Poetry Concrete Jungle

[M1ghty Mous3]

When something is wrong
Pick up the peices
Set it back in motion
Enjoy

We are here to save the day
Do you hear me?
Do you feel me?
Do you see me?

Hiding in the shadows like a rat hides in crevases
Sneaking through trees liek a monkey swinging from vine to vine
Running through teh streets like a cheetah hunting its prey
Sliding in the dirt to avoid site just like a snake slides to it's burrow

I would help you but I'm too far down
I would help you but I'm too far gone
You'd help me but your too lost
You'd help but I'm too hard to find

Maybe one day
I'll be found
Time will tell me
Maybe it won't

Setting streets in clouded deseption
You walk among them
As if it's all ging to be okay
How wrong you people are
How very wrong

We will find it one day
What is "it"
Think
The answer will come in time

 

[Ayumi Hamasaki]

I loved it. You really have quite the gift with poetry, especially of the alternative free verse kind. It's a little depresing and it creates a an epic air that is really shocking. It's fantastic.