In order: Hayden, Seong, Kim, Mai, Grace
The Final Lullaby
Prologue...
"I always thought there would be a way out. You know, a place to...vent? Somewhere you can go to tell something everything, someone who will listen and not just nod there heads and demand money from you for it. I needed to actually speak to someone, a friend. There were so many things I just wanted to get off my chest, and the only I could do that was to end it all. I had decided that I would never talk again, never love again. I'd never dream, or wish. I'd finally be alone, so I took it upon me to take the pills. I took more than prescribed. It felt good for the first ten minutes, then the world starting to spin around. My eyes were fluttering constantly, it felt as if I was completely and utterly drunk. After five more minutes, I started to feel sink and a painful grip in my stomach, it felt as if I was being stabbed.
It finally came to and end. I got my final wish, I made sure I'd set everything up ready. I wanted to make it perfect, I wanted everyone to known I had gone. I wanted to make an impact. I was bullied at school, every day I'd be called names. General stuff intending that I'm insane, I have no life and I'm ugly. I couldn't handle any of it and although I can forgive those who made me feel pain, I cannot forgive the five who watched me be bullied. The five people who stood and over heard the name calling, the abuse. The five people who knew something was going on, and the only five the could do something. They did nothing. I've done some planning and left them some surprises behind. They'll find them, and they won't like them. I'll make them pay. They are the reason I ended it. The reason is because...
They are the five people who killed me."
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The story is basically about a young girl; named, Elizabeth, was bullied at school. Elizabeth is the only person was aware that she had some form of mental illness, nobody knew about her health concerns. Her parents were never with her, and she lived alone. Elizabeth would be abused at her school, by everyone except five people. Hayden, Seong, Kim, Mai and Grace. Elizabeth was too shy, and conciousness to speak to them, because of her health, it had made her think they were the same, but inside she knew they were not. Elizabeth began to recognised regular patterns in their lives, what they did on weekends, what they liked and what they did not and decided to play a game. Elizabeth wanted to tease the five, after noticing that whenever she was being bullied, they would do nothing. Elizabeth set up some surprises and twists for the group to make them realises what they have done, and how it affected her. After planning everything, and everything being set up, Elizabeth killed herself. Once the signal was sent out that she had died, the game began.
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I'm going to post the Character Profiles here soon, so stay tuned for more. Enjoy reading "The Final Lullaby" when I begin it. Thanks again.
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