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Old March 31, 2008, 9:05 AM   #1
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Darkness Of Destruction

Yup! That's right! I found TDoD! I'm gonna carry on writing it!

Before that of course. Here is the cast list (This was inspired by Faith's of course )

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Rene Skylar - Played by Rene Skylar

Faith Crest - played by Faith Crest

Filden Gurito - Played by Bahamut's_Heir

Abigail Nilem - Played by Female version of Bahamut's_Heir (which isn't that hard to imagine tee hee. He's gonna hurt me now isn't he.)

Kamui - Played by Dark Fantasy X

Dawn - Played by Faith Crest with a wig

Alex/Vrael Liner - Played by evil non-identical and non-blood related twin of me

King Liner - Played by same masochistic old man from the streets. I think he;s
called tramp man or something.

Patricia Musso - Played by herself

King Julius Argexis - Played by Julius Aurelius

Queen Zeria Iiyasei (Bitch didn't take your name Julius ) - Played by herself

General Rale - Played by himself

Rowan Nightgale - Played by Robin Hood's sister

Kara Skylar - Played by herself

Lily Skylar - Played by herself

Minerva "The Merc" Liu - Played by Minerva

The Darkness Of Destruction

Chapter 1: Darkness

“What a terrible thing to happen to a once beloved kingdom wouldn’t you think?” A young voice filled the air. He was tall and had hair as black as the night sky. He was only seventeen years of age but his eyes, which were black also, told people that he had seen terrible things and looked much older than he is. He held two medium length swords and stood next to a powerfully built woman. She was of the same age as the man but her eyes, which were brown, were young and innocent. She recoiled as she stepped forward and crushed what appeared to be the charred remains of a fellow Hume. She had blonde shoulder length hair and strapped to her waist was a long thin blade made of what appeared to be red metal.

“What do you think did this?” Her voice was gentle and soft. She looked at the man deeply as if trying to persuade him to hurry up and answer her. The man walked over to the remains, crouched and lifted up the skull. It instantly turned to ash.

“There are two types of remains here.” The man said troubled “T’would appear that both beast and man attacked this kingdom but have left no trace of whom or what they could be. We know that the Kinuko Empire has been advancing but I do not believe they did this. This seems too inhumane… even for them.”

“Then that means another kingdom has added itself to this war. A kingdom that has control over savage beasts.” Her voice grew ever more anxious the more time they spent in the graveyard of the kingdom.

“Renalia has the upper hand currently but if this new empire joins forces with Emperor Liner they have already lost.” He said this as he stared at the large city two miles west. The kingdom of Tyania had once been the second largest kingdom in the whole of Earth, now it lay in ruins.

“Then the boy is our only hope...”

“Yes but he must discover his destiny himself… Remember that.”

“Fine… But know this I do not believe that the fate of the world should rest on the shoulders of this… boy.” The man laughed at this.

“But Dawn isn’t he the same age as you?” Dawn looked troubled now.

“Be that as it may Kamui, he does not have the experience needed to take on an entire kingdom!” She stormed off stopping only ten metres away before pressing a hidden button and waiting as a large machine appeared out of thin air. It was like a motorbike but had no wheels. She nimbly jumped onto it and immediately it bgan to hover. She hit the accelerator and sped off.

“I’ll see you there then.” Kamui said as darkness engulfed him.

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Yeah I know the first chapter is short, which is why the second chapter is also in here!
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Chapter 2: Rene Skylar, Faith Crest and Filden Gurito

“Wake up you lazy ass!” Rene groaned as he sat up and took the covers off his head. He shook the hair out of his eyes and smacked against the window knocking off the ninja sitting on his window sill

“Piss off Filden!” Rene shouted. His voice was deep but happy as he shouted at his best friend. As Filden hit the ground he heard a woman laughing gently. Rene slowly sat up again and peered through the window looking downwards; when he couldn’t see anyone he heard the same voice… but it was above him

“I’m up here idiot!" Her voice was light and soft and as Rene turned to face upwards he felt a large blunt instrument hit his head. The woman laughed again and Rene finally looked at her. Faith Crest was Renes other best friend. She was 17 and she had butt-length black hair and dark brown eyes. Rene had known for as long as he could remember and she was like a sister to him… though they did have frequent arguments. Faith was a telepath and the only reason she was above him was because she was channelling her energy to create a shield between her and gravity

“Argh! What the heck was that for!” He said angrily but happily as he looked at Faith carefully in case she decided to hit him again with her powers

“You’re late of course!” She said as the boy he had knocked off earlier jumped back up to the window sill

“Wanker!” He shouted as he tackled Rene back into the bedroom. Rene rolled with the tackle and kicked Filden in the stomach sending him into the wall. Rene finally looked at Filden properly. He was sixteen years old; he had brown buzz cut hair and dark brown eyes. He was two inches smaller than Rene but he made up for it in his strength and speed. Filden Gurito was a ninja.

“Hey Filden. What was you saying again Faith?” Rene asked her as she giggled silently at the pair

“Hey! I’m not done with you yet!” Filden shouted at Rene “Why’d you knock me off the window sill!” Rene stared at Filden

“Hmm. It might be because it’s Sunday and you woke me up at 10 am!”

“Umm Rene?” Faith said innocently

“What!?” Rene snapped turning to face Faith

“Umm… It’s Monday”

“… Seriously?” Faith nodded “SHIT!” Rene straight away ran about his room gathering his stuff getting ready for school “Why didn’t you wake me up earlier!” Rene shouted at them both

“We were having fun drawing on your face!” Filden said laughing and lifting up a small black pen. Rene face went from shock to anger in an instant

“You son of a bitch!” Rene shouted running towards Filden as fast as he could

“Run!?” Filden shouted to Faith as he jumped out the window

“See you at High School Rene! Hurry up!” Faith shouted waving as she floated away speedily after Filden

“Assholes.” Rene said as he cleaned his face and got into his school uniform.
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Old March 31, 2008, 5:56 PM   #2
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hey this isnt bad! keep up the writing and ill keep reading, also could you review my story, its ff darkness chronicles, thx!

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Chapter 3: High School

“YOU’RE LATE!” Screamed Mr Cooper. He was a tall bald man who taught P.E and R.E. Rene hated him and Cooper hated him back

“Sorry sir…” Rene grumbled as he saw Faith frowning at him out of the corner of his eye “I woke up late…” Straight away he regretted his words

“WELL LEARN TO SET YOUR BLOODY ALARM!!” Cooper shouted at the top of his lungs. Rene sighed

“Yes sir…”

“Now then go to your seat and open your textbook to page 56. We’re learning about Judaism today.” As soon as Rene got to his seat Faith, who sat right next to him, spoke to him but not aloud as they would be shouted at by Cooper but by Faiths telepathic powers

You okay? Faith said

Pissed off. Why do we have to get the biggest arsehole in the whole of school as a tutor and teacher! Rene replied acidly.

Faith giggled and Cooper stared at her coldly

Where’s Filden? I gotta beat up that shit bag later. Rene asked Faith
As he said this to her though he felt a small hard object hit the back of his head, without meaning to he said “ouch” Cooper looked back at him with cold fury in his eyes and went back to writing angrily on the chalkboard, Rene turned around and saw who had hit him. Alex Eagles, one of the big bullies in school. Rene and him had hated each other for year. Alex was talking to his cronies holding in plain sight a slingshot. Rene scowled at him and stuck his middle finger at him.

Oh he had to go home. He left his bag. Faith answered Renes question
Just as she said this though the door opened quickly and in rushed Filden

“Grr! How many more people are missing today?!” Cooper bellowed at Filden

“Uhh sorry!” Filden said cockily

“I beg your pardon!” Cooper shouted

“Sorry… Sir?” Filden finally realised the word he had left out
“Detention! After school tonight!” Filden groaned and almost got thrown by Cooper to his seat. “And you also!” He said pointing at Rene. As soon as Filden sat down Faith put him into the telepathic conversation

Wanker. Filden said almost immediately

Tee hee at least I haven’t got a detention! Faith spoke rubbing it in there faces

Shut up Faith. Rene said angrily, he was already in a bad mood now. Oh yeah and Filden I’m gonna beat you up later! He laughed silently at this showing he was only kidding. Rene sat back and opened his textbook to make it appear as though he was interested in the lesson

Hey guys! After your detention do you wanna go to Abigail’s? Faith asked keenly. It was no big secret that Filden had the biggest crush on her ever but he was too shy to ever admit it to her face

Sure! How come she isn’t in school tonight? Filden asked

No big secret why you wanna go eh Filden? Rene said laughing. Faith giggled then answered Fildens question

It’s her 17th birthday today. Her parents are letting her have the day off. Faith answered

Lucky bugger. Rene and Filden said together

Less than a month to go now Filden! Faith said happily Me and Rene are thinking of getting you a joint present… Is there anything you want or need?

I could do with a new shuriken. My old one is rusting away. Filden said sombrely
It wouldn’t be in that state if you took care of it. Rene said accusingly
Your one to talk! Your room is a mess 24/7! Faith exclaimed jokingly as she said this Alex sent another object towards Renes head hitting him hard in the back of his neck. Rene stood up immediately spun around and confronted Alex

“What the bloody hell was that for!” Rene shouted at him. Alex then stood up too.

“Can’t take a joke eh Skylar?” His voice was a sarcastic annoying drone.

“SIT DOWN BOTH OF YOU!” Cooper bellowed at them. They grudgingly took there seats both knowing there was gonna be a fight once lesson ended. The rest of the lesson went pretty much as it began. Talking telepathically, Getting things thrown at Renes head and being shouted at by Cooper. Once the bell went all eyes were on Rene and Alex. Everyone stood up and slowly went outside. As soon as they were out Alex started

“Aww poor little Skylar. Can’t take a tiny little joke can he! Freaking weirdo!” He said taunting Rene

“Least me dad ain’t in prison for being caught with a rent boy Alex” Rene replied sarcastically

“Don’t you dare say anything about my dad!” Alex shouted over the “oohs” of the crowd that had circled around them. Rene looked around and couldn’t see Faith or Filden

“Aww poor Alex can’t take a tiny little joke.” Rene said mimicking Alex’s voice. Alex made the first move. He charged towards Rene fist in the air. He went to punch Rene but Rene easily blocked the blow. He grabbed Alex’s outstretched arm and twisted it behind his back before kicking him in the butt and pushing him forward forcing him to hit into a wall. Alex sprang back with a roundhouse kick Rene hadn’t been expecting and got hit in the head knocking the wind out of him. He regained his composure and punched Alex 3 times in the head in rapid succession before being dragged back by someone he couldn’t see. The fight was being broken up. Damn, Rene thought, just as I was getting into it as well! He finally realised that Faith and Filden was dragging him. He broke free of there grasps and confronted them

“Why’d you break it up! I was finally teaching that arsehole a lesson!” Rene shouted at them angrily.

“We’re sorry but someone went and got a teacher.” Faith said apologising

“Yeah it was either beat the shit outta him or get expelled!” Filden said loudly trying to get Rene to come round. Rene looked at the ground. He knew they were right but was too stubborn to accept it.

“Yeah, yeah. C’mon lets go get some lunch.” Rene said as he felt something drip from his lip. He put his fingers to his lips and realised that he’d cut his lip. “Shit. How bad do I look?”

“You’re gonna have a few bruises and a black eye by the looks of it.” Faith said motheringly “It’s gonna sting like hell later”

“Can’t you heal it or something Faith?” Filden asked

“Sorry don’t do healing remember?” Faith replied

“It doesn’t matter. Come on let’s just get this day over.” Rene said finally. He looked at Faith and smiled weakly trying not to re-open the cut on his lip. Both Rene and Faith walked onwards but Filden just stood there shaking his head at the pair of them. When are they gonna realise that they both fancy each other? Filden thought, After that the day ran more smoothly. Rene got shouted at a few times but that was normal. Faith got teased by some girls saying that Rene was weak and he was gonna get the battering of his life later but Faith just ignored them whilst using her powers to empty all the ink cartridges in their bags creating massive stains. Filden got in a fight with some 18 year olds and ended up having to run for his life. Finally school was over for the day.
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Chapter 4: The Kinuko Campaign

“Advance our men to Kenria.” The Emperor of the mighty Kinuko Kingdom ordered his General. Emperor Jeod Liner was 57 years of age and had a short white beard and old dark brown eyes. His hair was also white but stood above it was a magnificent crown of gold. It had six spire like points and had small rubies encrusted into each one. Strapped to his waist was a long blade.

“Sir yes sir.” The General replied saluting. Few had seen the generals face as he wore his bright silver armour and his silver helm all the time. “Shall I send a message to the Beran ordering them to do the same?”

“Your majesty I must disagree with General Adams. If the soldiers even glimpsed the terrible entities we have allied ourselves with, morale will drop greatly!” The Emperors head-Aid argued.

“Hmm… I have to agree with you Lloyd. We do not need our men disturbed when we are just over two months away from invading Renalia.” The Emperor spoke with great authority. “Send them to the south side of Renalia away from our men.”

“Yes Your Highness.” And with that the General left. Emperor Liner heaved himself over to his thrown and beckoned everybody out of the room apart from Lloyd “Lloyd. How fare my son and daughter?”

“We have no word from your daughter. But it still appears she still hates you my liege.” As Lloyd said this Liner sighed heavily

“And my son?”

“Vrael has made contact with the target. He says he will report in soon.” Lloyd finished. The Emperor nodded.

“I am tired and old Lloyd. Soon I will pass from this world to the next, but I do not believe Vrael to be ready to command a kingdom. When I pass on, help him as much as you can.”

“Yes Your Highness. I shall help him to the fullest of my abilities, but you shall not pass soon I pray?” Liner smirked at the man. Lloyd was like a brother to him and like an uncle to his son. 3 years ago his daughter had run away. She incapacitated 4 of the royal guards and escaped north with the royal blade of Kinuko. “Leave me now Lloyd. I need to rest.”

“Yes sir.” He then left the royal hall allowing the Emperor to sleep.
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Chapter 5: Abigail Nilem

“Hurry up! We were meant to meet her there half an hour ago!” Faith shouted at both Rene and Filden “Ooh she’s gonna be mad!”

“It’s not our fault we got detentions!” Filden argued back, Rene stared at him.

“Shut up Filden! You know Faith will have a go at us if you argue with her!” Rene and Filden laughed but when Faith glared at him Rene stopped immediately and Filden got slapped by Faith lightly causing him to scowl and hurry up. 10 Minutes later when they finally got to there destination they immediately heard a stern voice

“It’s about bloody time!” A 17 year old girl shouted at the 3 of the “I’ve been waiting for 40 minutes! Do you know how annoying it is to have to listen to your parents drone about whether they should actually get new curtains or not!”

“Sorry Abby but these goofballs got themselves detentions!” Faith said to the girl. She had long purple hair and light blue eyes

“Idiots! Oh well never mind. Hey Rene, hey Filden.” She was wearing her usual outfit which consisted of a red sweater with long sleeves, but showing her stomach and black plain trousers, with a short red skirt around the top, Rene and Filden were still in uniform but Faith had gone home and changed into her clothes. She was wearing a black loose vest and a long black skirt. She wore black high heels as well. “Hey! Go home and get changed into your clothes! Meet us in the city in an hour or else!” This being directed at Filden and Rene

“Fine fine” Filden huffed “We’ll see you there. Rosalia, right?”

“Of course!” Faith said enthusiastically “See you soon” Then both Faith and Abigail walked off. When they had walked off Rene turned to Filden as they were walking back to there homes.

“When are you gonna ask her out!” Rene shouted happily when the girls were out of ear-shot

“Oh shut up Rene!” Filden replied acidly. They turned the corner and stopped outside Fildens house “It’s not like she even likes me back!”

“Oh shut up! Of course she does! You’re both just too shy to bloody well admit it!”

“Abby? Shy? Get real! She’s the most outgoing person we know!”

“Filden mate, she is shy about you. Only you don’t realise it.” Filden went to his front door and looked back to Rene

“I’ll think about it.” Filden shouted “I’ll see you at sky station!” Rene nodded and ran to his house. When he had gotten dressed. He stood in front of a mirror and made sure he was looking okay. He was wearing a light red jacket with no sleeves, a red belt, and baggy white trousers with blue trainers. It was almost summer and it was very hot so he decided not to bother wearing a shirt underneath his jacket. He grabbed some back to money and headed off back to Fildens.

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“Urgh! That bastard gave me a damned black eye!” Alex shouted as he entered his house. A few of his cronies were with him as usual and had to agree that if the fight hadn’t been broken up Alex would have been beaten to shit. One of the cronies stepped forward and spoke in a dumb deep voice

“Uhh… Alex? If you wanna get back at him. I heard he’s goin’ to the city with his friends. We can beat him up there if you want?”

“Hmm what a great idea…” He walked to a mirror and glanced at himself with disdain. He looked like a younger version of his father. He had long brown hair and piercing blue eyes. His face was emotionless and oft times he barely thought himself Hume. “Let’s go.”

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“About time Filden! What were you doin’?” Rene asked Filden as he left

“Ed needed some advice about an airship he was fixin’ up.” Filden replied. Other than being a ninja he was also an engineer. His uncle Ed was teaching him as much as he can but Filden had far exceeded him now and was practically teaching Ed and not the other way round. “Let’s get goin or we’ll miss the sky train.”

“Umm Filden? You got a little something on your face.” Rene said pointing at the oil on his face.

“Oh crap.” He said as he rubbed it off his face. He was wearing a brown sleeveless jacket with way too many pockets and a white shirt. He wore blue baggy trousers, brown gloves and black boots.

“Aren’t you a bit hot under that?” Rene asked jokingly

“Nah I got blood as cold as ice!” Filden replied grinning “C’mon or we’ll miss the sky train.” He said as he walked off towards the station
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Chapter 6: Rosalia

“We’re gonna miss it!” Filden shouted as they ran through the sky train station towards the train

“Oh hell if we do.” Rene shouted as the train started moving. As they got closer the train started to hover and Filden realised it was an open-top train “Oh thank god for that!” he exclaimed as he just grabbed onto the railing and lifted himself onto the deck of the train. Rene jumped as high as he could and only just managed to grab the rail. He threw himself over it and landed with a thud next to Filden

“Thanks for the help.” Rene said sarcastically. Now that he was sorted he finally looked at the train properly. About 15 years ago scientists discovered ways to make new types of machines. Rene didn’t understand it but Filden found it amazing

“This is one the new trains! It has a GFX-14 Turbo hover engine! Wow we’re gonna be there in no time!” Filden shouted happily. The train was sort of like a very long bus except it was bright silver and it was hovering. As they rose above the clouds it started getting a lot colder despite it being near summer.

“God you’re such a tech geek. C’mon lets go inside I’m freezing my arse off.” Rene said rubbing his hands together

“I am not a tech geek!” He shouted, he started to get cold too and walked inside after Rene. The inside of the train was bright red and had over twenty chairs . “Well I guess we may as well take a seat.” He sat down next to a window, as he sat down the P.A went off

Ding dong

“Thanks for flying with Skye’s Sky Trains we will be arriving in the capital city of Renalia in 1 hour. Please enjoy your stay in Rosalia.” The voice was that of a young woman as usual.

Ding dong

“Be there in no time huh?” Rene queried

“Umm… Maybe it’s a GSX-13 not 14.” Filden said sadly

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“Well we better go find ‘