Ok, I'll work on it Hera. Thanks for your suggestions.


Also "Finishing Moves" is used in DBZ Tenkaichi 1 and 2 (according to my versions) , ok I'll change the name...


Added: This is the part you asked me to change....

*Side Note: Most of the spell won't be used in every Role Play, only the basic defensive/offensive spells.

New:

Abilities:
==Main Ability: Final Judgment==
*”Destruere illas catenas quid nos aptare” /”Destroy the chains that bind us”: Allows Maximilian to unleash one of the following attacks while using a large amount of magic.

====Dictum ====
“Angelus de ille Finalis” (Angel of the End, my second attempt to write in Latin XD)

Maximilian picks a rose from the ground and tenderly kisses it while closing his eyes. Suddenly his surroundings are engulfed by deep pitch black darkness. From within the darkness Maximilian’s eyes glow deep emerald green while he smiles. The light of the fool moon cuts through the darkness illuminating both Maximilian and his opponent (s). Eventually Maximilian unsheathes his blade and runs past his opponent(s), swinging his sword several times in a burst of anger, aiming his attacks accurately at his enemy (enemies). Out of the darkness, a gigantic blade rises from the shadows and slices through them while Maximilian jumps high into the air and deals countless shots with his dual handguns. In the end he falls on the ground, picks the rose once again and tenderly kisses the rose while the darkness clears out revealing the recent massacre.

“Rosa Mortis” (rose of death)
Maximilian picks his rose and tenderly smells it while smiling. After starting coldly towards his opponents, Maximilian tosses the rose towards his opponent(s), unsheathes his sword and deals a devastating diagonal shockwave that cuts through the rose and pierces his enemy (enemies).

“Redemptionis: Ille Grandis Finalis”” (Redemption. The Great Finale)

Maximilian stares at the ground while a single tear flows from his right eye and falls on the ground. Then he raises his head slowly starting coldly towards his enemies. In a release of everlasting rage, Maximilian picks a rose from the ground and kisses it while pronunciating the name of his lost love.

“Please forgive me….I can’t bear the suffering of living without you. Here and now I cast away my life and sentence my enemies to have a taste of eternal horror and sorrow.”

After this, Maximilian unsheathes his sword with his right hand and draws one of his handguns with the other. Then he rushes towards his enemies in a burst of emotions and slashes fiercely towards all of them, unleashing a powerful barrage of attacks randomly with his weapons.

In the end, exhausted and with not a single drop of energy left, Maximilian releases and inhuman howl and unleashes a devastating horizontal shockwave by swinging his sword from left to right. After that he quickly aims his gun his enemy and pulls the trigger, thus releasing a powerful fireball which consumes everything in a cataclysm of flames.

Finally he falls on his knees, and stares sadly at the ground while the last ounce of strength abandons him. Suddenly the memory of his reunion with his lost love flashes through his mind and then he faints.


Other Abilities:

*Dual Wielding: Allows Maximilian to dual wield weapons such as swords and guns. Though his expertise is similar to his brother-in-law Julius, Maximilian is better than him in terms of swordsmanship.

*Eye of Wisdom: allows Maximilian to understand ancient texts and scriptures. It also provides Maximilian with the power to see farther than any normal human at the cost of some magical strength.

*Hidden Power: Maximilian’s hidden power as a mage allows him to cast powerful magic, though his power is slightly weaker than Julius Argexis’ spell casting abilities.


*Book of Wisdom: Maximilian’s enchanted book includes most of the spells that were forbidden a long time ago by the ancients. Though he was not a master mage himself, the blood of ancients and his hidden power allowed Maximilian to learn the ancient wisdom hidden within the pages of this old book. The book was written in Latin, main reason why the spells must be pronounced in this language in order to fully unleash their powers.

“Flamma Antiqŭus” (Ancient Flame) : allows Maximilian to call upon the powers of fire to cast a powerful wall of flames to shield him against enemy attacks. The wall fades after enduring a small amount of time.

“Ferox Infernum” (Fierce Inferno) : allows Maximilian to call upon the powers of fire to cast a powerful wave of fire. The wave takes the form of a gigantic sword heading towards Maximilian’s opponents. The sword is then swung mindlessly several times and disappears after a few moments.

“Pluvĭa de Vita” (Rain of life) : allows Maximilian to call upon the power of water and unleash a healing rain which replenishes his strength. The rain also slowly heals Maximilian’s wounds and the regenerating effect disappears after a few minutes.

“Parāre Tempus” (Stop Time) : allows Maximilian to call upon the powers of time to slow all movement around him in order to dodge attacks which would be nearly impossible to avoid normally. The effects last for mere seconds.


“Relampadāre Terribilis” (Terrible Lightning) : Maximilian unleashes the powers of lightning to cast a powerful thunderstorm upon his enemies. The spells randomly aims to the nearest enemy and it remains as an active spell for a 30 seconds.


“Sphata de Gelum” (Sword of Ice) : with the powers of ice, Maximilian freezes all water based spells around him and uses them to create a powerful attack resembling a huge sword. The sword is then used to strike the ground freezing everything around him. The effect of the spell lasts a few seconds and is mainly used against slow enemies.


“Anĭma Immortālis” (Immortal Soul) : allows Maximilian to summon a powerful magical shield with the powers of light and darkness. The shield protects him against elemental spells.

“Lux Divīnus” (Divine Light) : a powerful light is summoned from the heavens to illuminate the area. Also the spell has a devastating harmful effect on the creatures of darkness.

“Iudicĭum Obscūrus” (Dark Judgment) : a pitch black darkness surrounds the nearby areas and absorbs light based energies. Also the spell has a devastating harmful effect on creatures whose elemental attribute is light.

“Iudicĭum Finālis” (Final Judgment) : Maximilian’s most powerful spell. With the powers of light and darkness, Maximilian summons twelve magical swords, six swords of light and six swords of darkness, which remain spinning around Maximilian. Suddenly the swords begin to spin fiercely around Maximilian and then they head towards the heavens and come rushing down towards his opponents. The swords keep swinging wildly until they fade away after a one minute.

Very well done. Definitely [APPROVED]

The only suggestions I would make now is to simply state how long some of the skills last. Skills such as the Immortal Soul should have time limits, as protecting from elemental damage is a little powerful if done for the whole battle. You need not change this, however, as I am sure that good RPers will figure out ways around this.

Very good. Shall I start the actual RP now? I think I should

On a side note, I will admit that 'Finishing Moves' is used in Tenkaichi, as well as other games. it is just such a commonly used name nowadays, and is paraphrased so much daily, that while it isn't original, it can't be considerred unoriginal either.

Thanks for the suggestions Hera, now I love this new RP Bio even more than my old Aiden Bio. Let's begin


Or perhaps we could wait a little to have more members. Either way it's your decision

Yeah, I'll wait for Frenzy and Drachnon. They were active in the old LoD, along with RPGirl. Wonder how she is, I think I'll PM her later, or e-mail maybe.

Oh, and i made a mistake. Tenkaichi/Tenkaichi 2 use skills called Blast 1, Blast 2, and Ultimate Blast. It's the Budoukais (1-3) that use Finishing Moves/Ultimate Moves.

As per the suggestions, no biggy. I'm happy to help. It's my job as RP Master of the Land of Dragons, isn't it? lol

Yes it's your job Hera. As for RPGirl, I talked to her and she is resting because her arm hurts a little and she can't RP for a while.

Hopefully she will be back soon.

Still working on Bio feel free to start without me.

Nah we need about four members to start or else the RP would be quite empty

I know I need to hurry but while working 40 hours a week finding time for writing a bio in the new format is something I mostly do during weekends.

EDIT:
Except the history my character is pretty much done:
http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/ha...tml#post162489