Recent content by PaRoDu Nite

Thanks very much for your comments; they are very appreciated!!! Here's a lot more pieces! ENJOY!: Friends? Whispering compliments of love; You frown to my distaste. Preaching sonnet of affection; You turn away in anger. I laugh, and joke, and pretend, but inside I fall apart. My...

Morning Yawn Hey everyone I'm back with my second piece and before I put up THREE new pieces I just want to say thank you very much for all the comments, they are greatly appreciated. :) Morning Yawn Out through the crack in the wall of the cave Dusty and sore Acheing and shaking He...

Thank you all for your comments, they will all help me to become a better writer. I will hopefully put more up soon.

Hey everyone, I'm new to the forums and I thought I'd just post some of my work. Love it or hate it I would really appreciate comments and criticism to make me a better writer; be as harsh as you want!!! The Blizzard The Blizzard's life is coming to an end. It's had a good run but it's lost...