continue and falls to the ground
<o
></o>Flay: why is this happening site why what am I to do I don’t know where I am I can’t see and- and I’m talking to myself
<o
></o>Flay begins to cry she was tired she needed to sleep she would think of what to do tomorrow she lay and slept when she awoke and opened her eyes she was able to see just a little bit she could just make out objects she got up glad but why?. Why now?
<o
></o>Flay: the gods have blessed me, this must mean something
<o
></o>This should be a very drastic moment I want this to be the bit when a person falls in love with the game I might need to fix up the wording later on I would hope this would be one of the defining moments of the game this is very important
<o
></o>I would say this is the end of part one
<o
></o>Scripting form 2
<o
></o>Form two will be the point when the game starts to open up and the story start to get more interesting there will be no more in ended battles and the game will be open from now on from now the story will not be lined the person will choose when they want to continue or they can just do side story’s or just do random fighting it will be up to them but there will be bits when the game story will force the player to follow the story but the player will be warned before this happens in ending this in the next two forms all the characters will be put into the story
<o
></o>Flay: i must find the path
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>When flay finds the path she will walk it a map will come up on screen showing the continent and all of the country’s a message will come up on screen it will say this is the map when you walk out of a land you will be taken to this map when you will go to the next land if you decide to exit a country from a town or city you will be given a chance to choose to go to one of the country’s that around the one you are in. this is how travel works later in the game you will be given an item that let you travel where you want
<o
></o>Flay travels the path and crosses the border line into the next country. A rocky waste land flay must travel to the nearest town and rest she was weak
<o
></o>Flay kept travelling across the land a dead land with nothing for flay to eat
<o
></o>Flay: it would be a shame to die here I want to go somewhere that’s worth looking at
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>Almost too weak to walk flay hires music playing and people singing and cheers
Flay started walking forward and the music started getting louder flay kept walking and the music and singing kept getting louder but flay could not see any city’s or light or even people at that point a lot of men come out of no where and attack flay
<o
></o>Game play
<o
></o>The man keep coming and flay was weak to start with flay know she had to keep her sword up to keep alive but she couldn’t keep it up and fell to the ground a man slash into flays chest flay began to feel her live slipping away and then
<o
></o>Flay: I was going to die there and I just let my self go what is live worth live if everything you hold dear has been taken away from you I was ready to for death but-but that changed I had a dream I was on a path leading to a light and I-I I saw site standing in my way and then
<o
></o>Site: why are you here flay you were not you are not to be here I gave you a chances to get away and this is what happened you got your self killed why?
<o
></o>Flay: site I you were killed what was I to do I was lost in my mind and I was lost in a new would I had never seen before
<o
></o>Site: flay turn around do it now Flay!
<o
></o>Flay: I did as site said and
<o
></o>The screen will go white
<o
></o>Flay: from this point my life picked up but life is never an easy ride not for me
<o
></o>Flay wakes in a bed she sat up her body hurt bad she got up and walk across a pretty room and opened the door standing in front of her was site flay hugged him she was so happy
<o
></o>End of flays introduction
The game will change a lot now it won’t be full of killing and blood shed but it will be more dramatic and by the end of this introduction the player will be stick to the game
<o
></o><o
></o><o
></o><o
></o><o
></o><o
></o>Ok characters
<o
></o>Main character Flay
<o
></o>Ok so first thing Flay in the first scene as a little girl of age 11
Looks:
I want this game to have an anime fill to it so the eyes will be done in that style so flays eyes are blue
Hair long hair fair blonde
Skin white
Being a young girl her skin will be smooth
<o
></o>Ok now older Flay of age 17
Her eyes will be completely white
Her hair has gone more light brown
Skin type light olive
Skin is still smooth
<o
></o>Next character Site
Green eyes
Hair short brown with ears sticking out the top
Skin type olive
Skin is smooth he has a small cut just under his hair
<o
></o>Next character Fam
Red eyes
Long shoulder length hair black
Skin type white
Skin is smooth
<o
></o>That’s it so far next and last main of the party member coming
<o
></o>
Last edited: