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Name: Darre Jacques<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>
Title: None as of yet<o:p></o:p>
Race: Human (Not vampiric)<o:p></o:p>
Gender: Male
Age: 20

Appearance:
- Hair: Darre’s hair goes a bit below his neck, is obsidian black with bangs to his eyelashes. Thick and hangs around the sides of his face.
- Eyes: A simple mixture of grey with black in the center.
- Height: 6’ 5”
- Weight: About 120 lbs.
- Complexion: Clean, smooth, deathly pale skin. One scar going from the back of his hand around to the bottom of his wrist. <o:p></o:p>
- Build: Lanky and skinny, however not actually “scrawny”. Can pick up weight a bit lower than himself.
- Noteworthy Features: A scar going from the back of his hand, around to the bottom of his wrist, with rigid edges. Darre also has a crescent moon trinket on a necklace made of real silver with a jewel inside that sends out a celestial shield when Darre is in need of protection.
- Attire: Darre wears a simple, thin black shirt with likewise buttons near the sharp collar. Black pants to go with it, along with black dress shoes. He’ll go all out for casual.
Appearance in a Nutshell: Look to avatar for a… “cheery” *shiver* version of Darre.

Personality: He would tend to escape their distance for as long as possible, and hold off conversations till the last second. A pretty anti-social guy. If he was to be caught with friends, he’d probably be trying to get closer to their wrists than the relationship itself.
First Impression: Any stranger that walked up to Darre wouldn’t leave without having shed at least a little bit of blood. If having said the right words, and stroke Darre’s interest, they could possibly sprout a friendship, though this is rare.

Weapon(s): Darre has two special kunai he named Kuna and Fore. The kunai are embedded with the souls of a male necromancer and a female soul seeker. Though they can not communicate in any way with Darre or anyone else, they will respond to his mind’s commands, and fly at the opponent without Darre getting his hands dirty.
Armor: Like said in Noteworthy Features, Darre wears a crescent moon trinket necklace, with a sapphire between the moon’s two points that can send out a white, vapory, celestial shield that protects him when necessary.

Magic:
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- Soul Absorption<o:p></o:p>
Darre absorbs the soul of an already dead enemy, healing all of his wounds, but will be knocked out for a couple of hours. A silent escape, if you will. If the soul has too much light in it, Darre could die.<o:p></o:p>
- Darkness Calls<o:p></o:p>
Darre sends out shots of darkness that can be long, wispy shots, or small bullet-like shots.
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Abilities/Skills:
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- Bloodlust and Loss of Darkness<o:p></o:p>
These two are more like weaknesses than abilities, but they have to go somewhere. When enough blood is lost, or Darre hasn’t had blood in a while, Darre will instantly go after the next thing he sees, unless he can hold it back before going on a blood rampage.<o:p></o:p>
If Darre is cut with a gash deep enough, darkness (liquid form) literally seeps out of his wounds, and if enough gets out he has a chance of loosing his life. To be returned to normal, he must get in the darkest place possible, or be given darkness manually. (Darkness can be made with a series of hazardous ingredients.)

Quick History: Darre grew up in the village of Kulvieora. There, he waited for a long time until he got tired of the life he led there, being a supposedly dark and demented child, forced to live in a mansion with his hateful parents. He escaped to a secluded area in a far off forest, and found a rundown mansion of his own where he stayed for most of his life. On one account, a war started up outside the woods that encased his home. Wounded soldiers took refuge in the mansion, where Darre happily took their blood to survive. Before that, he had to hunt the forests for animals such as foxes, wolves, and squirrels. There was also some raw meat left in an old refrigerator. But on one day, and a day that followed, two people visited him, and they repelled all his assaults, simply giving him useless information on the war. But the days after these, Darre found two kunai named Kuna and Fore, embedded with the souls of a necromancer and a soul seeker. Ironically, the sides that were fighting were the necromancers and the soul seekers, and the two men were both were either side. Darre set off the day he found Kuna and Fore, deciding the kunai were signs that he was ready to go out on his own, and adventure. Although after he found the weapons, he has gotten a strong lust for blood and souls.

Not bad, but there are a few things.

Namely, your Magic. We need costs. I'm not tlking like, 3MP costs, I mean fatigue, weariness, energy loss, etc. This is specifically referring to the Darkness Calls skill and the shield that the pendant emits. Even the shield has to have some kind of energy tax, it can't just be infinite energy.

That's really it. The Personality can use some more detail, but i suppose it's alright. For now, [NOT APPROVED]

Just fix up the stuff, and I'm sure this will be ready to go

Since Darre Jacques has not logged on since January, I am closing and moving this thread to 'Retired.'

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