Braveheart
Lone Wolf
I open this thread for my poetry. I will here from time to time add new poems and songs. So critique my poetry and tell me what I have to improve or what I have to edit. Tell me what do you think of my poems and what is good at them.
Someday a Dream will End
Someday a dream will end and hope will be lost and forgotten
Hope is all that it is in this time of dream
Destiny is ours to choose where shall we walk in this time of dream
Will it be path of dream or path of destiny
What shall we choose it's only depends what is in our hearts
We shall decide when and where our dream will end
Will it continue to live in our hearts or it will dissapear
Shall we keep it in our hearts and remember it forever
Or it shall dissapear and be forgotten
One day when when we dissapear shall our dream be remembered or forgotten
It's only up to those who could live our dream......................
Hope is all that it is in this time of dream
Destiny is ours to choose where shall we walk in this time of dream
Will it be path of dream or path of destiny
What shall we choose it's only depends what is in our hearts
We shall decide when and where our dream will end
Will it continue to live in our hearts or it will dissapear
Shall we keep it in our hearts and remember it forever
Or it shall dissapear and be forgotten
One day when when we dissapear shall our dream be remembered or forgotten
It's only up to those who could live our dream......................
Grey Wolf Chases the Moon
Beyond the moon lies a place of flowers and crystal lakes,
A place where apeace and salvation is all that is,
Shining tears leading a wolf towards it,
A path of thorns has to be cleared,
And so the moonlight will shine.
Shining stars can lead the way,
But only those that belive,
In a place called Paradise,
Paradise, a place where light never fades,
Grey Wolf chases the moon to find what is beyond the light.
The mystery that has to be solved,
That only a wolf can find Paradise,
Chasing a moon and following a shining stars,
Leading a way to Paradise
And so the grey wolf chases the moon.............
Beyond the moon lies a place of flowers and crystal lakes,
A place where apeace and salvation is all that is,
Shining tears leading a wolf towards it,
A path of thorns has to be cleared,
And so the moonlight will shine.
Shining stars can lead the way,
But only those that belive,
In a place called Paradise,
Paradise, a place where light never fades,
Grey Wolf chases the moon to find what is beyond the light.
The mystery that has to be solved,
That only a wolf can find Paradise,
Chasing a moon and following a shining stars,
Leading a way to Paradise
And so the grey wolf chases the moon.............
Endless Dream
Endless Dream that has to be fulfilled
A dream of forgotten place, a place long lost
A place that is hidden within your heart
Through the frozen rivers and snowy mountains
I will pass in order to realize my dream.
Through the endless path of thorns I will walk alone
Even through darkness I will walk
With the light in my heart that shining
With a sword that I'm wielding
I will defeat anyone that is standing on my way.
A dream of light that never fades
A dream of Paradise
A dream of a place that is long lost forgotten
A dream that will be realized
It's up to us to decide which way shall we walk and shall we realize our dreams.
A dream of forgotten place, a place long lost
A place that is hidden within your heart
Through the frozen rivers and snowy mountains
I will pass in order to realize my dream.
Through the endless path of thorns I will walk alone
Even through darkness I will walk
With the light in my heart that shining
With a sword that I'm wielding
I will defeat anyone that is standing on my way.
A dream of light that never fades
A dream of Paradise
A dream of a place that is long lost forgotten
A dream that will be realized
It's up to us to decide which way shall we walk and shall we realize our dreams.
