:seph:Excellent story! Bravo! My only critisism is when you wrote "The Shinra arrived". It should be "Then Shinra arrived". Other than that, you are a high-caliber writer. Keep practicing and you just might get famous. I really mean that too. I am about to start a story for this site now. You...
:seph:Name -Tenchi-Sama
Race -Angel
Gender -Female
Appearance -Tall. Golden skin. Solid white eyes. Wings (14' span). Long, curly, golden hair. Skinny, but STRONG! Refined X4! Drop dead gorgeous!
Attire -White Robe with gold stitching.
Personality -What do you expect, she's an angel...
A Game of Thrones by George R.R. Martin, followed by A Clash of Kings, A Storm of Swords and finally A Feast For Crows. Excellent Reads. Twisting plot that keeps you panting for more. Also The Bourne Identity, Supremacy and Ultimatum by Robert Ludlum.
Outfit Response
:jon:I like Cloud's outfit, totally B.A. Vincent's is really color coordinated, and I like the tattered cape. Tifa looked good and so did Yuffie.
:jon:Hi evrybody. I am HellRazor311. Iam so glad to find a community of FF fans. My favorite FF storyline is Advent Children. Hope to get to know a few (or alot) of you.
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