Squee's Characters

Changes made in red. I added two abilities, got rid of the godmodding factor in Afterlife Location, and I replaced Loyalizing transmutation Circle with a different spell.
 
Energy drain on the two Entropy spells? Also, 10 minutes is a long time, considering he can only last about 20 in battle.

Afterlife Location:

Still God-Moding. Here's the issue, through an example. If you're facing 3 characters, and Lloyed is overmatched, let's say it's against a melee fighter and 2 casters, Lloyed can simply wait until the meleer gets close enough, pop the ability, then it's a 1v1 battle that he can handle (probably). You've changed the entire course of the battle, and removed two of the participants.

Angels Curse:

7 minutes seems long, considering you're essentially making him invulnerable to spellcasters.
 
Before I do edits, I'm gonna ask right now, How can I make Afterlife Location a non-godmodding spell? I want to do all I can to keep it, but you have a very valid point...
 
The main thing is to make it avoidable. It would be completely acceptable if the enemy themselves elected to step into the portal of their own volition in the middle of a battle. But to impose that change on the battlefield against their will is where the problem lies. If you'd like a suggestion: Considering his personality, you might be able to have the ability goad or taunt the enemy into fighting you one on one. Project a mental image of their hometown being destroyed, or something similar. But remember, the ultimate decision has to lie with the other person(s).
 
The section of forcing them to come into the world has been taken out, it is now an invitation. I also added a new ability to help motivate them as you suggested.
 
Ok, just a couple things.

-Still need the energy drain for the Entropy Abilities, and I'd like to see their duration turned down significantly.

-The wording on Loath should be tweaked slightly. Something along the lines of Lloyed projecting images that he thinks will infuriate his opponent. Just don't want to make it automatic.
 
Shortened them to five minutes if thats ok, and I made a lag effect so he can't keep casting them. I also changed the name of the ability. I am so bad at naming abilities >_<
 
Looks good.

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Ray + Kisharu

All three NOW!!!!!:rage:!!!

Ray:
Name: Ray Stephenson

Title: Beastmaster

alignment: Lawful good

Race: Human

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Appearance: He has hair that does not go below his jaw line and it is a blue-gray color. It comes down to just below his eyes, parted in the middle, but most of it goes backwards. His eyes are a sharp brown with the slightest red tint that is hardly noticeable. His left ear has two piercings and his right has only one on the earlobe. He stands at 5 feet and 7 inches tall with a slim and slender body frame weighing in at 134 pounds total, including clothes, excluding weapons. He also wears a white sleeveless shirt that is generally covered in his robe that he wears at all times. The robe is very dark gray, often mistaken for black and reaches to a level just about even with his knees. It has a sash of an almost red colored brown around the waist He also always wears an identically colored scarf tied around his neck. This scarf covers up a chain he wears at all times for personal reasons.He has very long fingerless gloves reaching past his elbows. These provide protection from nothing other than friendly animal nails, a blade cuts them with great ease. His pants are dark blue Jeans, faded by the constant wearing and sun rays. He wears low boots, reaching only to his ankles for mobility and for water resistant uses. Always wearing a pouch on his side, it is strapped where the sash is.
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Personality: He is a very loving guy, friendly to everyone. He see's his friends as all he has and holds all of them dear to him with great passion. He puts passion in everything he does. Also, he has a great respect for nature and wildlife, treating animals with respect and appreciating the insects and plants that exist. He also is very knowledgeable of herbs and spices, along with hunting skills. He only hunts when it is necessary as well, as he has an offenity for animals, and hates those who hunt as game. As for fighting in general, he belives those that fight without nobility are poor warriors and should not fight at all. If he runs into a mercenary, he does not judge them as harshly as any other soldiers, because generally, they are just trying to make a living. When approached with insult, he tries to understand why he would be approached so negatively and resolve the conflict that may exist. If approached nicely, he returns the kindness the best he can. Cheering people up is what he tries to do most, but never lies to do this and says what has to be said, which isn't always what is wanted to be heard. He will never approach someone with a rude impression on purpose

First impression: He is a seemingly young boy with a peaceful appearance and a delightful smile, so one would not fear approaching him, nor would they be intimidated. At first he looks like the average boy. Nothing too special.

Strength: Normally he is weak in general. His power could crack a brick, but not enough to break it in half, and the crack would be very simple to fill. in 3 punches he may have it split in two pieces down the middle.

Vitality: He can take a punch pretty solidly, but it wouldn't take much force to knock him down. Usually, even if knocked down, he can get right back up and return to combat. He can also take these kinds of blows for a really long time before losing the ability to get back up. Magically, he can take some hits, but if a single spell hits him in a vital area, of simply hard enough, he will not get back up.

Speed: He can run nearly 17 miles an hour at a constant speed, but at a full sprint he can go at 21 miles an hour. He usually paces himself to last longer when running, so he generally does not run this fast.

Stamina: In battle, he can fight for an estimated 15 minutes, assuming he has not yet taken a blow. Running his highest, normal running speed, he can last about 25 minutes before collapsing from exhaustion due to all his running with his wolf pet. Sprinting at max speed he lasts a small burst of 30 seconds before going back to normal.

Reflexes: He can react rather fast, quickly dodging when necessary. He often feels a burning sensation that makes him uneasy when a long range fighter aims at him. Seeing something come at him from afar is simple for him to avoid when he sees it, so it is hard to hit him directly. Sneaking up slyly is the only way to hit him in a goal for one hit death, but in the heat of battle, he can get carried away.

Fighting Style: He generally fights along side his wolf companion. The two work together to confuse the opponent. They both are very skilled and work excellently together. they try and read opponents and learn their style so they can use it against them.

Weapon: He carries two weapon types, one type being of the sword. The swords he carries are twin lances, and they are a pair, meaning they are identical. Both prongs of the blade extend the same length of 36 inches and are the mirror image of the other on the same sword. He rarely uses these swords, One rests in a hilt on his back while the other rests on his side in an identical hilt. They are called the Kiku and the Koku.
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The other is of the gauntlet nature. He can use these in team with his swords, but generally doesn't. He wears these at all times, unless being formal. The blade is retractable so it is not always out, and usually in. They have a reach of 6 inches and are 4 inches wide.
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Abilities: All his abilities other than one are used in team with his wolf.

Spirit: He channels his soul into his wolf, making his wolf turn purple. He then is almost completely out of breath and finds it hard to move. Fighting in this state is not impossible, but if his wolf is to go down, he will not last very long at all.

Difference: His wolf is pumped with the light and dark energy inside of Ray and it changes color. During this state, Ray cannot find the strength to lift his weapons, not even his gauntlets, so he sets all weapons down and/or aside, possibly handing them to another if he so wills it, and has to rely on his weak attacks to fight.

Sift: Reverts the abilities involving his wolf back to normal.

(above wolf related abilities will be explained further in the wolf's bio.)

Other skills: He can talk to his wolf, or rather, they understand eachother. Through body language, Kisharu is able to tell Ray what he wants, and Ray will understand perfectly. This was a result of endless times together.

History: Ray was born of normal men in a small town. He was not poor off or well off, a middle class child for that matter. His schooling was normal, as usual he had his friends as a group. One day when he was 4 his parents had given him a gift. His father, a hunter, said that he found this wolf puppy and no mother. His father had told Ray to take care of it and this included walking it, feeding it, and watering it. The only place he did not go with this pup was school, and that was only because it was not allowed. He bragged about how good his wolf was everyday to no end. As the years passed he became bonded to the wolf even more, and the wolf became his best friend. The wolf was named Kisharu by Ray, and eventually, the bond became so great they were able to conjoin souls. Ray was an only child asl well, so the wolf was that much more important to him. Still to this day he and the wolf are always seen together.
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Kisharu:

Alignment: Loyal Neutral

Species: Timber wolf

Gender: Male

age: 13

appearance: Kisharu is a timber wolf of a very special coloration of the fur. Most of his back is covered in a firey red, while the bottom being his chest and belly area is white. between the two colors is blended by an orange color, giving the wolf a firey fur appearance. He stands at 3 feet high maximum from foot to ear tips. His tail is the usual length being less than half in length of his entire body. this means the tail is 1.5 feet (18 inches) and his body is 5 feet in length. He is built very muscular but not too large in shape,s o to retain how agile he is. His fur is long and fluffed, making him seem larger in size than he really is. Most of the muscle is on his chest.
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Personality: Kisharu is a kind wolf that only harms one when his senses feel them to be a threat. He is playful and just like all wolves, high on energy. Just like humans, he has variant moods that alter from time to time. He can be sad, and when he is, he usually lays down and relaxes, not doing much. When happy, he tends to run around and jump around as well, sometimes wearing him down unless Ray calms him down. Those are the two most common emotions, as he is not very moody. Unless Kisharu is alone, he has no problem with people approaching him and petting him, and he always loves a good belly rub. But when he is alone, he is very violent and it is not advised that you approach him or he is almost guaranteed to bite hard.

First Impression: He seems like a good boy, and some would call him just a dog and not a wolf, but it makes no difference to me. The panting of his breath and wagging his tail can give off a good vibe, depending on what he so happens to be doing.

Strength: In a tackle, he could take out any unsuspecting person, even his master, Ray. His bite is hard and very gripping. Once he gets a hold on it is almost impossible to get him off. His bite can clamp at about enough power to break a wooden spool about 2 inches in diameter.

Vitality: He stands no chance against blades or magic, but being a wolf, he can take a beating and some gashes well and still fight through them. Magic would be his weakness. Since he is so weak against magic, low level spells have the ability to knock him down to the point of not getting back up.

Speed: He can run at about 42 miles an hour constantly. He has no real sprint rate but for rp sake I will guess it to be about 47 miles an hour.

Stamina: At an all out run he can last about 45 minutes before needing to relax and tone it down. In the heat of battle, assuming he has taken no real hits he can last 35 minutes, which is more than enough top last.

Abilities:

Spirit: With Ray's spiritual energy in his own, Kisharu's appearance is altered. His fur grows in length and he himself becomes even more muscular. His fur all turns a purple color with a but of blue in it, but it leaves his underside to be white. The fur on his tail is then grown at extreme lengths to be longer than his entire body. This grants Kisharu certain abilities that he does not normally have. A blue aura surrounds him, and it waves as he moves. This gives him a defense to magic that allows him to withstand blows like a human would, being able to take the pain, but if hit hard enough he can still fall back in pain. It also allows him to dive into a foe and it knocks them back without him having to push said enemy. This enhances no other status. His appearance can be seen below.
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Difference: The dark and light energy of Ray pulses through Kisharu, giving him yet another change in appearance. This time around it is of blue fur and lengthened as well, but the tail is not quite so long. The white underside is turned to a really light blue and the top of his back is blackened. The eyes also become purple. This state enhances his abilities as well, but in different ways. First of all, he can walk on water with no troubles as if he was walking on solid ground. An aura also engulfs him, but it protects against magic attacks. If he is hit with any average spell it is stopped by the aura, but hit him hard with the spell and he will feel it at no cost of his aura. His fur is also harder, so attacking him physically will be difficult, as a blunt object hitting him would take a lot of force to really get him down, and a blade would be repelled unless given the proper force.
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History: When he was born, a boy named Ray became his companion from the start when he and his mother were separated. As him and the boy bonded, the loyalty of the wolf's nature had began to kick in high gear as he went with the boy everywhere. He will now never leave his master's side under an circumstances unless asked.
 
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Appearance:

Minor pick: Weight? Body type/frame?

and hates those who hunt as game.

How about those who kill? Or maybe mercenaries? Or fighting in general?

appearance:

Again, weight and body type? Is the wolf built like a pit bull? Or more like a German shepherd? Or even a greyhound?

Magic would be his weakness.

So a single low-level spell would take him down?
 
These are notes for Arukab's RPB review.

Endurance

How is his defense against magic/spells?

Reflexes

How are his reflexes against projectile attacks?

LIMIT: Silver Phantom:

How much damage could we expect one of the feathers to do to an average combatant?

Metallic Manipulation:

Does he have to be touching the metal to manipulate it? (Suggestion: yes.)

[PM me when edits are made.]
 
I edited spellings and I also will now be puting the direct quotes here. Edits are in red...

Endurance – Arukab has a tough exterior, he can easily take a hit and keep walking. However he must avoid being cut, because he is sensitive underneath his skin. Putting any pressure on any wound would make Arukab feel strong pain. His magic defenses are very low. He cannot stand very well against a mage unless he uses his silver abilities to shield himself, but if you hit him in the soul or body with a weak low level spell, he feels as though he is hit hard.
Reflexes – When hearing a single step behind him, he will draw his blade and get ready for defense. He knows better than to try an attack because his reaction timing with attacks is delayed a little, so it could be fatal. Just because he prepares for the attack does not mean he will defend it, He only will be prepared. He would have to have a .5 second notice to actually defend himself properly. That could sometimes be fatal, so he likes to fight with one he can trust to watch his back. When defending against projectiles, he often has enough time to be able to dodge successfully, but sometimes gets scraped in the process. He will always have time tp parry if it is an attack coming from in front of him. But if the attack has already been launched, he may only be able to pull a quick motion out of the way.
Metallic Manipulation: His magic involves anything combat related as long as it is made from metal. this is a rare magic that few can master in one lifetime. He can change the weight of any metal things in his possession, making armor lighter etc. etc.. W/ his abilities he can make his gunblade dissapear or vanish, however the weapon may not be in his hands at the time it is in fact in his possession. nothing too flashy. He must be either be directly touching the silver, or indirectly. This means either his skin must be touching it, or it must be connected to something that is in contact to his skin.
 
LIMIT: Silver Phantom: This ability lasts for about 3 minutes before he reverts back to normal. He grows silver horns and silver wings that expand widely and long enough to cover his whole body. The wings cannot fly, as they are far to heavy, and he can hardly jump. His running is even slowed massively. The wings are feathered and he can shoot the silver feathers out of the wings, at the sacrifice of the proportional amount of energy taken to make that feather.The feathers are razor sharp, capable of cutting very easily. They can rip through surface flesh quite easily, meaning if it scrapes the side of one's body, the skin will be cut. But if it hit's one in the center, of any muscular area, the tip of the feather (about 1- 1.5 inches) is all that would go inside the one being hit. The feather size vary by feather, but generally range about 4 inches to 10 inches.


There :mokken:
 
New Character

ORPG URPG and RPB

I got permission from Bolt to use the Ferfnir Species...see how this works...

Name- Zynthreo

Title- Lone Wolf

Alignment- Chaotic Good

Gender- Male

Age- 38

Race-
Ferfnir. A race of humanoid Wolves, that have the strength of a Wolf, and the intelligence of a human.

They are a gifted race that are a Wolf sub species with some skill level of shape shifting, some having a more or less human-like human shape if they have very good skill with it or just decent, they can all freely shift between the human shape and a normal shaped Wolf at will.

Being very Wolf-like in appearance, being just as covered in fur as one a regular Wolf, only taller, standing upright on two legs (when not in their Wolf shape), it doesn't require a great deal of shapeshifting skill to make the change, it just causes for a slight downsizing and forces them into a quadruped stance, and can't run or even walk any good on two legs.

Their personality is almost always like that of a human at all times, though there is definitely a lot of Wolf in them, sometimes it shows, but generally not the vicious side of one, but more like a tame, playful one.

Their fur is usually fairly long, and varying in color, most often being similar to the colors of a normal Wolf, like a Grey Wolf, Timber Wolf, Arctic Wolf, etc., though some have odd, if not interesting patches of fur on them, or their primary color of fur being unusual (though this is very rare, especially the latter).

As for their physic, it is not very noticeable under all their fur, but they have quite muscular, compact bodies, that can withstand a lot of damage from attacks without it hindering their fighting ability.

Even though they generally like being in their human shape just fine, some people mistake them for Werewolves when appearing to them like this. It is an unfortunate fate for the race, many of them spend more time than they would like in their quadruped Wolf shape to avoid causing such alarm to people they come across, while some don't mind being in that form at all.

They like to be around people quite a lot, so as a result, there may some Wolves seen around that are actually beings of the Ferfnir race, doing what they must to be accepted by people and fit in better.

Depending on the environment one grows up in, they may or may not have any spiritual beliefs. While most do not, those who are around people very much, particularly a community of people that go to a church in their area.

Sometimes when, due to circumstances, they must be around a certain person or group of people, some or all of which think they are a Werewolf, they may just go with it and not explain their race to them, while some will.


Appearance-
Humanoid:
In his humanoid look he can stand on two legs.His ears are both red, but the rest of his fur is black. His hands are red as well and the color reaches back to his elbows and ankle. He stands at 5' 10" and weighs just about 173 pounds. His hair is very soft and just about average in length Under his fur there is a sensible amount of body fat, however it is not noticeable through all the fur and muscle. Most of his muscle is very toned, so with his fur covering him it is hard to see his muscle structure. the end of his tail has red on it and there are two designs in red on his neck and tail. His eyes are also red. There is a crescent shaped red mark on his head.

In this form, he is capable of wielding some weaponry, but not all of it. Things like swords and such, anything of the type, but nothing mechanical.

He wears a necklace that has an eagle talon on it at all times. On both sides of the eagle talon are red beads. He wears no shirt and no clothing at all on his upper body. His lower body is covered by a very loose fitting pear of black jeans with red stitching. Here are various chrome chains on both pant legs and chrome rings. Link. A black leather belt with a buckle showing a wolf howl at the moon holds his pants up

He does not wear shoes and he will not. It is highly uncomfortable. He also will never wear any armors, it doesn't suit his style.
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Wolf:
The same patterns in his humanoid form are carried onto his wolf form. His fur however is slightly varied. He almost seems to have a mane of longer fur around his neck and carried to right between his front legs, but that is where it fades off. He no longer wears any clothes in this form.

Again, his ears and eyes are both red with a red crescent shape on his head. An odd design making an X with a line through it is still seen at his neck, but now it is larger in proportion to his body. Same designs and patters of read are on his feet and tail.

However, now he has taken on the size of the average wolf, standing at 3'2" and weighing in at 96 pounds.
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Personality- He will never begin a conversation, but he also will never back out of one. This can give the impression that he is anti-social, but in reality he's just rather shy. He's not too quick to open up his emotions to anyone, in fact, he tries to hide them because he doesn't want to seem "soft".

Although he does not have a particularly bad temper, certain things can get on his nerves to a point that he will do harm. These things include approaching him with insult, seeing someone making fun of the weaker, hunting jokes, and humor about animal cruelty. Once he is angered it is difficult for him to calm down. He usually won't calm down until he hurts either a person or hits something, but it also is not easy for him to get angered to that point.

He has a strong sense of justice, defending the victims of those that have done wrong, and punishing those that do the wrong. Despite his sense of justice, when he feels he is doing something that is for the greater good, he will not hesitate to harm and possibly kill anyone that gets in his way, depending on the person. If the one in his way is simply a mercenary, he will not kill them, as they are just doing as they were hired, but if it is someone doing this of free will he will harm them as necessary. Death is usually only inflicted on those that do wrong to others as well as him.

His friends are held dear to him, and they become first priority for him. He will risk his life to ensure the safety of those he deems as friends. However, earning his trust and his friendship are difficult to achieve. He must know the person well before calling them a friend.

First Impression- He seems like a dark presence at first, with his dark fur and red eyes, some may even call him frightening. Due to his wolf-like appearance some people would either be attracted to him in curiosity or scared away by fear. However his eyes do have a slight look of innocence to them.

Strength- By mouth he can't carry any really heavy object at all, but with his hands he could carry at most 135 pounds for about 5 minutes before needing to set the object down and rest his arms and legs from the strain.

In combat, a punch would do about 150/600 to a foe, and a slash with his claws would do just about 175/600

Vitality- Better at enduring physical attacks than magical attacks, he is pretty toughened up for a fight. An average fighter with average strength attacking him would deal just about 120/600 damage to him. This will depend on where the blow is hit and how solid the hit was. If it were to hit his head it might do a little more damage than that, but he could still be capable of fighting and holding his own.

A magic attack will be worse for him to endure, but he will not die from an average spell. His endurance to magic put on a 100 point scale is just about a 25, so one average spell would do just about 172-200/600 damage to him. This once again varies by the blow itself along with the magic type and the spell itself.

Speed- He is faster in his wolf form than his humanoid form. In his wolf form he can run just about 96 KPH, but this will restrict his turning abilities and a turn may result in his momentum sliding him into a wall or some other object.

In his humanoid form his maximum speed that can only be reached on all four legs is at about 86 KPH.

Stamina- In a normal battle he could last at maximum 17 minutes, assuming he had done some recent activity to already increase his heart rate. At an all out sprint in his wolf form he can last just about 73 minutes, as he is a wolf. However running in his humanoid form would last nearly 57 minutes, since his added body weight would slow him down.

Reflexes- During combat, he becomes highly alert of his surroundings and makes sure he knows exactly how many people, friend or foe, are near him. He looks at a certain point that makes them easy to identify by a glance so that he knows if someone that is his enemy is coming for him and if it is a friend. This way, he will not attack allies.

Dodging a projectile attack like an arrow shot from the classic bow would be easy to dodge. When dodging melee attacks he needs a good opening, because he is not the master of avoiding hits, but he can manage just fine, only getting a few small scratches. Often times only his fur gets cut. A quick jolt backwards is easy for him to use, but he knows the risks of it, so he doesn't particularly use this.

Usually his uses his reaction timing to overpower his foes with a stronger attack in hopes to knock their attack back and avoid hitting him, but he won't try this with someone that has a blade.

Weapons- His own claws

Abilities-
Natures Predator: Using this ability starts with him letting out a loud howl to the sky. It allows him to increase his attack speed. Although his running speed is still the same, he can now move his arms at a faster rate, allowing him to thrash about at intense speeds and not stop. This lasts just about 45 seconds before wearing off. Once it does wear off he will then feel the fatigue as if he were to attack like that without being in this state.

Magic- Incapable of using magic.

Other skills- Speaking the human language after extensive learning and studying. His english is very fluid.

History- He was the only surviving cub of his parents. He did have an older brother whom vanished one day upon going hunting. It was assumed that the human hunters got a hold of him. He also had a younger sister that was 4 years younger than him, but she died of natural causes shortly after her birth. In those days, Zynthreo had to take care of his parents. they wanted another child, and Zynthreo wanted to have a younger sibling, but it was hard for the couple to have another after the death of their daughter. He would support them by hunting for food and other such things.

In his little Ferfnir village was another ferfnir by the name of Xenith. Xenith was two years older than Zynthreo, and Zynthreo was also one of his common targets. Xenith tormented Zynthreo and others by doing things such as pulling there tails, and with Zynthreo being 2 years younger, there was nothing he could do about it. However, once Zynthreo turned 20 years of age, he left the area.

His parents were influencing him to go out to find other places to see, but for a while he did not want because he didn't want to leave his parents side. But eventually they convinced him. And so he left the area in hopes to see the world.

For the next 5 years he would see a lot of the world. Hiding in his wolf form he would walk around human villages, studying their way of life. He had often seen people beaten and/or mistreated, simply because they were weaker and easy targets.

One day he saw a bunch of kids surrounding two other kids outside of a village. Being infuriated by this site, he growled at these kids while still in in his wolf form. They all just laughed at him, and one picked up a stick and approached him. He knew what this meant, he was going to be attacked, and so he changed into his humanoid form right in front of all of them. He began to maul the kid with the stick, but not kill him. In fact, he purposely didn't even go deeper in cuts and scratches than the skin.

However, over the years of seeing this happen, he began to become less tolerable and a bit more violent. If he were to have seen the same situation as before he probably would have seriously injured the boy instead of simply scratching and scaring. He still maintained his sense of right and wrong regardless of what he saw, and now whenever he sees events of someone doing wrong, he will always interfere unless pre-occupied by something more important.
 
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Mystro Kajiki

All three RP, as usual.

Name: Mystro Kajiki

Title: Music's Demon ; Demon of sound ; Demonic musician ; Maestro of Hell

Alignment: Chaotic good

Race: Dragoon + Human hybrid

Dragoons, often called Dragon knights, are demons granted with physical aspects of dragons. Usually, they are ferocious and ruthless. They have wings, tails, horns, and other draconian properties. They stand just as tall as humans, and usually have the same amount of fingers as humans. Their skin comes in many colors. their eyes have various unseen hues.

The rest is human. However, when a dragoon is mixed with a human, the human half is the most shown. They have human minds, and in the nights of the waxing moon (When the moon is going from new to full) in the moonlight, the dragoon side shows. Their draconian properties show themselves, often causing excruciating pain in the hybrid. However, only 1bout 1/3 of their draconian properties show themselves. In the Waning moon (full to new) they do the same thing, but this time around, 2/3 of their draconian properties reveal themselves. During the new moon, they become a full blown dragoon until the sun hit's their skin.

Hybrids also are often given inhuman powers, usually being very unique and unheard of.

Gender: Male

Age: 32

Appearance: His skin is very pale and he stands at 6'1" tall. His muscles are well toned but not very large, he has the body of a long distance runner. His eyes are a golden yellow but light reflects off of them as if they are made of mirrors, so looking him in the eyes it looks like there is no coloring at all. Long black, untamed hair flows off of his head. He wears no armor, but he does wear several layers of clothing. there is a white undershirt completely hidden by his layers. A black T-shirt rest over that. This is covered in yet another white long sleeve shirt. All shirts under this one are tucked in and completely hidden. A white jacket with black trimming flies loose from his upper body. He has a pitch black cloth belt holding up a pair of white dress pants.

Bandages cover his left wrist and right arm. He wears black suede shoes that reach just above his ankles. These are steel toed. He always wears a porcelain mask that resembles his face perfectly, however it is all white.
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Draconian release appearance:

Waxing moon: This is his most human release. He grows claws instead of hands. These tear out of his skin. His dragoon scales are not fully formed, but they act as chain mail. The scales start below his neck and stop just at the wrist. The scales are hard enough to stop him from being cut with weak force. The scales are mostly white with an odd black one here and there. They do seem to shimmer in the light, like little mirrors. What seems like should be horns are only starting to form on his head, and look like small nubs. He now has fangs.

Waning moon: This time around, he has horns that are full fledged. His scales are now harder, allowing him to prevent getting cut by a blade swung with moderate force. He would still feel the impact though, and it is not impossible to cut him. His claws are now sharper His scales still do not cover his face, however now the all white scales have a black design of a rose vine, but no rose. Instead, the thorny looking design simple wraps around his entire body. But not half of his hand is covered in scales and his eyes have become completely yellow, identical color to his full human form, excluding his pupil.

Full Dragoon release: The skin and scales on his back tears open and a pair of wings rip out of his flesh and unfold. On his cheeks, the scales have begun to form, but only the black ones, and all it is is a thin bit of the thorns reaching about an inch away from where his lips end. The inner half of his wings are bare skin and the bone structure is visible on the inner halves. The outter halves are covered in shiny black and white scales, imitating the previous designs. He scales on his wings are extra hard and can generally stop any blades with great ease. On his back, red scales have formed to show a rose. Reference this link

Personality: In order to get what you want, you have to kill. That's his number one belief. But he generally only fights for the common good of man. All he wants is people to be treated properly, rich or poor, people are people. But he will not fight the cause of this, instead he will fight the big head of power. Only if it is for the good of man kind. He's also not afraid to donate money and services to those that need it. He is surprisingly charitable for his looks, and loves to help out in the community wherever his services are required. But he also hates staying in the same scenery for too long, so he tends to move a lot.

He never has any regrets, even if he mistakenly killed an innocent substandard. In fact, he does not hesitate to kill hostages, only because they are in the way. He will ruthlessly cut down anyone involved in some sort of harm. If he were to hear about something happening and the bearer of bad news asked what he was going to do, the reply would be, "Every last fucker who had anything to do with this." That's just how he works.

As for his friends, well, he doesn't have much. Who he is willing to call a friend is under the same judgment as his enemies, so a betrayal would not effect him emotionally. Approaching him with insult usually leads to a decapitation, unless the insulter is drunk, or has probable cause. If he is being insulted for killing a close one, he lets it slide. The pain is understandable. His enemies are the people around him. He does not trust, but he is not paranoid either. In mid battle, he might trust a person here and there, but only temporarily.

First impression: It's hard to tell if he is good or evil. He always looks so light and full of good, but his face shows a blank and flat look. Even his speech is flat. His emotions are so hidden, it's also hard to tell what his true desires are.

Strength: Delivering a single punch to a single brick, the brick wold easily shatter. he can deal about 175/600 to an average enemy by putting forth some good effort in his punch. Lifting, he can lift up to 75 pounds each arm, but bench about 180.

Vitality: He's not used to taking punches. A single punch of average strength would cause him to take a step back, but not too big of a deal. But he might bruise quite easily. He does however had a very high tolerance for pain, so although it may hurt him quite a bit, he will have no problem continuing.

Magically, his defense is slightly higher. He can take quite a few average strength magic blows and keep going. In some cases, he will even walk right through them, depending on the spell.

Speed: After a nice build up, he can run just about 19 miles an hour. It only takes him about 2 seconds to achieve this speed. However, his sprint speed is just about 25 miles an hour.

Stamina: At a jog, he could go on for about 40 minutes before stopping, but in an all out run, he could go for nearly 32 minutes. A sprint would last a mere 1 minutes, so it doesn't give him a particularly large speed advantage.

Reflexes: He has had a lot of experience, so his reflexes to attacks is very fast, and to parry attacks is second nature to him, but he hardly ever dodges, so when dodging, he might be slightly delayed.

Weapon: He can use any weapon he chooses, but his signature style and preferred choice is to carry two identical swords. Both swords are double edged 48 inch long white blades with black handles, both handles are 3 hands sizes. He has no sheaths, instead when walking casually, he has his swords tucked through his belt. He never has seen a need for a sheath, he likes to show he has a real weapon. The guards on the swords are plated with gold, but they are actually made from pure iron, unlike the rest of the steel blade. They weigh just about 32 pounds each.

Abilities: Being a human and dragoon hybrid, the moon influences his changes at nightly hours. The different moons all change the effect on his transformations. During the waxing moon, the transformations are less cruel. Every single thing that transforms on him causes severe pain, usually causing him to scream, however in the waxing moon, it is not so bad and he can contain his shouts. After a lifetime of pain every night, you get used to it.

In the waning moon, more potent draconian changes occur. This also causes great pain for him, but once again, he can deal with it just fine without needing to shout, but he tries to be alone because he tends to thrash about and grunt from such pain. Now his hearing is enhanced even more than it already is from his other abilities (see below). His reflexes have also sped up very slightly. But unfortunately he now has a lack of self-control, so he has to try not to start things for the sake of himself and the people around him.

In the state of change that occurs in the new moon, he will definitely scream from pain. So much as every scale causes pain in his body, so the pain, even after 32 years, is ridiculously potent. Now he has enough strength to take down a brick wall with a single punch, and his attack speed was increased so greatly that he seems to be moving in a blur. Unfortunately he has also lost all mental awareness and has absolutely no consciousness during this change, and as a result will most likely kill, or wander off, causing him to awake in potentially nasty situations. His scales in this form are harder than metal, and can stop almost any blade. His stance is also so sturdy, to knock him off his feet seems like an impossible feat. (Pun intended) Using his wings, he can fly at the same speed he runs, but in this form, his running speed is over 30 MPH and he can run for about 45 minutes like this.

Sound manipulation:
Mystro can create sound at his will. Making small volumes of sound have no effect on his energy, such as making his voice. He actually has no voice. In fact, he lost his voice when he was stabbed in his throat, but he was lucky enough to live (see history) but now he just uses his special ability to create sound to mimic his voice. He can do several things to sound, and each one will be listed as a seperate ability.

Vibrations. Sound comes from vibrations. This can make him shake some things that are not well held up apart, but this usually cannot cause buildings to collapse. This would only really be effective in making sand castles fall apart to be honest. But the other factor to this is that he can make his swords "sing" by making them vibrate. This could make a stab or cut much more lethal. Doing this at a hearable volume for 20 minutes would make him feel out of breath, as if he had just gone on a one mile jog, but he can keep going.

Volume enhancement. He can take an already made soundwave and make it louder and bigger. Example an electric guitar not being plugged into an amp can have it's volume enhanced for a concert worthy level by his power. This only drains a small bit less than creating the vibrations. This includes his voice, so he can literally scream out a whisper.

Sound touch. He can stop a soundwave with his hand, effectively stopping it before even hitting him. The sound dies shortly after he stops it. He can also send a soundwave back where it came from by striking it with his body, not his blades. Both of those cause impact on his hand that could potentially break his fingers, and there is no way to stop it, nor is there a way to know if it will happen. However, this next part of this ability drains energy instead of harming him. He can grab onto a soundwave of a volume great enough and ride it as far as he desires. each ride costs the same amount of energy, and in the daytime, he can only use this 4 times before being fully drained. However, during the waxing moon he can use this 6 times, in the waning moon, 8 times, and on the new moon, 15 times.

Soundwaves. He can make them without needing a solid or any material to vibrate, only something to carry it. He can make this any volume he chooses and he can also make the soundwave from any point around him. He has to look at the point that will be the center of the wave and then, it fires when he wants, so long as he is looking at it. But where he looks only matters for direction, he can choose the depth he chooses the soundwave, but he can only do this if it is within a 25 foot radius. One soundwave of volume enough to fuel an outdoor concert would only be able to be created at maximum 3 times in every form. This is because not only does it take energy, but it also takes a toll on his body. These soundwaves, he cannot catch or touch, so they strike him as well, but probably not as bad as the initial target. This also takes a toll on his hearing.

Sound Demon. His power is suddenly enhanced. Now he can make only single body parts ride any volume soundwaves, usually making light soundwaves from his hands to make it as though he is punching at incredible speeds, or even cutting. This lasts just about 60 seconds, plus or minus, depending on his mindset, in every form, other than the new moon. In the new moon it lasts about 90 seconds. However, this is not without a horrible price. After using this, he can no longer make any soundwaves, not even his voice. he also cannot hear. This lasts for 3 hours after using this. Luckily, he has learned to read lips very clearly.

Magic: None

Other skills: He can read lips.

History: Born eldest in a family of 4 kids, he always had to do the babysitting. But he didn't hate it, he simply did as he was told. He was knowledgeable enough to take care of his younger brother and sisters. But he decided to get out of the house as soon as possible, and so he did at 18. He got a little place of his own and stayed there for quite sometime. Swordplay came natural to him, but he began to practice with other weapons for fun. He always has hated the idea of tyranny, and he hated it when people would bring social status into an argument. Just because you have doesn't mean anything. He began to start a lot of fights with the higher up classes. This included the rich and popular. Of course, he was on the same level as them at combat, and that got his neck stabbed once. He was lucky that it was just a short blade that only cut as deep as his vocal chords. That then made him lose his voice, but proper medical attention saved his life.

2 years later, when he was 21, he could finally speak again because he had discovered his powers. But at the same time, the age of 21 turns the full production of his dragoon side, and on his 21st birthday, his dragoon half showed. His lost sanity made him kill a few innocent people on accident, and he was dubbed a criminal by the law. As a result, he did his time. He was set to be a mercenary and do the military's bidding for 10 years, where he perfected his fighting style and combat skills. Now his name is usually well-known in some areas, but only by his title. He was set free at 31 and now he lives on his own, in an area that he cannot kill any innocent people. In the middle of the forest. For a year now, he has done this.
 
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