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Old July 15, 2008, 1:39 PM   #21
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Like you're gonna stop there Rene.

And the character Rene doesn't strike much as a potential villain character, and unless you modify him somewhat I can't see Shadow Mage as a real "main villain" one of many bad guys could fit though tbh.

Still, I won't try and tell you how to write your story, it's your story at the end of the day, not mine.
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Old July 17, 2008, 1:40 AM   #22
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i don't mind being a bad guy, i mean, my name itself emits that i follow darkness. as long as i get scythe, i will happily be a bad guy lol.
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Old July 28, 2008, 7:46 PM   #23
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Okay then, bitching time Julius. Firstly it's been 11 whole days since anyone posted in here and still theres no new chapter! ME WANT CHAPTER! NAO!
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Patience, I was working on it yesterday but I won't still post it until I make sure I avoid any error I might regret...

I think I'll save the word.doc file in my pen drive and keep working on it on my laptop...>__>
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Okay then, bitching time Julius. Firstly it's been 11 whole days since anyone posted in here and still theres no new chapter! ME WANT CHAPTER! NAO!
You seriously need a chill pill. I'm not even in the story and I haven't complained yet. Do I care? No, I'd rather wait for the suspense to keep building. And for writing, all you need is patience, I swear.
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okay, I know I might get flamed for this. Julius, you know we've all been waiting for you to bring up the next chapter of your story, yet I have a feeling that you've been too busy to either work on the story, or if it was completed, post it on the thread. All I'm asking for is if you could please finish up the next chapter (take your time, okay), and post it here.

BTW, I really do like the story so far.
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And I am gonna kinda flame you here, too, Arthvader.

Julius is a moderator, don't forget that and he probably has a life, too.
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