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Kyuin
This Bio is for my character in my ORPG "Shadow of the Beasts" I am using an original Template, which is stated to be allowed
Name: Kyuin Lars Elfachin
Gender: Male
Race: Myera*
Home Country: Myera
Class: Hunter
Age: 36
Physical Description: Height: 6' 7" Weight: 220lbs Colouring: Purple Eyes: Gold Poison type: The poison that Kyuin generates prevents nerves from firing in the body of the person who is bitten. This makes the victim paralysed, but still able to feel pain. (not applicable in RP) Clothing: Long, dark brown leather pants; Thick-soled Leather boots; Short-sleeved brown leather jerkin; Green-brown-gray cloak; black leather belt; black leather bandolier Other: Silver-banded ring with ruby embedded into top.
Weapons: Gold enameled Long Spear, Twin White Knives, Crossbow, Quiver of bolts
Personality: He is generally a laid-back fellow, although he can be dead serious when the situation warrants it. Despite his carefree attitude, his speech is always polite, though it is sometimes sarcastic, he can also seem serious, but his tone doesn't usually seem so. He is also very aware of his surroundings and is always ready to fight. He views any fight in which he loses and not dies as a waste and will often fight his opponent simply for the sake of it once started, often taking life-risking chances to prolong a fight.
Family: Father (dec.), Mother (dec.)
History: Born in Myera, his father was the chief of his clan, the Clan Jormungan, and he had a reputation of being the leader of the fiercest clan in Myera. As such, Kyuin grew up learning the spear and crossbow, in order to help the clan.
However, in Kyuin's eight year, disaster struck when his father led the entire clan to new clan grounds, only to be ambushed and the clan destroyed
(More forthcoming)
Companions: None
*The Myera are a Dragon-like race of people. Generally upwards of six feet in height and of a muscular build. They have elongated necks and thick, powerful tails which generally grow to about four feet in length. Both their spines, tails and edge of forearms and legs have a row of spikes which are about an inch to three inches in length. Their fingers and toes also end in claws. Myera also have thick, sharp fangs and a slightly elongated jaw. It was said that long ago, they also had wings, but nowadays, their shoulder blades are slightly longer than humans, so this theory has been thought on much by Myera scholars. They are covered in variously coloured hard scales which act much like plate armour, but as the Myera grow with the armour, the weight disadvantage of Plate Armour is not a problem. The Myera have no skill in weilding magic on their own, but have a natural resistance to it instead, able to shrug off most medium- and low-level powers with ease. It has also been discovered that the incisors of the Myera have varying types of poison. The variations come between clans and colouring, so blue Myera will usually have a kind of nerve-freezing poison and red will have blood-clotting poison. This poison develops once the Myera hits about 30 and the poison is released only when in danger.
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Previously known as: Mayuri, Trace
Last edited by Kenpachi : January 27, 2008 at 11:31 PM.
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There is only one problem: Your poison fang. Unfortunately, we can't use status conditions in RPing, they are considered to be God-modding. Paralysis is a status condition, so that's gonna have to go.
So, just change around that little part, and you're good to go
[NOT APPROVED]
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Well that's been changed simply to make it N/A in the RP
I'm just going to post his full history, because I feel a character without one is lacking...
Full History: Born on the fifth day of the third month to Lars Waylin Elfachin and Laedi Maedr Elfachin, the clan chief and his wife, Kyuin's place as the clan heir was never questioned, but also never drummed into him. He was raised to be humble, yet strong, and he was taught to fight by the entire clan.
He was risen well and grew strong quickly, taking to the spear more so than the sword or axe, and becoming proficient with a crossbow, the Myera's preferred ranged weapon, as they can load it in seconds due to their massive strength and the bolt can pierce even a Myera's tough armour.
At age eight however, his future looked bleak for a time when his father -reknowned as the most powerful clan chief at the time- having recently embarked on a campaign and won, was moving the clan to new clan grounds.
There, they found not fertile grounds for planting, but an ambush from three rival clans, who fought hard and fast, ruthlessly cutting down Kyuin's entire clan save four; Kyuin himself, his mother, father and uncle.
Although his father, mother and uncle begged for Kyuin to be let free as a child, the other clansmen laughed and executed Kyuin's mother, then uncle, then father in front of Kyuin's young eyes.
Something in Kyuin snapped when the axe descended upon his father's neck and he became enraged, breaking free of his bonds and taking up his dead father's spear, he slew five of the enemy clansmen, then fled north, straight to the lands of the beasts. He was pursued for five days and nights until he reached the border and the pursuers stopped, believing the young Myera to be done for.
Kyuin lived up in that wasteland for years, and never spoke of the horrors he had to deal with as a young boy, the only thing that he bore from it however, was one long scar, running from his left temple to right cheek, cutting over his nose. He is, however, accustomed to the most fearsome monsters imaginable and as such does not shirk from creatures that lesser men, and Myera, would flee from in an instant.
Ten years later, a gruesome sight bore down upon one of the human villages up near that border. A bloodied and bleak Myera, his amethyst scales glistening in the slaughter he had apparently been through, walked into the town, to the mayor's office and threw down the head of a creature that had been kidnapping the town's children.
Being granted gold simply set Kyuin on his way, the thanks seemingly shrugged off, as he would shrug off magic. Making his way south, he came to the joint city of Dousetein, making a home there, before setting off once again into the wasteland of the North.
Since then, he has made periodic trips back and forth from Dousetein to the wasteland and tales of his prowess run from the Human cities, to the Myera clans, to the Shaido Tree Villages. All stand in awe of his prowess, but he simply fights, in order to die.
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Alright, I find this character to be [APPROVED]. Well done, really. This is a very good bio. And you are SO right, a bio just ain't a bio without a good, long history
Check out my bio for Jake There's one that is way too long
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Jake Long and Felldoh are the reasons I live. I breathe, walk, learn, and most of all, fight, only so that I may carry on their memories. I shall avenge Felldoh, and I shall protect Jake, no matter the cost!