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Old December 10, 2007, 3:07 AM   #1
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Body with two souls bio

Okay, sorry hera I have fixed it up for you .... again ....

Bio for an Original RP

Name: Steadler and Thermesa (body has two souls)
Title: none
Race: Human
Gender: Steadler and the body are male (Thermesa is female)
Age: 17

Appearance
Hair: The hair is thick, usually messy but is neither short nor long. Black in colour
Eye col: a greyish green colour (close to no colour), Thermesa - Dark red
Height: 5 foot 5
Weight: 65 kg
Build: Has no real muscles, he appears wimpy looking
Complection: His skin is clear, no scars across his entire body. His skin is slightly tanned but not brown
Noteworthy Features: None are seeable, deep and thich scars along his back
Attire: A shirt with a hood attached, grey in colour. The sleeves are long however Steadler usually pulls them up. The hood is the same colour on the inside, Steadler only wears this when it's raining. He wears long pants that cover his shoes and drag along the ground, the colour is a darker grey than the shirt. His shoes are basic and excessively worn out. Unlike Steadler, Thermesa always wears the hood up and the sleeves down.

Steadler Personality: Steadler usually avoids towns and cities and as a result spends most of his time with Thermesa (the other soul). One would think that with such a dark being inside them would perhaps change their personality, however Steadler has remained himself over the past two years since he was joined with Thermesa. He takes almost everything lightly and doesn't disagree with people or argue with them. He talks with a cheerful tone and smiles more then he frowns. He tries to find soloutions to problems that would suit all parties involved. He is often disappointed about how he is seen by other people, as they often dislike and hate him as he is sharing his body with Thermesa.
Steadler usually takes things too lightheartedly (is that a word?) and as a result often finds himself in trouble.
Thermesa Personality: Like Steadler she avoids towns when in control, as she would be feared (female voice in male body), and is very constrained by Steadler. She has a dark look at every thing, always saying that the solution to problems is death and/ or destruction. She is opposite to Steadler and always persists to try and change him. She takes everything that Steadler disagrees with personally and argues extensively with him, or any one else. Her voice is chilling and cold. The expression she gives is of dislike and hatred. She likes situations were she can leave people with more problems then they had before. She loves the way Steadler feels when he is seen by people, often taunting him about it.
Thermesa usually takes things too seriously and as a result often gets Steadler in trouble.

First impression of people: As they hardly see people, they act cautiously when they first meet someone.

Weapons: They carry two daggers/ knives, blade length around 1 and a half hand lengths.
Armor: None
Magic: Steadler commands the power to heal, Thermesa the power of death (neither really have a list of spells, explained below in skills section)

Magic constriants

Use of magic saps energy away from body
* Magic can not be used while the person is doing something else, like fighting with knife, although Thermesas death sort of flows from her.
* Magic needs charge time

And the touch effect was for things like when Thermesa is walking on grass, etc not when harming others. The restrictions were not for all characters just the character I created and the restrictions are there to stop this character in particular to be too STRONG and have large weak points addressed to them.

As for weapon strikes, it would take a lot of concentration to perform some magic stuff, what ever. This may not effect other characters as Steadler will face half the battle fighting to control Thermesa, this is the main reason why I have decided for MY character that he can not fight back while he is healing. (unsure if this effects thermesa)

Skills:Steadler has the ability to heal. He does not have to speak to use this magic, he usually just places his hand above the would or on light scratches he can think them away.
He can heal both himself and others. Steadler can sometimes heal himself from so close to dying, such as a large blade wound across his body. However he can not help with diseases or sickness, just wounds. Also he can not replenish lost blood.
Steadler also has some ability with the two knives he carries however if he came across a master with daggers or a sword he could easily be defeated. He tries to avoid conflicts like battles as Thermesa oftenly can overwhelm him as the prime soul of the body.
Thermesa has the power to cause death. Like steadler she does not have to speak to use this magic, she just has to be in contact with the object.

She can not cause death to the body nor transmute it toward souls. Somehow Thermesa is able to kill sicknesses is the body, however not in others bodies.
Thermesa (unlike Steadler) has actually abilities with the knives they carry. She is much better at effectively battling enemies. She often takes controll in fights.

History: Steadler grew up in a small village, he was a much loved boy. At the age of 10 he developed magic, he was sent to a nearby cave dwelling wizard. Steadler learned how to heal, after three years Steadler returned to his village a healer. The people rejoiced .....
His abilities were well known in the village and a couple of nearby towns or villages. He healed broken bones as easily as cuts and scratches. His popularity grew very quickly. But it all came undone at age 15 ....
In the weeks coming to his 15th birthday, Steadler grew tired easily and oftenly returned to his small house before half the day was over. In the few days before hand he never left. The village was unsure what was happening so they sent for another healer. On Steadlers 15th birthday a light flared around him and he passed out.
The healer arrived a few days later. He entered immediately, after a minute he was suddenly shot out. He lay gasping on the ground, then said "There's another soul in his body ...' then he passed out. The crowd of people were shocked. A minute later Steadler appear.
"What happened?" yelled people. "Steadler?"
"Is that his name?" was Thermesa's chilling voice. She walked out, the grass underneath her feet wilted and died. She laughed as the crowd noticed this. "I was born to be his opposite."
After a short while she walked out of the village, the people to scared to do anything. Days later Steadler woke in the body, he had witnessed everything that Thermesa had done and said. Rather than return home, Steadler began to travel. He bagan his life as a wanderer.
Two years later after hearing about the soul-spear from a stranger one night, Steadler decided to return to his master, the cave dwelling wizard.
Thermesa's history is unknown before entering the body, however she prefers to follow Steadler rather than take the lead.

The dominant soul: Is usually Steadler in most situations, he can force Thermesa out of controll. Thermesa can take controll when Steadler loses controll of his emotions, or in a fight.
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Old December 17, 2007, 12:08 AM   #2
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Before I even begin the real critique, I'm going to say [NOT APPROVED], because you do not follow the FFF outline for Bios. Read that, re-format this, and then we'll go through the real thing.

EDIT - December 19th, 2007 @ 11:49 A.M. GMT -4

Still not Approved, Vivi. You leave out the sections that are labeled Required from the bio format. If he doesn't have what is in that section, simply say that he doesn't have it.
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Old July 8, 2008, 10:23 PM   #3
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Since this character is for ORPG, I'm going to approve it and send it to 'Story Sages.'

If you wish to add the suggested sections as Red XIII has mentioned, feel free to edit the bio and do so.

[Bio Approved for ORPG.]
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