Poetry Death Count, Plus One

[Creationation]

Redefine what you're saying
Of boundaries,
Of temptations and fire,
And those moments where you play with your tie;
You slip out your words
and watch them float across the air,
Battleships at red alert-

Coming to take me down,
To take me down
And lay me down forever with a quickness.

It's an art of war,
And your the commander and chief,
Looking deep into my wavering eyes...

Smile, smile just like you did
Like you are, like you smile
To keep me listening,

To keep me blinded
Deer eyes in the headlights
And you round in for the kill...

Death count plus one,
Death count,
Plus one

 

[Casanova]

This is a good poem, if you wrote this then well done