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Name – Silvius Apullu

Title – The Winged Duality

Alignment – Good

Race – Human

Gender – Male

Age – 19

Appearance – Silvius has medium leanght dirty blonde hair that is slightly messy but it is almost always clean, so his hair does look washed and cleaned but it also looks like he didn't bother to brush or comb it... His hair sometimes drops down over his outstandingly amazing looking blue eyes, it is almost a shame that sometimes his hair does that so that people can't see them because Silvius's eyes are deffinetly one of his most outstanding attractive features.

His face is a very innocent looking face, it is a face that is able to shine his innocence and naivity and at the same time concele his darker mor serious side, and although his face has a sort of cuteness to it, his features border between elegant and homliness.

He has pale white complexion... It isn't quite ghost white, he does look like he has a some life in him, however he doesn't bother trying to tan or whatever so his skin stays its natural white color.

Silvius has a nicley toned body... Do to him being a pretty active and playful person his body is usually in an okay condition, he doesn't have alot of fat on his body, yet he does excersise enough to keep some muscle on him so that he can be pretty agile and strong enough to use his equipment.

Attire – Silvius usually wears a pair of blue jeans that fit comfortable around his waist with a bit of room around the legs so that he can move around better but still not have to worry about his pants coming down on him. For his shoes he usually just wears his good pair of dirty white sneakers that fit comfortable yet at the same time preform well when he is doing something active.

For his torso he usually doesn't wear anything to flashy, most of the time he wears a band t-shirt with a logo or soemthing from one of the band he likes, it usually a darker color that in a way clashes with his cheerful and naive side of his personality.

Also on his upper body he wears a black zip-up hoodie unzipped with a unique design of two white angel wings spread wide open on the back of the hoodie... It is a very exstravagant design that is only custom to his sweatshirt, it is one of a kind and nobody else has anything like it, but at the same time the design is almost just kind of plain seens how its only black and white...

Personality – Silvius has almost a sort of split personality... That is part of the reason his title is The Winged Duality... Duality meaning that he has two oppostite sides to him almost. On one hand Silvius can be a very nice and funny person who enjoys having fun with friends, playing music, and other enjoyable things. He is a good friend and he treats others with respect and kindness. He enjoys joking around and being naive, others may mistake this naivity as stupidy, which it is not, it is just a way for Silvius to just have some fun in his life...

But Silvius also has a very serious and darker side... He has a haunted past which still gets to him sometimes, even though he has felt some resolve with it... But still he has many philosophies on life and always has some good words for others, but when he gets in his darker side, if somebody has done something to hurt somebody else or to piss him off he feels that there must be some form of justice, also if he feels he is doing the right thing, even if it might hurt somebody in the end he will always follow through...

First Impression – A first Impression of Silvius would lead you to believe that he is all fun and games... Which in a way he is, he is almost always fun-loving and having a goodtime, and probably if you were to ask something he would just respond with some sort of harmless witty joke, just for laughs...

Strength – Although Silvius doesn't look that strong he can pack quite a punch... He can lift a large table over and he could lift a large dog or something around that size up over his head... If he were to punch a brick wall he would probably end up putting a small little crack in it, crumbling a little tiny bit of the wall, and he would probably end up hurting his hand by doing so...

Speed – Silvius is pretty fast, more so fast than he is strong at least... If he were to have a ten second build up he could probably keep up with a fast animal such as a dog... He can side step at the drop of a dime with great speed. His attack are very quick and also well thought out.

Endurance – Silvius has trained most of his skills... Endurance is a particular one that he has put some time into, as he plays alot of sports and such so he needs to have a large stamina and he needs to be able to take a beating do to his Hero like duties, fighting muggers and what not... If he were to get hit by a strong punch it would probably hurt him but it wouldn't be enough to knock him out or make him dizzy... He has a large stanima and if he paces himself right he could probably hold up in battle for a good 25 minutes...

Reflexes – His reflexes are particulary honed as well... He is able to sense being attacked about as soon as it starts to happen and he will be able to react almost as soon as he realizes it... He couldn't dodge a bullet but he would be able to jump behind cover or use some sort of cover before he was hit probably...

Fighting Style – Silvius's fighting style is not a specific fighting style... Instead Silvius simply adjusts his fighting style to his oppenent and his enviroment. He plans out almost every move before he takes it, and he is always cautious with his attacks. That meaning he doesn't just rush into a battle without thinking, instead he waits for the right moment and then he strikes with a well thought out attack.

Weapons

Hands Of Justice -
A pair of osmium crafted gaunlents crafted by Silvius himself... First things first these gloves are very duarible do to the material they are crafted from, in fact, the streangth of the material adds to the streangth of Silvius himself which added togather can pack quite a punch... But that isn't the unique thing about the gaunlents... You see on both gaunlents there are power cells charged with electric energy... of course the energy doesn't last for ever and they do need to be charged, however when they are charged they are able to do a multitude of things.

Some of the things these highly durrable gaunlents allow are... The energy can charge the gloves itself, electrifying them, which could make for a rather ShOcKiNg punch (pun intended). The gloves can send charges of electricity into other things electrifying them as well... But probably the most unique thing about the gloves are the ability to harness the energy at such a level where it can use the raw electricty of itself shooting bolts of lighting are charging up balls of lightning...



Armour

The Wings:
The Wings is a highly technologic crafted piece of armor... It consists of a chestplate and two large wings that look like the wings depicted on angels. Both the wings and the chestplate are crafted out of pure solid osmium, a metal twice as dense as lead, however the pieces of metal are thin so that they do not way down Silvius too much, allowing him to be quick and agile...

The armor is polished and still retains a sort of steel color... Except for the embroideries in gold that make the newly developed machinery and armor look like an ancient relic...

The Wings can take almost all sorts of damage, also the wings allow for flight.

Abilities – Silvius does not have any abilities do to the fact that he relies almost entirely on his equipment and basic skills of combat...

Magic – Silvius is based in a world where magic doesn't exist there for it wouldn't make sense for him to have magic really...

Other Skills – Sadly he doesn't have any Other Skills either.... Honestly I can see this isn't for a lack of creativity just simply put I wanted to make this character somewhat realistic yet at the same time strong enough to withstand in battles...

History – Throughout Silvius's life he had his ups and downs just like any other person in the world, but for the most part his life was pretty good... He had an okay family life his parents were divorced, but that never really bothered Silvius that much, in fact, he was kind of glad it happened, it allowed him to see two different sides of life, which in the end was good because it made Silvius a sympathetic person and it allowed him to relate to others... When Silvius was in school he met some people who later on in his school years came to be his best friends, they all shared a common love for music and so, they started a band... They had played for four years togather throughout all their highscool years and when they all turned eighteen they decided to go on a trip to see a concert with a band they all loved... This trip was about to turn into the worst night of Silvius's life... On their way to the concert they decided to take an shortcut down an alley way... When they got to the end of the alley the were confronted by to men with guns, the men asked for all the money Silvius and his friends had on them, having no choice they all handed over their money, and then afterwards the muggers shot down Silvius's friends, and as they were about to kill Silvius a police car was herd coming so the muggers ran off, and so Silvius had survived... This night would forever burn its terrible image in his brain, but still Silvius had to continue with his life, he went to college, and he had to abandon his dreams, but he swore that he would have vengance on those who killed his friends, their faces still imprinted in his mind... In college Silvius discovered new found information on all sorts of things, but one day Silvius had an idea, with the knowledge he gained he would do something great... He spent days and nights working on some inventions and ideas... so that when they were finished he could have vengance on those who killed his friends.

After he had finished his major invention... The Wings... He went hunted down the people who had killed his friends, they were easy to find seens how he had been tracking them for a while... When he had came face to face with both they new why he was here so they tried to shoot him, but Silvius simply just defended himself with his invention... They realized that they had no hope of killing him so the pleaded for forgiveness they said to him they were sorry... Tell them you are sorry is all Silvius could think, but what they had done could not be forgiven... Silvius killed both of them... From that day on Silvius vowed to fight for justice and help others now that he had put vengance behind him... He will continue his life as just another person trying to have fun and make it through life intill he is needed by others...
 
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Name: Todd Ikkin

Title: The Loyal Soldier

Alignment: Good

Race: Human

Gender: Male

Age: 21

Appearance: Todd has golden blonde hair, just like his sister's, however his hair is much shorter than hers, for his does not even reach down to his shoulders... See cause not only do Todd and Newo share their common loyalty to others they also share a same astounding beauty... Todd is a very hansom young man with a dark complexion that being said his skin is till white... He has amazing blue eyes that could charm snakes...

His build is quite nice as well... Do to him being in the Rebel Army he must stay fit at all times, which means that Todd's body is very well kept (that of a soldier) and his muscular features have wooed many of ladies to fall for him...



Attire: He wears a short sleeved white t-shirt... honestly nothing special about it, although he wears a sleeveless tan jacket over his white t-shirt... the jacket has a few pockets that he keeps some of his petty items in such as cash and other...

He wears a regular pair of blue jeans, a little tattered and dirt covered, possibly from battle or maybe even from just horsing around a little bit, honestly you could never tell with Todd... On his feet he wears a pair of army style boots with soles that give him great traction for battle, but the boots are still light enough to give him the agility he needs...

Personality: Todd Ikkin, like his younger sister Newo Ikkin, is fiercely loyal to those he cares about... He will stick by the ones he cares about and those who need him even if it may cost him his life... He is very reliable person, he always keeps to the promises that he makes with others and strives to fufil the promises that he has made to himself. Todd is brave and will not back down in the face of danger, however, Todd is also an intelligent person who knows when backing off is the right thing to do.

Todd is also very friendly... Those who meet him are almost always suddenly spellbound by his amazing personality... He keeps things fun almost all the time and likes to always view the bright side of things.... However he is still realistic and does not blind his self with ideas of a false reality where things are perfect, because Todd knows that nothing is perfect, he knows that even he himself has flaws...

Todd realizes that sometimes his trust can also be a downfall... In a world as corrupt as his, it isn't always such a good quality to be a very trusting person... People are deceiving and although Todd can see past most charades for some reason he will still put his trust in people...

Hope, another flawed virtue... Todd always has hope in his heart even in the most unlikely of situations... Hope can be a good thing but on the other hand when you have hope for something, it hurts only more than it would have before... He tries to stay realistic, but he doesn't let the realism of whatever situation it might be get his hope down entirely.

Although Todd is a very kind person at heart... If you do anything to hurt somebody he loves or cares about... His heart will fill with vengence, a dark seed will grow... His heart will grow cold towards whomever hurt his loved one and he will be relentless and unemotional towards them... Cold and unforgiving...

First Impression: At the first moment you meet Todd it as if he puts some sort of spell on you... He will be very nice to you and he will almost always been in a good mood... When you first meet Todd a sort of warmness radiates off from him, from that first moment you can instantly tell just by looking into his eyes that he is a good guy inside and out.

When engaging in conversation he will probably greet you with a sweet and simple hello, and then he might proceed to give you a compliment or say something that might cheer you up or brighten your day.

Strength: Do to his position in the Rebel Army he must always keep a fit muscular body... this means that Todd can deal out quite a painful blow... He can usually lift an object such as a large person his size over his head, with only a little bit of struggle (of course he couldn't hold the person above his head forever or anything like that).

When Todd delivers a punch you can place your bet on it hurting somebody or something badly... First of all Todd was taught to deliver his blows in the weak points of his enemies, and that combined with his overall strength could possibly break a bone if the hit was perfect and no kind of armor covered the area punched...

Todd's punch could send a small fissure down a brick wall... This being said, keep in mind he uses a large metal gauntlet on one of his arms which helps amplify the intensity of the punch.

Endurance: Being a soldier this is a specific skill honed by Todd, he has fought in battles before and he has trained vigorously to enhance his endurance... He can take quite a beating and simply being punched or kicked in any manner won't hurt Todd that much at all, cause he knows how to take a blow....

Also Todd can keep up in battle for a good hour without being drained completely of his strength, he has fought in a few battles before where he has had to hold up against many enemies and do to that and training his isn't tired out easily.

Speed: Todd's speed is pretty astounding... He can run up to speed with a bull after a ten second build up... Also he is skilled in evading attacks and can sidestep very easily to remove himself from dangerous attacks.

Reflexes: Todd has very sharp reflexes that can see an attack coming almost as soon as it is coming at him, and it doesn't take long after that for him to react wisely towards the attack... He couldn't dodge a bullet however he could probably manage to guard himself against a bullet somehow, by taking cover, or using a shield of some sort.



History: Todd Ikkin is the older brother of New Ikkin... He was born three years before her and when he grew up with Newo he always played the part of the wise and helping older brother, the protective and loving brother that other young girls wished they had... When he was still just a young teenage boy, he attended Rye Cooper High School... Just like his sister he was a very popular person, however he didn't let that popularity get to his head and he was still always kind to others... In fact he actually was a person who stood up for younger kids who were made fun of alot in school. A particular boy he always tried to stick up for was a boy by the name of Claudio Killigan, who in later years became his younger sisters boyfriend.

After he graduated he made a decision that would send his life flowing in a different direction... He told his family that he was leaving... That for the peace of the planets he would set out and join Mariah Antillareas' Rebel Army in hopes that he could help end Wilhelm Ryan's reign... So he joined the ranks of the Rebel Army as young man and after working hard many years and staying loyal he managed to work his way up to the position of one of Mariah's finest soldiers... In fact he worked side by side with Jesse and his IRO-Bot family in ranks... and so he continues to fight the battle... occasionaly stopping in to say high to the ones he loved and left behind back in his old town....

Weapon:
After Todd worked his way up to Jesse's position Jesse, being the inventor and creator that he is, decided to craft a few weapons for Todd that would help him with most troubles that he encountered, three very special weapons that were created with a little inspiration from him and his siblings...

Gauntlet of Beast: A large steel gauntlet that covers all the way up to his elbow... It is crafted finely and it was engraved with what look to be claw marks from some large beast, of course they were only put there by Jesse but never the less, it is an original design not present on any other piece of equipment in the Rebel Army...

This gauntlet when activated will first and for most... Start to glow a bright green color on the marking that looked as if they were left there by the claw of a great beast, and whilst the marking glow green, a large yet neat looking sword type blade will protrude from the the gauntlet... the blade is very sharp, it is astoundingly durable, and it is around 4 feet long...

However, the marking can also glow a dark blood red... and when that happens the blade becomes deformed and other shorter blade will protrude from the gauntlet making a scary barrage of blades that could tear almost any opponent to shreds, however this form cause a bit of pain to Todd's right arm, which is the arm the gauntlet is placed on...

Ring Of Inferno: A small steel ring that has the designs of a ring of fire that encircles the ring... Other than that design there is nothing very astounding about the ring... well its appearance that is...

The ring when first activated the design on the ring will start to glow a sort of orange color... when this happens Todd is aloud to manipulate fire to an extent, he can send fire projectiles and he can other minor tricks with the flames produced...

However when the design glows a dark blood red... Todd is aloud to cover parts of his body in flames to inflict burn damage in the way of physical attacks and increase the power of his flames magnitude by a lot... He even has the power to engulf his entire body in flames... however when he uses these blood red abilities of the ring he will take quite a bit of damage afterwards, inflicting pain on him...

Headband of Knowledge: A steel headband with the design of a thousand tiny dragonflies...

When activated the dragonfly designs will glow a light blue color... when this happens Todd can access assortments of telekinetic powers on a small level such as, telekinetic movement of objects, mind reading, and future sight...

However if the dragonflies glow a blood red color... These same telekinetic powers will be amplified and can be used on a much larger scale, massively increasing Todd's brain power... However when this is used it does damage to Todd's mind that can end up being very severe and maybe even crippling.
 
Since the 2nd one is unfinnished, I will not look at it yet.

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Name – Silvius Apullu

Title – The Winged Duality
Perhaps a brief explanation to why he got this name?
Even though it is detailed in the Personality tab, if you don't want to explain it here as well at least point the readers to where it is explained.
Example: The Winged Duality (Details in Personality)

Alignment – Good

Race – Human

Gender – Male

Age – 19

Appearance – Silvius has medium leanght dirty blonde hair that is slightly messy but it is almost always clean, so his hair does look washed and cleaned but it also looks like he didn't bother to brush or comb it... His hair sometimes drops down over his outstandingly amazing looking blue eyes, it is almost a shame that sometimes his hair does that so that people can't see them because Silvius's eyes are deffinetly one of his most outstanding attractive features.

His face is a very innocent looking face, it is a face that is able to shine his innocence and naivity and at the same time concele his darker mor serious side, and although his face has a sort of cuteness to it, his features border between elegant and homliness.

He has pale white complexion... It isn't quite ghost white, he does look like he has a some life in him, however he doesn't bother trying to tan or whatever so his skin stays its natural white color.

Silvius has a nicley toned body... Do to him being a pretty active and playful person his body is usually in an okay condition, he doesn't have alot of fat on his body, yet he does excersise enough to keep some muscle on him so that he can be pretty agile and strong enough to use his equipment.
Nice description, but I fail to note any height or weight measures.

Attire – Silvius usually wears a pair of blue jeans that fit comfortable around his waist with a bit of room around the legs so that he can move around better but still not have to worry about his pants coming down on him. For his shoes he usually just wears his good pair of dirty white sneakers that fit comfortable yet at the same time preform well when he is doing something active.

For his torso he usually doesn't wear anything to flashy, most of the time he wears a band t-shirt with a logo or soemthing from one of the band he likes, it usually a darker color that in a way clashes with his cheerful and naive side of his personality.

Also on his upper body he wears a black zip-up hoodie unzipped with a unique design of two white angel wings spread wide open on the back of the hoodie... It is a very exstravagant design that is only custom to his sweatshirt, it is one of a kind and nobody else has anything like it, but at the same time the design is almost just kind of plain seens how its only black and white...
Nice description, you seem to have covered the most of it.

Personality – Silvius has almost a sort of split personality... That is part of the reason his title is The Winged Duality... Duality meaning that he has two oppostite sides to him almost. On one hand Silvius can be a very nice and funny person who enjoys having fun with friends, playing music, and other enjoyable things. He is a good friend and he treats others with respect and kindness. He enjoys joking around and being naive, others may mistake this naivity as stupidy, which it is not, it is just a way for Silvius to just have some fun in his life...

But Silvius also has a very serious and darker side... He has a haunted past which still gets to him sometimes, even though he has felt some resolve with it... But still he has many philosophies on life and always has some good words for others, but when he gets in his darker side, if somebody has done something to hurt somebody else or to piss him off he feels that there must be some form of justice, also if he feels he is doing the right thing, even if it might hurt somebody in the end he will always follow through...

First Impression – A first Impression of Silvius would lead you to believe that he is all fun and games... Which in a way he is, he is almost always fun-loving and having a goodtime, and probably if you were to ask something he would just respond with some sort of harmless witty joke, just for laughs...
A first impression should also contain what one might get as an impression from only seeing the character from afar, as many impressions are already made based on visual appearance.

Strength – Although Silvius doesn't look that strong he can pack quite a punch... He can lift a large table over and he could lift a large dog or something around that size up over his head... If he were to punch a brick wall he would probably end up putting a small little crack in it, crumbling a little tiny bit of the wall, and he would probably end up hurting his hand by doing so...

Speed – Silvius is pretty fast, more so fast than he is strong at least... If he were to have a ten second build up he could probably keep up with a fast animal such as a dog... He can side step at the drop of a dime with great speed. His attack are very quick and also well thought out.

Endurance – Silvius has trained most of his skills... Endurance is a particular one that he has put some time into, as he plays alot of sports and such so he needs to have a large stamina and he needs to be able to take a beating do to his Hero like duties, fighting muggers and what not... If he were to get hit by a strong punch it would probably hurt him but it wouldn't be enough to knock him out or make him dizzy... He has a large stanima and if he paces himself right he could probably hold up in battle for a good 25 minutes...

Reflexes – His reflexes are particulary honed as well... He is able to sense being attacked about as soon as it starts to happen and he will be able to react almost as soon as he realizes it... He couldn't dodge a bullet but he would be able to jump behind cover or use some sort of cover before he was hit probably...
I like the above tabs, you have explained them well without using any numerical values. Something that alone is a great feature.

Fighting Style – Silvius's fighting style is not a specific fighting style... Instead Silvius simply adjusts his fighting style to his oppenent and his enviroment. He plans out almost every move before he takes it, and he is always cautious with his attacks. That meaning he doesn't just rush into a battle without thinking, instead he waits for the right moment and then he strikes with a well thought out attack.

Weapons

Hands Of Justice -
A pair of osmium crafted gaunlents crafted by Silvius himself... First things first these gloves are very duarible do to the material they are crafted from, in fact, the streangth of the material adds to the streangth of Silvius himself which added togather can pack quite a punch... But that isn't the unique thing about the gaunlents... You see on both gaunlents there are power cells charged with electric energy... of course the energy doesn't last for ever and they do need to be charged, however when they are charged they are able to do a multitude of things.

Some of the things these highly durrable gaunlents allow are... The energy can charge the gloves itself, electrifying them, which could make for a rather ShOcKiNg punch (pun intended). The gloves can send charges of electricity into other things electrifying them as well... But probably the most unique thing about the gloves are the ability to harness the energy at such a level where it can use the raw electricty of itself shooting bolts of lighting are charging up balls of lightning...
I chuckled at the pun. ^^

But as the weapons have a power, it should be explained not only what they do, but how much of it they can do.
You should detail what one cna expect for a damage if you, say, place your palm in hte bare chest of a person and activates it.
this should take on the highest ammount of damage, so what would happen to this person?
Also, how many times can they be used before recharge is needed, and how do you recharge them?

Armour

The Wings:
The Wings is a highly technologic crafted piece of armor... It consists of a chestplate and two large wings that look like the wings depicted on angels. Both the wings and the chestplate are crafted out of pure solid osmium, a metal twice as dense as lead, however the pieces of metal are thin so that they do not way down Silvius too much, allowing him to be quick and agile...

The armor is polished and still retains a sort of steel color... Except for the embroideries in gold that make the newly developed machinery and armor look like an ancient relic...

The Wings can take almost all sorts of damage, also the wings allow for flight.
You should know that lead is a soft metal, if you were t ohave a rod of it you could easily bend it. So a doubel density would help, yes. But not enough.
To make it strong and light, perpahs use carbon steel as a comparing. As that is already F'ing strong and rather light. (It is what Katanas are originally made of.)
But still having hte "double as" effect, making the thin version fo them very durable as well.

Abilities – Silvius does not have any abilities do to the fact that he relies almost entirely on his equipment and basic skills of combat...

Magic – Silvius is based in a world where magic doesn't exist there for it wouldn't make sense for him to have magic really...

Other Skills – Sadly he doesn't have any Other Skills either.... Honestly I can see this isn't for a lack of creativity just simply put I wanted to make this character somewhat realistic yet at the same time strong enough to withstand in battles...
Other skills can also be (but not limited to); cooking, map reading, Smithing (as he made his own gauntlets), a particualr sport... etc

History – Throughout Silvius's life he had his ups and downs just like any other person in the world, but for the most part his life was pretty good... He had an okay family life his parents were divorced, but that never really bothered Silvius that much, in fact, he was kind of glad it happened, it allowed him to see two different sides of life, which in the end was good because it made Silvius a sympathetic person and it allowed him to relate to others... When Silvius was in school he met some people who later on in his school years came to be his best friends, they all shared a common love for music and so, they started a band... They had played for four years togather throughout all their highscool years and when they all turned eighteen they decided to go on a trip to see a concert with a band they all loved... This trip was about to turn into the worst night of Silvius's life... On their way to the concert they decided to take an shortcut down an alley way... When they got to the end of the alley the were confronted by to men with guns, the men asked for all the money Silvius and his friends had on them, having no choice they all handed over their money, and then afterwards the muggers shot down Silvius's friends, and as they were about to kill Silvius a police car was herd coming so the muggers ran off, and so Silvius had survived... This night would forever burn its terrible image in his brain, but still Silvius had to continue with his life, he went to college, and he had to abandon his dreams, but he swore that he would have vengance on those who killed his friends, their faces still imprinted in his mind... In college Silvius discovered new found information on all sorts of things, but one day Silvius had an idea, with the knowledge he gained he would do something great... He spent days and nights working on some inventions and ideas... so that when they were finished he could have vengance on those who killed his friends.

After he had finished his major invention... The Wings... He went hunted down the people who had killed his friends, they were easy to find seens how he had been tracking them for a while... When he had came face to face with both they new why he was here so they tried to shoot him, but Silvius simply just defended himself with his invention... They realized that they had no hope of killing him so the pleaded for forgiveness they said to him they were sorry... Tell them you are sorry is all Silvius could think, but what they had done could not be forgiven... Silvius killed both of them... From that day on Silvius vowed to fight for justice and help others now that he had put vengance behind him... He will continue his life as just another person trying to have fun and make it through life intill he is needed by others...
This bio is very nice, and Id approve it if it did nto lack one crucial thing.

Is this character for RPB, ORPG or URPG's.
Or perhaps all of them.
I need this information to do some more in depth checking, and to know where to move it when the time comes. ^^

So, for now, I will list this as [Pending]
As it is approval, it just needs some minor changes before I can give it the final go.
 
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