Grim Bio

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March 5, 2008, 5:42 AM

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Name – Grim
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Title – Le Beau Ange De La Morte
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Alignment – Evil
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Race – He is an Angel of Death, and coems from a long line of Reapers. His ancestors Reaped mankind for many years. They are a tall slender group of meatless, all bone creatures. They have bony wings on their back with no flesh as well.
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Gender – Ambiguous, but often referred to as a "he"
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Age – 117
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Attire/Appearance –

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Personality – Grim is a loner. It does not interact well with others and is often alienated even by its peers. Grim is searching for veangance against mankind and kills most every human it encounters, including children. It feasts apon the flesh of animals and humans alike. It is a very cold creature, and rarely speaks.
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First Impression – If it we're to see a human alone, it would stalk the creature and kill it, no questions asked, nothing. It might stop if someone asked it something, but its bloodlust would eventually take over. It is not a very social creature to deal with.
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Strength – Grim can lift large amounts of weight, like a bus or a large vehicle. Plus it can create large amounts of momentum very fast. Without its Scythe, Grim cannot deal out large amounts of dammage, but with its Scythe, the damage can be deadly if the oponent is voulnerable.

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Speed – Grim can run a little faster than a Cheetah, topping around 50 MPH. With its Scythe in hand, its attacks are relatively slow, but without its Scythe its attacks are fast and agile.
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Endurance – Grim can run at top speed for 1 minute 20 seconds, and twice that amount at half the speed. With its Scythe grim has the ability to block attacks, but does not do so all the time because of its speed with the Scythe. Without the Scythe, Grim takes decent amounts of damage if hit.
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Reflexes – Grim may not be able to move its Scythe around very fast, unless it gains a good amount of momentum, but it can move its body around very quickly. Often times, it stakes its Scythe in the ground and swings around it when necesary to dodge an attack or to release certain attacks.
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Fighting Style – Grim uses a form of stick fighting, the same used by Killak in Soul Calibur II. I'm not sure what that fighting style is called. But it deals with spinning the stick around alot, and smacking it on the ground as well. With a blade on the end making it a Scythe the fighting style cannot be exactly that of the same used by Killak, but it is very similar. Often for the final blow, Grim puts both hands behind its head with the Scythe in hand and brings the blade down on the enemies body on the ground, though this leaves Grims chest and main body open and voulnerable.
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Weapons – Grim carries a Scythe in his hands. The Scythe is approx. 9 feet tall and the blade around 4-5 feet long. It is bent in a few places along the staff section and the blade is battle worn, though kept sharp by its owner. Inside its robes, Grim keeps a dagger for when it is cornered and in need of help.

Armour – Grim does not wear armor. The only clothing it wears is a long, 15 foot cloak that is torn and tattered and drags on the ground. Although Grim does not wear armor, his mind can be used as such. Described in the next section, Grim has the ability to project his mind, and the pure energy snakes that form out of its mind can be used to shield Grim if necesary, though when the shield is hit, it is highly damaged and often unusable for a period of time afterwards.
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Abilities – Grim has a unique ability. It can project its mind onto its own environment, often being used as a map or some other form of transportation aide. Often times during battle, grim turnes this into snake like streams of pure energy, with the ability to stun enemies and hold them in place. It can also form into spikes and create walls or pierce the enemies armor. Unless the energy from its mind is attacked, Grim can project it indefinetely. Though once attacked it steadily decreases in energy until depleted, then is sucked back into its mind and given a period to regenerate.

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Magic – Grim does not use magic other than the projection of his mind, if you would call it magic.
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History – Grims line of Ancestory is found to originate from France. That is why its title is "Le Beau Ange De La Morte", translated to be "The Beautiful Angel Of Death". Grim was born in the year 1891, and carries the wisdom and knowledge of all his ancestors, it was jsut his body that was born.Being of French ancestory, Grim, when you get the chance to talk to it, is a very arrogant being, and very cruel in its words.

March 8, 2008, 1:35 AM

The Beautiful Angel of Death, eh?

We're going to need more with the personality. It's not too specific, very vague, and doesn't illustrate what Grim is like very well. I just can't imagine being around the guy as a pal (though I wouldn't want to be either

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I'm sorry, strength is far too much. A bus can weigh TONNES. I'm thinking that, arms alone, the most anybody can lift here is 500 lbs. Sorry, but when you can lift around 10 tonnes, that's just way too strong.

With the Mind Projection, you can't stun your opponents, not for long anyways. That would render them incapable of action, which is not fair in an RP. You'll have to change that around; give it a small time limit and limit its power (absolute stun is far too much).

[NOT APPROVED]. Take a look at the things I've suggested, change them around, and I'll have another looksee

Good luck.

**Battle Royale: Profiles** · July 8, 2008, 9:43 PM

Since Nikita Solidor hasn't logged on since April, and no changes have been made to this Bio, I am closing it and moving it to Retired.

Nikita Solidor, if you wish to have your character resubmitted for approval, please PM me and I'll move the thread back.

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