Fan Fiction FF: Darkness Chronicles

Lord_Atomos

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Epilogue: The loud sound of a magic explosion filled the air as four warriors bearing crystals were blown back into the wall of the Temple of Chaos alter. "Is this all the fight the World of Light could muster? You four fight valiantly, but the defeat of my Four Fiends of Darkness was just sheer luck, but luck won't save you in this battle. I shall end your chain of luck here and now!" said Chaos as his hand began to glow with the light of a Death spell. The warriors finally managed to get themselves to their feet, but it was to late. Chaos let loose his spell and the Grim Reaper appeared before the warriors and with a slash of his scythe, they fell to the floor with a loud THUD! " Pathetic creatures never had a chance in hell of defeating me! And now the true Age of Darkness can finally unfold!!! THIS WORLD NOW BELONGS TO DARKNESS!!!" yelled Chaos with a triumphant roar.

Chapter 1: For 4000 years, Chaos and his fiends ruled the world. The world quickly began to change from a beautiful and lovely place, to a world filled with cruelty and massacre. Anyone who challenged Chaos was struck down quickly without a moments reprieve. The world was truly covered in the darkness of Chaos!

Two young children sat huddled together in their bedroom, praying to the gods that they wouldn't be the next to die. The older of the two, a boy of about seventeen, held his little sister tightly to him as she sobbed in his chest. "Walse, why haven't mommy and daddy come back yet? They said they would be right back!" asked the little girl. She was short and blonde headed and was a girl of about six years of age. But Walse just smiled through the tears that welled in his eyes and answered his little sister in a soft reassuring voice. "They will be back soon Reanna, just try and get some sleep OK?" She looked up at him through her own tears and nodded to him as she wiped them away and crawled under the covers and closed her eyes. He went to his sisters side, kissing her goodnight and staying with her until she fell into a deep sleep. As her snores filled the air, he smiled sorrowfully and went to the window and looked up at the moon. " I'm sorry Reanna...I...I just didn't have the heart to tell you that mom and dad will never be back..." said Walse as he closed his eyes, trying to blink back the warm tears that spilled out of his eyes and down his cheeks before dropping into small puddles on the windowsill.

Walse and Reanna knew little of the fate that would soon rest its uneasiness upon their souls...
 
Hmm, i'm not too sure about this right now, but try writing more in your chapters and make sure you post soon.
 
I am, don't worry, I am, i'm just giving helpful criticism :)
 
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