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Well I was going to write a book but I kept finding things wrong with it, editing it, writing more then finding something else i didn't like and changing that. All-in-all... i'm just going to post it here in chapters. It's about... well... you can see for yourself (meheh I've caught you in a cliffhanger *evil laugh*:devil: )

:sneaky: PROLOGUE:sneaky:

A figure popped up on-screen. "hello, John" he said. "How was your killing spree?"
"quite enjoyable, Rick, do i have a chance to finally meet you?"
"yes, actually, i'm waiting in St. Louis. aren't you supposed to be on-time?"
"well normally i am, but with these circumstances i'd like to get a few things cleard away"
"why, some last minute wishes before you die?"
"actually, i was going to send a letter to your parents saying how sorry i am that you died. By the time the letter's there it will be too late"
"heh. That's how you always were, wasn't it? always trying to kill something. Well i've got a message for you. Duck"
A bullet zinged right into John's head. He laughed. The bullet seemed to pull itself back out, and was shot at the same speed right into the head of the sniper.
"really, Rick, haven't you got around that type of thing?" he sneered.
"Not really, it was worth a shot"
"terrible Pun. now why don't we--"
"I see you!" The building John was in litirally turned itself inside-out, and he went plummeting to the ground.
"Yes, well, i guess the fight's on!" With those last words, he jumped down and started throwing white balls of pure light at Rick, who just stood there dissipating them in darkness. This went on so vigerously that he backed all the way down to the museam under the Arch.
"Game's up, Jefferson won't like what i'm about to do!" Rick said, and he pushed John into the elevator. He jumped up and grabbed the bottom of the elevator as it shot up to the top. There was some heated fighting up in the top of the tremendous building, but eventually Nick grabbed his adversary and plummeted both of them out the window. They tried to save themselves but instead just got more tied up on each other.
crash! They both landed and dropped a crater in the ground. A wisp of darkness was carried up and away with the wind, while a globe of light was pulled halfway into the Misissippi River.

The watcher smiled. "now is the end of their story" he said, "and the beginning of two more men's stories, which will change the outcome of the War".
Not so far away, Jim Ritston wondered why he had woken up on the top of a building.
"darn, why do things like this always happen?" he grumbled. "First I get stabbed in the arm with a black spear that looked like it got pulled out of Frodo, and now I feel like Vaan came along and did a quickening on my apartment!


Well i hope you like it 'cause i left a lot of loose ends on the end!
 
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