Galaxy Poems [Andromeda]

November 13, 2006, 11:20 PM

Well thought I'd make a topic and share some poems old ( and if I make some more) new.

This is an old one that I made about 2-3 months ago.

You
Where are you?

For when heavens doors are open there is no sight of you.
For when angels sing in harmony, one that wasn’t there was you.

When wolves howl on the moonlit mountains
Shiver from the cold leak through without you

Crows caw, flapping there wings hard.
My wings are closed, I feel no presence of you

For the stars shine bright in the sky
I feel a light dimming as there is no touch from you

For when I desire the protection
There was no shield of love from you

When I collapse to the floor, weakened and battered
Strength to help me along, no strong arms from you

How am I to survive? When there isn’t someone I can all my own.
Who are you?

~:*Andromeda*:~

November 14, 2006, 3:38 PM

Nice poem, dosent really rhyme but it's good

November 21, 2006, 10:33 PM

Ah I normally fill them with feelings and emotions, And we are studying some poems that don't actually ryhme. So sometimes I make themm make sense to ryhming.

Well this one has a few moderations to what it used to be. This is the modified version.

Fly On A Spiders Web

Your always there as,
you make me laugh so free.
But then I remember,
its possible your not with me.

Sat here i'm too afraid
to express myself to you.
Thinking about what you could say,
or even what you could do.

Could it be because your a little quiet,
my mind doesn't know much about you.
Is there something I don't know about?
My mind is always in thought able you.

Maybe i'm too worried
with the labringth in my mind.
Or is it what people think ,
if there by my side.

Being told to listen to myself
to the name in my heart
Will that one come?
If my mind and heart are apart?

~:*Andromeda*:~

November 22, 2006, 12:29 PM

Another great poem!
The last time i studied poems was in primary school 0.o