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Bully, the Poem
She thinks she is pretty,
But no she is not,
Because a good personality
She has not got,
She thinks she is better
Than Everyone else
But the truth is that she is just FOOLING HERSELF!
She takes out her anger
On people like you,
But don't be put down
She is jealous, it's true!
You are better than her,
So just be all smiles,
Then you'll beat her in life,
By a million miles.
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Ooh quite good. It has a lot of truth and feeling in it. The rhythm is slightly off at one point but apart from that is good...now you goota comment on mines
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Thanks guys.
I don't usually write poems and stuff just this subject really gets to me and I wrote it just cause it was running through my head a while ago, and Wolf I will comment on one of yours soon so
Because I believe in such a thing as being too late.
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I like how the first line goes against what the second lines says and so on, it really brings something to the poem. I really like how every other line seems to rhyme nearly all the way though.
Great work, keep it up.
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I'm not loving you the way I wanted to.
I can't keep my cool so I keep it true.
I got somethin' to lose, so I gotta move.
I can't keep myself and still keep you too. ~Love Lockdown~
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Bully, the Poem 
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