Viktoricus, the kicking pugilist.

ViKtoricus

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Name – Viktoricus "The Bear Killer" Fergoozo

Title – Warmonger

Alignment – Neutral

Race – Human. Viktoricus is the heir of a long line of Fergoozos, a family gifted with immense, natural strength. His grandfather, Tren Fergoozo, cleaned and jerked 205 pounds the first time he lifted weights... when he was eleven years old. He then lifted 530 pounds in his prime.

Gender – Male.

Age – 21 years old, in the prime of his life.

Appearance – Fair skin. Bright red hair (natural). Weighs about 205 pounds but short (only 5'6). He has scars all over his body, except for his face. Thighs are marvelously huge, in a muscular way, not in a fat way. And as far as the face is concerned, you guys remember Cloud Strife from the Advent Children movie? Thicken the jaw line, widen the nose, and enlarge the eyes. That's how Vik looks like (and don't forget about the red hair. Red short hair.). His physique is where he is ripped enough for us to see his abs, but not too ripped to where we start seeing his veins and muscle striations. He has freaky back muscles (both lower and upper). Lats as wide as a house (not literally).

Here is how his torso would look like:

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Here is how his back would look like:

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Here is how his thighs would look like:

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Attire – He wears red t-shirts almost all the time and pairs it with tight-fitting dark-blue jeans when feeling casual. His casual shoes are just regular running shoes (brown). When lifting weights, he wears "weightlifting shoes", which, for everyone's information, are a special kind of shoes that have a flat surface and slightly elevated heels (white). His weightlifting outfit are loose white t-shirts and tight black shorts, and a white bandanna that has "ROAR!!" written on it. During battles, he either wears plain grey tank tops or he is shirtless. He pairs that with loose shorts that extend down below his knee cap (black shorts). He wears tennis shoes during battles.

Vik does wear armour.

Armour – The only armour he wears is a pair of steel shin guards, not just to protect his shin, but to bash his opponents with it through roundhouse kicks (Not Chuck Norris style, but Muay Thai style.).

Personality – He has a tendency to be cold on people who don't matter to him. He is EXTREMELY ambitious and will do anything to become better at whatever, with the exception of betraying a friend (He may do it, but he isn't the kind of person who will not feel guilty doing so.). Although he is generally a patient person and has good control of his emotions, he tends to make rash decisions with minimal thinking, often assuming that his speed of decision and his boldness of execution will just maul whatever obstacles he may face. He doesn't trust most people unless he truly feels they are trustworthy.

In social situations, he is picky with his words.

First Impression – A quiet guy if you catch him in social situations, but a showman when he is the center of attention. When he is the center of attention, it becomes very hard for everyone to not pay attention to him, even if he is getting the bad kind of attention.

Strength – EXTREMELY high. He cleans and jerks 405 pounds, front squats 530 pounds (full range, with a pause at the bottom), and can shatter a bear's ribs with his bare shin or knuckle (hence the nickname "Bear Killer".).

If Character X has 500 health and is an average human, a roundhouse to the torso would eat 300 points. A roundhouse to the head will be either instant death due extreme concussion or the kind of concussion where it takes minutes to wake up from, or maybe even a coma. A clinch-and-knee-strike to the torso would cause either broken ribs and a punctured lung or general internal bleeding. A clinch-and-knee-strike to the head is instant death with the rare exception of a bad execution, such as barely hitting it or not hitting it directly, or whatever. An elbow to the head is either instant death or a concussion. Regular punches to the torso cost 60 points each hit. A regular punch to the head costs 110 points. A concentrated punch to the torso would be 200 with possible internal bleeding and broken ribs while a concentrated punch to the head would be an absolute concussion (unless this human somehow has a ridiculously strong jaw to the point of him being a mutant).


Vitality -
His resistance against physical and magical attacks is about as normal as it can get, with the exception of having extra armor due to thick muscles. Overall, it's nothing special.

Speed – 100-meter dash = 9.6 seconds. All his striking attacks are in maximum velocity for maximum impact. Overall agility is lagging (if X athlete has an excellent agility that is 10/10, Vik would score 6/10.)

Stamina – Can walk for long distances but can't jog worth shit. Very low stamina. Will never win an amateur marathon competition to save his life. However, he can pace himself well in battle by not giving 100% effort in every blow, and his muscular endurance is decent.

Reflexes – Very good reflexes. His reflexes are good enough to make him dodge almost anything that can be seen with the naked eye except for bullets and close-ranged arrow shots (they can't be seen with the naked eye). Due to his lagging agility, the full potential of his dodging abilities can't be reached.

Fighting Style – Judo, boxing, kickboxing, and muay thai (He is a southpaw). His typical combination strikes are jab-cross-roundhouse, jab-cross-elbow, jab-cross-hook-uppercut-uppercut-hook, and lowkick-cross. He also clinches his enemy to either knee them or elbow them. Sometimes he clinches them to do "dirty boxing" where you punch your enemy while holding their heads down. His judo background makes his enemies very susceptible to throws when they get too close, but he of course, can only utilize his judo moves with humans and not-overly-big humanoids.

Weapons – Steel shin-guards and your typical knuckle brace (left and right fists). No enchantments or magical properties. Just raw, skullcrushing tools.

Abilities – Running knee-strike: When Vik is feeling reckless and optimistic, he'd charge on an enemy and hit him with his accelerated right knee. In the event that a person gets hit anywhere in the torso, he'll surely suffer from massive internal bleeding. If he hits the head, it's death due to skull crushed and brain getting sliced by the bone shards.

Eye poke: Self-explanatory (and very graphic). Vik will use his middle finger to poke one of the eyes of his enemies and gouge it out, and then do it on the other one. He'll attempt this only when his enemy is incapacitated or he has him locked.

Magic – The only way for Vik to be able to use magic is if he is holding a weapon with magical properties. Otherwise, he's just an overly athletic human being.

Other Skills – An expert in computer and internet technology. If, however, I'm roleplaying in a world where the setting is ancient, Vik would be an skilled carpenter like Jesus Christ.

History – Viktoricus Fergoozo was an orphan and he only discovered his great heritage later on in his life. As a young boy, he has always been a dreamer of many things. He would often talk to his nanny about his visions of being the ruler of the world, or being the greatest architect, painter, writer, etc. It was not until he turned eleven years old when the guard of the orphanage witnessed with his own eyes, this young boy split-jerking 185 pounds after watching an athlete do it on TV. The guard was shocked and told the boy that he can be the strongest person in the world if he trains for it. The statement sparked the boy's heart and he made it a journey to become the strongest human to exist. He read many books of different topics and learned from wise men the ways to be successful not just in his pursuit, but in life as well. His teen years were mostly spent training, eating, and sleeping. It was not until he met a beautiful woman named Amy Heger, who was 17 at the time, that he included a dose of social life in his daily routines. They became in-love, but the relationship ended two years later. "It's not working. You're too much of an idealist.". This broke Viktoricus's heart...

He is now eighteen and as strong as a mule. He went to a gym and cleaned-and-jerked 405 pounds to everyone's shock. He wasn't the strongest guy around, but the other guy who can lift more than him (425) was 60 pounds heavier (Vik weighed in at 170 during this time). Despite of his great performance, he was deeply dismayed by his "slow progress." He decided to quit his ambition and joined the elite mercenaries of his city to excel as a hand-to-hand fighter. The force treated him well and educated him with being a computer and internet expert (or, if I'm in an ancient environment, it'll be as a carpenter). The force also trained him in hand-to-hand combat, which proved to be an overkill since his fighting abilities increased tenfold. He still lifted weights and gotten even bigger and more muscular than before. When he turned 21, he was now weighing at a lean 205 pounds. When he hit that mark, he decided to stop progressing and to simply "maintain" his strength levels by lifting without trying too hard.

And up to this day, he still dreams of getting back with Amy who lives just a few blocks away from his home.
 
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I don't have any moderating power here, but I must say I enjoyed reading this. :) It inspired me to make a brawler of my own, just for the sake of duking it out with this guy. :monster:

Only thing I would usually have a problem with is using other characters as a comparison when it comes to writing up the character's appearance. Having watched Advent Children myself, I do have a good idea of what your character's face looks like, but I think something as simple as just including a picture of Cloud's face would help people who either haven't seen the film, or generally just don't remember how Cloud looks in that film.

Good job, though!
 
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