Jin Kazama

[Shahab]

 

[iCup]

remove the choppy stock on the right, it destroys any focus in the tag.

 

[Shahab]

Do you mean the Jin Character on the right side ?

 

[Kether]

Do you mean the Jin Character on the right side ?

I like BOTH attempts, but IMO, I'd make the main text a wee bit bigger and bring it to the foreground more ... perhaps a subtle stroke will do the trick.

Nice stuff.

 

[Dalik]

Over all it's good, though the text could be a bit clearer.

 

[Shahab]

What about this ?