Poetry A little Poetry

[KR Skull]

ok here are things i wrote well i don't know if they can be called poems becuse i never showed them to anyone. anyway here they are

1. the dark heart

it so dark
the sky above me
the rainy clouds covered everything
i have forgotten what the moon looks like
it is raining now
the same as yestarday
the same as the day before
when will it stop
when will i see the moon again
nobody knows

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2. silent wish

now that you left
everything became cold
everything became dark
all what is left in my mind is the scattered image of you
the one whom i loved
the one who i wish to die for
let us forget the past and live
as if nothing happened
that is my silent wish

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3. i am your shadow

i walk behinde you
and see you sad
i fly to the sky
and hear you cry
you fell in the dark
and hurt us all
you came to me
and lied about the stars

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4. thank you my dearest friend

my life was like a room that has no light.
falling in the darkness that has no end.
then a bright light appeared.
it was you who took my hand.
and pulled me to your side from the dark.
thank you my Friend for lighting my life.
thank you for showing me the way.
i am happy to be by your side.
and i will always be by your side.

 

[Blitz]

Well if it comes from you and you feel it is poetry then who am I to argue.

Are they all dark and moody on purpose?
Also you seem to repeating the DARK thing in all of them. There is a lot of Dark going on in these poems. Thats not a bad thing as long as you are not forcing it.
I use to know someone who wrote lots of DARK MOODY poems but only because they thought the best poems had to be dark and moody, which is not true at all.
But as I said, as long as it is genuine then keep doing your thing. If you like it, that is what truly counts.

 

[KR Skull]

i wrote them becuse they made me feel better. and i used that word dark a lot becuse it describes my feelings. thanks a lot for the complement.

here is something i just wrote

just like the Wind
you move Swiftly and
pass everything
just like the moon
you shine in the dark nights
just like the forest
you sit in silence
just like the fire
you finish everything fast
just like the mountain
you stand and don't move
when you face a problem
that is you my friend
the one i always admired