Gabriel Azreal

Braveheart

Lone Wolf
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IT'S FINISHED!

This is my second character, my first character has been approved so I have made a new character and I hope it will be approved.

ORPG/URPG/RPB - ORPG and URPG

Name – Gabriel Azreal

Title – A Light Within Darkness

Alignment – Unknown

Race – Human

Gender – Male

Age – 19

Appearance – Gabriel has medium dark blue hair. He has silver earrings. He has blue eyes and a good looking face. His look is showing valor and arrogance, but somehow his look is calm. He has eyes like a wolf, blue and calm. He has a scarf on the right side of his face, a scarf from a sword. He is 5"9 tall. He is wearing a silver outfitt. The outfitt is some kind of light armor that protects his body but it can be easily pierced, but it's not heavy so Gabriel is really fast with it. A silver armor is covering his shoulders and his top as well his arms. In the middle there's a pierced armor, it looks like the sword pierced it. His legs are too protected with the armor. He is wearing silver boots.

Attire – His attire is a silver armor that protects his body. It's light so he can move really fast. It has some mysterious shining crystals on it. The boots are light too. His armor cannot protect him from strong attacks, but it can be an advantage because it can protect him from the attacks, not from all, but it can protect him and he is fast with it.

Armour His armor is light and it can be easily pierced, but it's hard to pierce it because Gabriel won't be easily defeated in battle and he is fast as well. Armor protects his top, arms and legs. He is wearing a silver boots. Armor is silver and light made from shining crystals and it can protect Gabriel from lot of attacks, but it can easily pierce his armor, too.

Personality – Gabriel is calm, but he is very arrogant. He thinks that he is the best in everything and no one is strong as him. He thinks only about himself. He is a lone wolf. He has no friends, no family, he is alone. Maybe that's why is he so arrogant, where he goes he is always alone. he doesn't want to help anyone, he is fighting his battle alone. His arrogant smile on his face even when losing, makes his opponents even more anger. He never shows any feelings. He is cold hearted and emotionless, he has no feelings towards anyone. He follows his ambitons and dreams defeating all that stands in his ways. But deep in his heart he has feelings that he doesn't want to show.

First Impression – It shows that Gabriel is an arrogant man, that he is very strong, but that he won't help anyone. Something reminds him on the wolf, no one knows why, but it's like he is a wolf. His look calm look shows that he is a calm person, but that he is very arrogant, like his arrogant smile on his face that he sometimes has. Like when he is winning or fighting. Gabriel is a strong man that doesn't lose and that is what the are people afraid of.

Strength – Gabriel is strong, he is fighting with both his strength and his speed. He can fight everyone and win, but that all depends on his fighting style, as well the weak point of his opponent. He can easy lift his broad sword, so that means that he is a strong a lot, even if he doesn't looks like. He is average muscled, but his true strnght comes from within, from his heart.

Vitality -- He can takes attacks, but his armor cannot take much, because it can be pierced easily. But even if he gets pierced he will continue to fight, but he cannot be easily defeated. He doesn't take much damage, because he knows how to fight and can easily defend himself and defeat his opponents very quick.
His speed can help him against magic attacks, because he can dodge the attacks quickly, but if the magic attack hit him, it may hurt him if he doesn't block at all. It all depends on the magic attack, but his armor that is made from white shining crystals has a high resistance to magic attacks, so he could take a magic attack without too much trouble.

Speed – He is very quick and he can run pretty fast like he has no armor at all.

Stamina – He has a lot of energy and he doesn't gets tired quickly. He can last for too long in the battle without getting tired. But a strenght deep within him awakes when he is tired, when he cannot battle anymore. Then new strenght awakes give him a will to fight and to take damage. He can runs in top speed for too long without getting tired about 10 minutes, maybe even more.

Reflexes – He has great reflexes, as well he is quick so his reflexes are pretty good and he can easily dodge many attacks like kicks and punches. He can dodge arrows as well, of course not a rain of arrows, but several arrows he can dodge.

Fighting Style – His fighting with with strenght, speed and tecnique. His strike is coming one after another and with his strenght he can easily defeat his opponents.

Weapons – His weapon is double edged sword that is combined by the two swords that can be split up and then Gabriel can fight with two swords. A double edged sword is very sharp and it can easily pierce armor. He is holding the double edged sword only in one arm, but sometimes in two arms if he thinks that he has to fight harder. A double edge sword is blue and it has a wolf crest on it. Gabriel is calling a double edge sword Judgement. It's lenght is 5 feet long and 10 inches wide.

His weapon is a silver broad sword. It can pierce everything that it touches. Handle is made from the silver. A sword's edge is made from white shining crystals. What those crystals are stays a mystery, because no one knows what tose crystals are. Only Gabriel knows, but he never told to anyone. The sword is completely made from the white shining crystals. It's 5 to 6 feet long with a singled-edged, enormously wide blade. It's completely opposite from a broad sword that is made from the black shining crystals. It is said that those two swords are legendary swords created for the eternal battle. Gabriel doesn't use it very often, he almost never fight with that sword, because he is afraid of the sword's power. When he is fighting with the sword, he is relesing his inner power in order to combine that power with the sword to unleash his ultimate power. Gabriel is calling the sword Aurora.

Abilities – Lunar Divine- Gabriel can summon a sword that is 5 to 6 feet long with an edge that can pierce every armor easily, but it has some trouble with the armor that is made from the black shining crystals. The sword is made from the blue crystals and on it are shining edges made from the blue shining crystals. With a every strike a magnificent light appeared around Gabriel that protects him from the attacks. With every strike his sword is piercing almost everything and defeating his opponets. A sword can't be blocked that easily and it can block attack perfectly. On his back large blue wings appear and his armor became white and it's made from the white shining crystals and it give him an ability to fly. He looks like an angel. Gabriel is calling a sword made of blue shining crystals Sword of Salvation, because with his every strike he destroys all evil in the world. Few have seen Lunar Divine ability and those who have are telling that Gabriel is good and that he is protecting others, but it doesn't look like that. Only Gabriel knows is he good or not and only he knows what is his dream that he wish to realize. If his sword somehow gets broken he will lose almost all of his abilities and strenght. His energy is draining a lot, but his strenght is rising every second. He can use Lunar Divine sevearal minutes than he will return to normal, when he rests a bit he can transform again, but not completely. He will has only a sord that is shining with blue aura around it, but it won't has any ability. It will be only faster and better to block than Judgement, a double edged sword. After some time he will lose that ability too and he will return to normal until he rests, then he can again use full power of Lunar Divine.

Anger Explosion- Gabriel can increase his strenght and speed. A shadow of a wolf appear and attack his opponents. A wolf is white and it has blue eyes. It protects Gabriel and it fights for him. A wolf is a Gabriel's royal friend that never leaves him, as thou he is just a shadow, Gabriel thinks about him as a real friend. His energy is draining, but not too much as like when he is using Lunar Divine.

Wolf's Wrath- The crests from his earrings glows as the white light shine from him. He unleash his wrath, his inner power, a power from within. The look on his face become terribly frightening, like he doesn't care for anything and anyone. Blue aura appear around him, showing that he is unleashing his wrath. He creates powerful dark blasts and attacks his opponent. In the end if he released enough of his inner power before when he uded his sword then and if he combined with it he can now unleash his ultimate power. His ultimate power is Holy Salvation. dark blasts turned into light beams the thousand of beams fall down on his opponent. His wrath is very destructive, and anything caught in its line of fire will be destroyed. With Aurora he cut tthrough as the final ray of light fell on his opponent and explode defeating his opponent. It drains a lot of energy, he cannot use any ability until he rests, and he hardly has enough energy to stand, but he can still fight, not like before, but he can take care of his opponents.

Magic – Serenity- He can heal himself completely, but he lose a lot of energy.

Other Skills

History – He grew up alone, his only friend was a white wolf, that was killed. His sword Aurora was a gift from a mysterious man that appeared in front of him and then dissapeared. He never has seen that man again. He lived in a kingdom that has been destroyed and he swore that he will defeat the man that destroyed his home. After some time of searching he found out that the man who destroyed his home a man in black armor made of the black crystals. He went on a journey to find a man in the black armor, so that he can defeat him. He keep his feelings deep within, never showing them to anyone.
 
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Vitality --

What about against magic attacks/spells?

Speed

What you have here seems better suited under Reflexes. Speed is for how fast the character can run, etc.

Stamina

Can you give us a time range? 10 minutes? 15?

Reflexes

Give us an example or two about the types of attacks he can dodge. Punches, kicks, arrows, etc.

Weapons

How long is it?

Anger Explosion-

How much energy does this drain?

Wolf's Wrath-

The wording on this needs to be tweaked a little bit. For example, instead of "will destroy everything in its path," it should be more along the lines of "is very destructive, and anything caught in its line of fire will be destroyed." Just to give other players the opportunity to react to it. Also, how much energy does it drain?


I'd like to see a different name. Something not quite so basic.
 
Just need this question answered for the Vitality tab, and it'll be good to go.

"What about against magic attacks/spells?"
 
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