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Old March 14, 2008, 10:36 PM   #1
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Zodiarne

race:Lich
age: 32
class: Dragoon
Height: 6' 2"
Weight: 180 lbs
element: Light
rank: Cidgel of Life

Fighting style: Zodiarne is a defense oriented man of high stature. He would risk his life to save any of his fellow comrades. He is very experienced in the way of dual weapons and his favorite combination is his scythe, Blood Scylla, and the claw, Omega's Fury.

Natural abilities:
flight
light feet: allows silent walking
fast pace: increases speed + evasion
steady feet: lowers chance of knockback and tripping
sharp eyes: increases accuracy
Regeneration: auto-revive + regen effects

Offensive abilities:
Heralding doom- Zodiarne takes flight and launches a barrage of attacks; requires mild wounds
Deathly wrath- Zodiarne unleashes a blast of energy damaging surrounding enemies; requires heavy wounds
Desperate measures- Zodiarne disperses all means of defense in a last minute effort to save his life, if successful it allows instant cast of Ambrosia; requires near- death wounds

Defensive abilites:
Warsong: boost moral, increasing attack and defense of allies
Superior defense: protect and heal allies with low or crtical health
Protect: devote self to defend allies
Magic barrier: protect allies from magical damage

Special attacks:
Scythes:
Reaper's dance: a franctic dance while wielding one or two scythes which ends with a deadly spin

Mantis strike: fight in mantis style

Longbow:
Jisei-me: Light-based arrow damage

Spears:
Dragon's fury: multiple stabs to the target

Imbue element: adds dragon's element to spear

Claws:
Torrent of madness: a flurry of blows that get stronger and more erratic as they are dealt, no matter if they hit or miss

Appearance:
Clothes:
Green dragon-hide jacket with snow wolf fur collar
Dark dragon-hide jeans
Green Mario-style cap with Z on the front in a white semicircle
White gloves
Bronze dragon-hide boots
Jacket unzipped with no shirt underneath

Skin: white
Eyes: Light blue
Hair: blonde
Build: average
Wings: skeletal
Appearance: Zodiarne dresses as if he were always cold. He wears a green dragon-hide jacket with a collar made of snow wolf fur, that is a rich white colour. He always tends to wear a pair of dark dragon-hide jeans with a pair of bronze dragon-hide boots. He wears no shirt, yet he wears his trademark cap and gloves, both engraved with a green and gold Z in their center. He has a very fair complection with light blue eyes and golden blonde hair. He possesses an average build yet has a pair of skeletal wings protruding from his back, which are connected to his own skeleton, as they have always been.
His wings function correctly and possess a very thin membrane unseeable by the human eye. He has the features of any other 16 year old, for upon his becoming a Lich, he was blessed with a spell to prevent the aging of his body. He doesn't have much in the way of muscles, but he possesses a little more strength than would seem. Also he possesses a small birthmark upon his right shoulder in the shape of a wing.
From a distance he seems to possess only golden blonde hair, yet as you get closer his hair seems to shimmer and the colour seems to change, even though it doesn't. He bears three scars upon his face, the largest ranging from his left eye to his chin and doubling back to his right ear. The remaining two scars are found above his eyes.

Personality
Zodiarne is a person who takes care of others before himself. He tends to act weaker than he actually is, just to avoid conflict. Though he loves the thrill of battle, he prefers to settle his fights in areas where the damage to civilians and terrain is minimal.

Biography
Zodiarne was once a weak child, used only for the most degrading of tasks in the village of Gharan, that is until he discovered a tome titled "Le Khaner re te Li." Upon the opening of this tome, dark shadows spilled forth from the book, stopping the effect of time upon Zodiarne's body as a malevolent force worked its magic over the 16 year old boy. Once he had finished reading the book, and the demonic force had finished enchanting him, his eyes, once a lusterous shade of deep green with black pupils, changed to light blue with white pupils, and from a human to a Lich. Graced with all of the powers of a lich, including the fabled "Lich Bod-Steal", and his basic knowledge of weaponry and basic elemental spells, he found that each spell had been perfected so as not to accidentally kill himself, yet not so perfected as to work every time it is used. Soon after beingblessed with these powers, Zodiarne began to fight an up-hill battle with the raging evil inside of himself, and thus did he journey to the Temple of Mirrors, to face the wickedness inside. Upon reaching the Temple steps, he was faced by a paladin of old, whose deed had gave him life as an angel, to test his will to resist the evil's temptations.
The angel drew a glorious sword and rested the flat of its blade on Zodiarne's head, and drew the evil from him, for Zodiarne to fight. The fight took several days, of which the angel held the evil at bay while Zodiarne slept, and upon the fifth day, Zodiarne succeeded in truly vanquishing the evil within himself, purifying his soul, yet keeping the enchantments that were benefical to him, with permission from the angel. For a thousand years, Zodiarne and his pet, Rasei-Nizode, have traveled the world, ridding it of many evils and founding the city of Valhalla. Now he rises from his high perch and teachings of elemental magic, only to lay low any greater evils that rise up in the world, or any one who opposes the clans, Valhalla's Cidgel Army or the Angelic Knights.

Spells:
Fire:
Firsa- summons a ball of searing flames in the caster's hand that can be shot towards any target designated by the caster

Air:
Aersa- summons devastating winds that take the form of blades that are then shot at the designated target

Water:
Watersa- attacks the target with a pillar of water

Earth:
Ragnarok- summons a giant earthen sword with which the caster may attack any enemies with; grants ability Terra-smash which causes a small earthquake

Light:
Holysa- attacks the target with blindingly powerful holy light
Ambrosia- heals target's wounds

Dark
Darksa- attacks the target with undead spirits which ravage the target's body

Non-elemental
Mimic- copy targeted enemy
Long distance teleport- teleport for any distance between 200 feet and 20 miles

Lich Bod-steal
Lich bod-steal: steals the body of the target to replace the current body of the caster.

Example:
As Zodiarne stood upon the steps of the majestic Temple of Mirrors, a bright-winged angel descended from his high throne before the Great Mirror and challenged Zodiarne. In the face of the great angel, Zodiarne knelt, and bade a request from the angel, "O, exhalted Keeper of the Mirror, do not slay me, for I come to this sacred place to ask a chance to slay the evil within me." With a nod, the angel drew his sword and placed it upon Zodiarne's head and drew the evil from his body. The malevolent force coalesced into a form closely resembling Zodiarne, yet black and rank with the stench of decay, and from its yawning lips hissed, "Foolish boy, I made you what you are, I gave you LIFE! And you dare try to banish ME!" Chills ran down Zodiarne's spine as he rises up to face the dark image of himself. "I shall KILL YOU!", the malevolent doppleganger hissed as it lunged towards Zodiarne, who drew his Wraith Blade in self defense. AS the hilt came free of its bindings, its blade, glowing white in semblance with Zodiarne's pure soul, roared forth. destroying the doppleganger's arm as they came into contact with one another. The dark figure, hissing with rage and pain, reeled backwards, its arm quickly regrowing from the stub that the Wraith Blade had left. And so, the Trial of Temptation had begun.
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Old April 8, 2008, 1:41 AM   #2
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First off, I think you should have a look at our Bio Format. If you don't want to use this, send me an outline of the bio format you are using, and I'll have a look over it.

Secondly, regeneration. You have to specify how this regeneration works. This doesn't have to be biologically, but there is definitely a limit as to how much you can regenerate and how this comes about. Unfortunately, auto-revive is a flat out no. You can't come back to life, that's just unfair.

You also specify the spell 'Ambrosia' in your Offensive Abilities section, but make no note of it later on. What is Ambrosia? (Add it into your bio.)

For your protective/defensive abilities, you have to state how much damage they absorb, how much power they give, but most of all: how much energy they require.

In terms of magical abilities, that latest point is also true. You need to state how much energy/mana/adrenaline/whatever-you-use your spells take. You also have to give us a lot more detail in terms of how they look, what kind of damage they do, casting time, etc.

Another big thing with the magic is the Lich Bod(y?) Steal. This is an unacceptable skill, as it allows you to control the opponent. That is not a skill that is allowed, as it falls under the heading of 'God-modding,' or controlling an playable character.

Teleport is also an unacceptable skill, as it is considered 'Power-gaming' to be able to transport yourself.

Change all that up, and I'll have another look at it.

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Old July 8, 2008, 9:38 PM   #3
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Since Zodiarne has not logged on in over 3 months, I'm going to move this thread to 'Retired,' and close it.

If you wish to make the suggested changes and have your character looked at for approval, please PM me, and I will move the thread back to 'Hall of Warriors.'

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