hibari_kyoya ff7

hibari_kyoya

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Name
hibari_kyoya
Alignment – evil neutral

Race – human kyoya blood line tough skin, good immune system and cell repair

Gender – Male

Age – 21

Appearance – height 6,4 and weighs 157
he is tall
, thin yet balanced body muscle, big feet and has long legs much like a basketball player
black jew-fro 3 inches from scalp (big curly hair), brown eyes, small nose, a tan completion, and he doesn't smile much but grins and smirks

Attire –
Black leather jacket with golden brown buttons over his white undershirt with black pants, black muti strap shoes with metal plate concealed in the soul, and black leather gloves made for gripping

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Personality – a mean person likes to cut people down. makes fun of people. usually also has a quick temper. cold on the outside and mean on the outside. but very fun loving if your his close friend

First Impression – he doesn't talk much i approached him and said with a big smile hello. he scowled back at me and turn away. he was with a few people and a walked up again hey i said cheerfully hey there then he remarked "what" as if he took a bite of happiness out of the air

Strength – ok strength can make a small dent in a brick wall would say 50/500 damage can lift about 120.

Speed – can run 8 miles an hour very good at dodging and good at step stepping even while running

Endurance – good endurance can take many hits has taken 13 chocobo rams in a sitting and can run at full speed for five minutes

Reflexes – very good reflexes can move within a second shot of an ak-47 can tell as you move start to move your hand he is already on instinct to move then attack accordingly

Fighting Style – passive attacking and countering will use dirty tricks in tight situations

Weapons – 2 hard wood black painted 19 inch tonfa rubber grip and 1 inch diameter 1 and 1/2 pounds each

pushing mana through the tonfa can make the back shoot off and reveal it's blade

meat tenderizer spikes on the back and front of tonfa (breaks endurance and makes sores on the skin on exact point of contact)
holstered in loops on pants facing up.
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a black katana about a 3 foot blade left waist holster and a sub machine gun (semi, full auto and burst fire 5) four clips of 30 right waist holster

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Armour – t shirt length Kevlar vest with chain mail laced inside fabric and and thick Kevlar pants

Abilities – has a good immune system, great intuition, loses less blood, and heals fast and can use lightning attacks too and wind skip uses the wind to push him self lowering air drag to zero it's like he slowly teleports or flashes to a certain place(cost a little more to rush at fast speed forming th wind) of them the best can levitat him self into the air with wind mana (the wind rotating around him is already very sharp so it takes a lot to form but can absorb most mana back) and can form wind mana around aweapon or just your arm (costs a lot of mana 30/100 for arm 10/100 for weapon but can absorb most back but harder to recycle mana from a weapon almost impossible from a bullet but costs a lot less mana 3/100 for five bullets)

Magic – wind magic can manipulate wind (takes low mana can absorb mana back from own attacks) and use it to cut(costs more to condense to cut) fire condensed wind balls(costs 7/100 mana even more to sharpen the energy) or spit wind needles that don't go very far(costs 5/100 mana with the wind element they are normally sharp but need good refining)

History – endured weapon training in his clan after the shinra war and he set out itno the world after sephiroth was defeated hoping to abtain power of the same magnitude.

as a kid the only weapons that stuck were tonfa and his basic sword. after 13 he took fire arms training and picked up the speedy and resourceful sub machine gun. hoping to gain power for the clan he was sent out with the best of intentions and took all the rest of the members that were not sent out for power the whole clan decided to set out and see what matria and weapons they could find and train.

his whole motivation in school was power he beat kids up because he had a keen
instinct and good reflexs in a world of power starting Early not even knowing about the world fighting by midle school he was a champ a little fish in a small pond so he beat up every kid in his class and got expelled to move to another school and he met his match some one as good as him then he pushed the clan for weapon training. then his rival moved away then he emerced himself in hard training instead of normal school. aways striving to move forward with power in a torn world.
 
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It's a very basic bio, it seems to be highly lacking in detail in some sections such as his appearance. His appearance seems very generic. Why don't you try making them more accurate and paragraphing them, for example: He is 6 Foot tall, most of his height comes from his long legs and he has a very slim body meaning he weighs only around (enter whatever eight here). He has brown eyes and black curly hair etc etc.

Try and make his strength, speed, reflexes and endurance more detailed also. Don't just say average because we wouldn't know what average is to the Kyoya bloodline would we?

Magic Section: Every magic takes energy, try and organise it so it's easier to read and say how much energy the spells take out of you.

History: big biiig problem. If you're gonna go for an RPB character then I highly recommend you make it a LOT more detailed. A few simple sentences is very little to put in something that requires a lot of thought and creativity. Also, though I don't believe that putting the character in the FF7 world you should at least say what his life has been like etc.

Do that and I'll approve you but until them

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It's getting better. However you still need to detail your strength, speed, reflexes and endurance more along with your history, do that and you'll be approved but until then

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done but i don't know what rp type means and hitsuguy is my favorite bleach character
 
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ORPG Means it's an Original Role Play thats made up completely from imagination. For example The Institution Of Silver Lake is one of these as it is not based on anything that has already been made.

UORG however is something that is based of a movie/game/book etc. For instance FF7

RPB is basically Role Playing Battle which is usually a battle between RP characters

EDIT: Oh yeah and I think you've pretty much sorted everything out so congratulations as you are now:

[APPROVED]
 
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