I don't think you will need to worry about your English at all. I've read your
The 3rd Birthday and
Crisis Core reviews (the two games I have played out of the four I've played), and they're very well written with the necessary depth for a good, comprehensive review all in there. You cover pretty much everything you need for a game review, so while I can't quite come up with immediate suggestions for improvement as they are, I can only say: keep at it! =]
Oh, seeing as I just freshly completed
The 3rd Birthday not too long ago, I just want to say that while I agree with the majority of your review, I hated the story, how it was written, and the characters. None of them, especially Aya in my opinion, have a real personality. As a game itself, it's a decent mid-B grade PSP shooter, but I was very let down by the narrative.
