Song: Dark Story

[Sephiroth's Will]

This Is A Song I Wrote The Other Day Its Still A Little Rough But I Wanted Some Feedback On It...some People May Find It A Little DarK Or Maybe Disturbing But I Like It...so Here It IS

PAGES TURNING IN MY HEAD,
FANTASIES ARE FILLED WITH DREAD,
SOON ENOUGH YOULL ALL BE DEAD,
DARK STORY.

SEEING THINGS THA CANT BE SEEN,
HEAVEN HELL AND IN BETWEEN,
SO DISTORTED SO UNCLEAN,
DARK STORY.

COME WITH ME,
COME WITH ME,
COME WITH ME,
( SCREAM )

COME WITH ME AND YOU WILL BE,
INSIDE MY DARK STORY,
COME WITH ME AND YOU WILL SEE,
ETERNAL BLASPHEMY.

YOU FEEL ITS ALL YOUR HEART CAN TAKE,
AS YOUR WILL BEGINS TO BREAK,
THIS EVIL FEELING YOU CANT SHAKE ,
DARK STORY

BLOOD AND BILE DEATH AND ROT,
FILTH AND MAGGOTS DIRT AND SNOT,
A FAIRYTALE THIS IS NOT,
DARK STORY.

COME WITH ME,
COME WITH ME,
COME WITH ME,
( SCREAM )

COME WITH ME AND YOU WILL BE,
INSIDE MY DARK STORY,
COME WITH ME AND YOU WILL SEE,
ETERNAL BLASPHEMY,

FEELINGS TURN INSINCERE,
ALL YOUR COURAGE FADES TO FEAR,
NOW YOU KNOW YOUR END IS NEAR,
DARK STORY.

CORPSES LIFELESS FULL OF MOLD,
AS ITS STARTING TO UNFOLD,
OUR DARK STORY HAS BEEN TOLD,
DARK STORY.

COME WITH ME,
COME WITH ME,
COME WITH ME,
( SCREAM )

COME WITH ME AND YOU WILL BE,
INSIDE MY DARK STORY,
COME WITH ME AND YOU WILL SEE,
ETERNAL BLASPHEMY.

COME WITH ME,
COME WITH ME,
COME WITH ME,
( SCREAM ) END

 

[Serah]

This is definantly dark and disturbing, but the rhyming aspects are very well done. Did you write this because of what you're feeling?

 

[Sephiroth's Will]

This is definantly dark and disturbing, but the rhyming aspects are very well done. Did you write this because of what you're feeling?

YEAH I JUST BROKE UP WITH MY LONG TIME GIRLFRIEND...SHE WAS CHEATING ON ME WITH MY COUSIN....THATS MY INSPIRATION...SUX HUH

 

[Serah]

While it may suck and times get tough it's always good to get your feelings out on paper somehow, whether it be drawing, writing, painting, it eventually has to come out. That's what helps one heal. I'm sorry to hear of your break up and hope you feel better soon

 

[Sephiroth's Will]

While it may suck and times get tough it's always good to get your feelings out on paper somehow, whether it be drawing, writing, painting, it eventually has to come out. That's what helps one heal. I'm sorry to hear of your break up and hope you feel better soon

WELL BASICALLY I WASTED 6 YEARS OF MY LIFE ON IT SO IT MAY TAKE A WHILE GRRRRRRRRRR I HATE STUFF LIKE THIS