Rieko & Coco - RPB Version

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Player Character's Name: Rieko & Coco

Alignment: Lawful Neutral

Race: Humans

Gender: Male (Rieko)/Female (Coco)

Age: 23 (Rieko)/21 (Coco)

Rieko's Appearance: Rieko has gray and brown hair that is pinned up into a black and gold bandanna over his brown eyes. His character model is seen with a white, silver, and yellow coat that hangs past his waist. He wears silver and dark gray robe pants with and a pair of sandals. Rieko is also seen with fair skin underneath blue and red tattoo marks. He wears a technological silver and ruby bracelet on his right wrist.

Coco's Appearance: While standing as tall as many male characters, a slightly shorter girl is often seen following Rieko around with bright cyan hair and green eyes. Coco, as he calls her, has a lotus flower in her hair and runs around with a bright sky blue and sea green dress. The dress is long and puffy and shows only the lower legs covered by fish net stockings and boots. Lotus pedals float in the air when Coco runs or in battle. She wears a technological silver and ruby bracelet on her right wrist.

Rieko's Personality: Rieko is more reserved than most people in the media arts and advertising industries. He is much more mature than one might expect, and he becomes a little bit of a shock to his partner named Coco. He's a natural leader, and he's great at solving problems. He comes off as a cold person, but he has a good sense of honor. He doesn't think much about morals when it comes to the sake of honor.

Coco's Personality: Coco comes off very immature for her age. She has a bubbly personality that Rieko enjoys. Despite how she comes off, she's very intelligent. She believes that one should do and take anything they want as long as it makes them happy. She doesn't like things getting too chaotic and prefers keeping an order about life.

Rieko's Strength: He has average Strength because he's a magic based character. Only his Partner Skills have a high level of physical damage. Refer to Partner Skills.

Rieko's Vitality: He has a high level of Vitality. He'd take minimum damage unless hit by a combo or enemy skill. His HP (Hit Points) aren't very high.

Rieko's Speed: He has average Speed unless he uses Lucky Stars. He can normally dodge arrows unless hit by a master archer. He has a good reaction time and initiative. His movement and attack speed are doubled when using Lucky Stars. Refer to Partner Skills.

Rieko's Stamina: He has a high level of Stamina because of his skills. He can recover SP (Skill Points) inside and outside of battle. He starts with 800SP. Each round will give 2D6 of SP recovery. This rate doesn't change in or out of combat.

Coco's Strength: She has average Strength, but a high level of physical damage shows when using Partner Skills. Refer to Partner Skills.

Coco's Vitality: She has a high level of Vitality and HP. Damage is transferred to Rieko since battles only use Rieko's attributes, HP, and SP. Refer to Fighting Style.

Coco's Speed: She has average Speed unless she uses Lucky Stars. Her movement and attack speed are doubled when using Lucky Stars. Refer to Partner Skills.

Coco's Stamina: She has average Stamina because of Partner Skills. Partner Skills use Rieko's SP. Refer to Fighting Style and Partner Skills.

Fighting Style: Battles only use Rieko's attributes, HP, and SP since Rieko is the main fighter. Rieko and Coco are magically linked. He stays in front of her during the battle. Coco moves back and forth whenever Rieko moves to follow his movement. Coco is only involved with Partner Skills when she can jump towards the enemy to attack. She positions herself behind Rieko after she's finished. Rieko is a staff fighter based off of Japanese martial arts. Coco wields a scythe and uses an adaptation of a Japanese martial art called Naginatajutsu.

Weapon Choice: Rieko's staff is called Till the End of the Age. It's a long stick staff that's usually held in his right hand and looks plain and simple. The crooked staff comes up to a hook with a glowing blue crystal ball hovering inside. Coco's scythe is called Flower Bed. It's usually held to the side with her right arm, and the flower design at the end of the pole can open like a blooming flower. Pieces of metal and ceramic start to unfold and reform itself like a puzzle. In a second, the full bloom shows brilliant yellow glass shards with pieces of hidden pedals that form a scythe blade.

Abilities:
  • Staff - a three swing combo with a staff for minimum damage.
  • Punch - a power jab.
  • High Kick - a high kick towards the head.
  • Low Kick - a low kick towards the knees.
  • Sweep - a leg sweep.
  • Uppercut - an uppercut towards the jaw.
  • Jump - jumping backward or forward.
  • Back Jump - jumping off of a back wall.
  • Throw - a grab from the front followed by a throw.
  • 12 Hit Combo - a series of hits using a staff and hands.

Magic Skills:
  • Rue Juru - (Water) columns of ice hit area of enemies within range. 15SP
  • Lei Rin - (Light) single target gets hit with rapid balls of light from the sky. 20SP
  • Gambler's Call - random status effect on single enemy. 25SP
  • Ripped Mummy - sleep status on area of enemies within range. 25SP
  • Pha Repth - heals more severe wounds and restores a moderate amount of energy. 45SP
  • Pha Undine - (Water) summons a powerful water tower underneath a monster, the water then freezes and explodes not only killing the target monster, but sending damaging shards to the monsters around it. 45SP

Partner Skills:
  • Take Me Out - Coco jumps in for three wide swings followed by an overhead swing. 15SP
  • Hey! Stop Looking at Her! - Coco jumps in for an attack from the air with two swings and a power swing. 20SP
  • Lucky Stars - Coco jumps in, and gold stars fall over them. They have their movement and attack speed greatly increased. 25SP
  • Dinner and Dancing - Coco jumps in for an angled attack designed to pierce through a target's defense. 25SP
  • Scathe - Coco's scythe glows a purple light as she jumps in front of Rieko and sends out a large energy slash that goes through multiple enemies. 30SP
  • Lotus Flower - Coco jumps in and sweeps under the enemy and slams them up into the air, follows up by leaping into the air, slashing into a circle, and finally slamming the scythe into the enemy where both her and the enemy land on the ground. 35SP
  • Coco's Grace - a rare skill that allows both characters to perform one massive physical attack by boosting one's soul with magic. This hits for non-elemental damage for area of enemies. 45SP

History: Rieko joined The World MMO after being invited by Coco who had been playing for a while. When asked to log in with his new M2D handheld and visor, he ended up spending nights with Coco online instead of one of them asking the other for a normal date. They met at a zoo where Coco works as a zoologist and gives tours. It was at the koala exhibit where she was showing koala bears to a tour of elderly people. Rieko told her he was testing new M2D handhelds for the console company he works for. He has the prototype. Coco later bought her own M2D handheld and visor after production was started. Rieko and Coco found themselves invited to a tournament, and they decided to take the detour. They were taught by the same mysterious person who invited them that they can surpass their limits and no longer have to stay in the game.

Rieko's real name is Heng. Coco's real name is Yingtai. They're used to referring to each other in their in game names. They heard about quests in The World, but they never expected to learn how to use their abilities outside of cyberspace. They started to learn how to connect to cyberspace and machines anywhere, and both of them learned how to connect technology with magic energy. A major part of Rieko's growth came from the person who invited them to the tournament. Rieko is still learning how anything like their skills can exist in the real world as it does in cyberspace.

Rieko and Coco don't know what they can expect at the tournament. They started getting information about different battle areas. Their battle area is a snowy bridge on Mount Fuji. They showed up to the place where different people were supposed to meet. Upon their arrival, they decide to get a hotel room. They wait while being pampered until the tournament begins. They started taking the appearance of their characters in The World because of the tournament. Rieko and Coco take the time to work on the highly technological bracelets charged with magic energy that allow them to perform their skills.

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Appearance: Rieko has gray and brown hair that is pinned up into a black and gold bandanna over his brown eyes. His character model is seen with a white, silver, and yellow coat that hangs past his waist with a bracelet on his right wrist. He wears silver and dark gray robe pants with and a pair of sandals. Rieko is also seen with fair skin underneath blue and red tattoo marks. While standing as tall as many male characters, a slightly shorter girl is often seen following Rieko around with bright cyan hair and green eyes. Coco, as he calls her, has a lotus flower in her hair and runs around with a bright sky blue and sea green dress. The dress is long and puffy and shows only the lower legs covered by fish net stockings and boots. She carries a scythe that looks like a flower blooming into a scythe blade.

Personality: Rieko's more reserved than most people in the media arts and advertising industries. He is much more mature than one might expect, and he becomes a little bit of a shock to his friend Coco who comes off very immature for her age. Her bubbly personality got his attention at a local zoo where she works as a zoologist and gives tours.

Okay...

Since your RPB profile is dealing with two characters. I would suggest you separate paragraphs so that each paragraph would pertain to one of the two characters, this of course means that you will have to lengthen the Appearance tab a bit so we can get to know more of what Rieko & Coco would look like. Your Personality tab should also be separated and lengthened to reflect this as well.

Vitality: He has a very high level of Vitality because of Aura. He'd take minimum damage unless hit by a combo or enemy skill. Refer to Other Skills.

Speed: He has average Speed unless he uses Lucky Stars. He can normally dodge arrows unless hit by a master archer. He has a good reaction time and initiative. Refer to Skills.

Stamina: He has high level of Stamina because of his skills. He can recover SP (Skill Points) inside and outside of battle.

Four things: What happens if Rieko does not use Aura? What is his speed and agility when he uses Lucky Stars. How much can Rieko's Skill Points can he recover inside and outside of battle? What is Coco's stats in terms of these?

Weapon Choice: Rieko's staff is called Till the End of the Age. It's a long stick staff that's usually held in his right hand and looks plain and simple. The crooked staff comes up to a hook with a glowing blue crystal ball hovering inside.

You mentioned in the Appearance tab that Coco carries a scythe. Please transfer that part to this tab.

kills: Each costs SP. Rieko starts with 800SP.

  • Rue Juru - (Water) columns of ice hit area of enemies within range. 15SP
  • Lei Rin - (Light) single target gets hit with rapid balls of light from the sky. 20SP
  • Gambler's Call - random status effect on single enemy. 25SP
  • Ripped Mummy - sleep status on area of enemies within range. 25SP
  • Take Me Out - Coco jumps in for three wide swings followed by an overhead swing. 15SP
  • Hey! Stop Looking at Her! - Coco jumps in for an attack from the air with two swings and a power swing. 20SP
  • Lucky Stars - Coco jumps in, and gold stars fall over them. Rieko has his movement and attack speed greatly increased. 35SP
  • Dinner and Dancing - Coco jumps in for an angled attack designed to pierce through a target's defense. 35SP
  • Coco's Grace - a rare skill that allows both characters to perform one massive physical attack by boosting one's soul with magic. This hits for non-elemental damage for area of enemies. 45SP

Does Coco share SP with Rieko or does she have her own SP count? Are the first two abilities magic abilities? If so for the latter, please move this to magic.

All in all, your bio is denied until all these questions are answered and the bio is lengthened.
 
Rieko's Strength: He has average Strength because he's a psionic based character. Only his Partner Skills have a high level of physical damage. Refer to Partner Skills.

Rieko's Vitality: He has a high level of Vitality. He'd take minimum damage unless hit by a combo or enemy skill. His HP (Hit Points) aren't very high.

Rieko's Speed: He has average Speed unless he uses Lucky Stars. He can normally dodge arrows unless hit by a master archer. He has a good reaction time and initiative. His movement and attack speed are doubled when using Lucky Stars. Refer to Partner Skills.

Rieko's Stamina: He has a high level of Stamina because of his skills. He can recover SP (Skill Points) inside and outside of battle. He starts with 800SP. Each round will give 2D6 of SP recovery. This rate doesn't change in or out of combat.

You still haven't elaborated on Coco's stats in regards to her strength, vitality, speed and Stamina. Bio is still denied until you get those up.
 
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