Original Fatal Eclypse: Chapter I

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This is my new story about, well you will see when you read. If successfully launched, I plan to have about 7 chapters. So enjoy and comment on mistakes, opinions, and if you enjoyed it or not.
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Chapter I: The beginning
"Soldier behind you!" one man says. As the soldier shoots a vampire sweeps him away. "No!" the man yelled. Running away from the sight the man saw, he ran into something, something extremely tuff. As the man regains his focus, he see's a huge werewolf and before he can even realize it, he was dead. A man in a suit drops from the ceiling. Shooting at the werewolf, it tries to attack, but does not succeed. The werewolf flees while the suited man picks the dead corpses head up. Rain now falls, and the suited man takes the corpses walkey-talkey and runs through a door. "Come in, W.A.R. headquarters come in, Zavier here," the man shouted. "Vance, Vance Zavier?" someone replied through the walkey-talkey. "Yes, i need a chopper to come to sector 17-C, we, we failed the mission." Vance said. "Rodger that we got one headed your way, and out," the voice from the walkey-talkey said. The vampire is seen flying through an alley, were it is stopped by a werewolf. The werewolf tries to grab the vampire but it is to quick. The vampire bites the werewolf as it is thrumping around. The werewolf then grabs the vampire and breaks it in half. The werewolf then yells loudly as it starts to transform. A chopper then puts its spot-light on the ground, searching for Vance. The werewolf now has the structure and build of a werwolf, but now has many vampire features. The newly developed vampwolf runs through buildings, smashing everything in its path. It makes its way to the room Vance is at. Shooting rapidly at the vampwolf, Vance makes a quick decision to shoot its eyes then make a run for it. But before he could reload his gun, the vampwolf picks Vance up by the head and swings his huge clawed paws at him. Nearly missing Vance, the vampwolf did scratch Vance on his head (part forhead). The chopper then gunned the beast down and dropped a rope for Vance. Vance climbed the rope. "You alright?" shouted the pilot. "No, no ive been infected." Vance said., "Where, wheres the closest antidote?" "Man you must have really hit your head!" the pilot said. Vance then passed out. He awoke in a hospital bed with a small wrap wrapped around his forhead. "It's to late, it would have no effect." A woman said to another doctor holding a case. "Wh, where am I?" Vance stutteratly said. "Vance, can you hear me?" the woman said. Vance then got up and shook his head. "I'm fine." "You took quite a beating Vance, you may want to rest more." the lady said. Vance stood there, staring into the ladies eyes. "I'm sorry, I'm Doctor Morka..you can just call me Lea" the woman said. "Well then, Lea, I'm telling you i will be fine." Vance said. "Sorry, it's none of my buisness, really, but what were you doing in 17-C?" she said. "Official W.A.R. buisness; we received reports of werewolfs and vampires around the area" he said. "But I've told you to much already." "Right, sorry...Oh yeah, um someone is expecting you..Go to room 511." she replied. Vance headed to room 511. He wondered why he was being sent there, but he then realized it might be W.A.R. buisness. After finding the room, he opened the door to find 2 scientist compairing results. "Ah, Vance, please have a seat...I wasn't expecting you this early; are you alright?" "I'm fine" Vance replied. "What's going on?" "Vance last night you were infected...Not only werewolf blood, but vampire aswell." the doctor said. "We are going to give you something to allow you to command these transformations, kindof." the other doctor said. "Kidof?" Vance asked. "Well, this necklace will stop transformations on full moons and at night time, and let you control the transformations (the necklace had an eclypse emplem on it)...whenever you get extremely mad, you will have the ability to transform into a vampire or a werewolf, and if you receive heavy damage, you can turn into a vampwolf, self explanitory." the doctor said. Vance then took the necklace and put it on. Later that day, he returned home. He changed clothes and took a nap. His new attire consisted of the fallowing- Tight black long sleeve shirt, tight black pants with black boots, black right glove, white left glove with chain wrapped around wrist, white cape, and the white head bandage. Whenever Vance tried to take the head nadage off his wound would glow and hurt terribly, so he left it on at all times. Vance then went into an empty room in his apartment room. He opened a glass case and pulled out a 3 barrel handgun. He then took a bounch of interchangable parts including a scope, extended barrel, shortend barrel, plenty of ammo, explosive ammo, and mako bullets. Vance then went to his bathroom and stared at himself in the mirror. Vance had lonish black spikey hair. His eyes were odly white, as they used to be brown. His skin was pale and flawless. He turned the fosset water on and put his hands in the water. Whiping his face with the water, he then looked at himself in the mirror again. He saw a large man dressed in all blue with gold hair standing behind him. Vance quickly turned around and shot his gun, only to find no one was behind him. He looked in the mirror one last time to find nothing aswell. Vance then went to his bed and picked his cell phone up and dialed a number. "Hello?" a voice said. "Leikon, you looking for some work?" Vance said with a smirk on his face.
 
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