I am very familiar to the RP world having being RPing for five years noe on sites such as KH-2.net and KHInsider, and I wish to use a template of my own for my next bio, which is stated in your Guidelines to be acceptable.
Biography #01
This biography is specifically deisgned for my RP "BIRTHSTONES", which you will be able to find in your ORPG section.
Character Name: Spencer Tirian (or Spence)
Age: 16
Chosen Birthstone: Topaz, Citrine
Preferred name of Birthstone: Citrine
Wish: Spence wishes for nothing more than to have a little sister, to love and cherish. What he doesn’t know though, is that this experience may grant him with one before the final destination… (Those interested please PM me)
Romance: No, although he wishes to be close to one female but as a caring brother, nothing else.
Hobby/Unique trait: Spence is trained in the art of hand-to-hand combat within the after-school activity and so he is very aerobatic and flexible. He can run up walls, backflip and jump high into the air. Because of his fit figure and light weight he is quite talented and so he is quick, agile and good in combat.
Weakness(es): Although he won’t let people get the better of him, Spence can be a little too trusting at times. Also, when things go wrong, he has the great tendency to take the blame, dropping his social and active morale.
Magic: Spencer has no offensive spells. He can harness powers of emotion and miracle.
The first spell that Citrine can cast for Spence is the ability to see into people’s hearts and what they feel about others and about themselves. It is with spell that Spence can understand more about someone, allowing him to know whether to keep his distance when needed or come in for support and friendship. He will not let this spell get the better of someone’s privacy however.
Another spell Citrine can conjure for its bearer is the ability to glide through the clouds. When feeling alone or saddened, the peacefulness of the clouds of the night can soften the heart, and that’s just what Spence could want when with these emotions.
The final spell that Citrine can grant for Spence is the ability to walk on water. A miracle like no other with no description needed.
Appearance:
Spence's dress style is casual and sporty. He often wears hooded jackets and cargo pants. Spence dresses also incredibly adorable, and his delicate, blonde hair reaches down just to the middle of the back of his neck, styled georgeously which has made many women glance in his direction. Simply, Spence dresses kind of "cool", but definitely NOT like a little hip-hop kid. His clothes are often a bit over-sized, and he often wears a neck scarf. He doesn’t use necklaces as to accompany his “cool” look however. Despite his "cool" look, he is very gregarious and hardworking, and isn't one to cruise around with a nasty attitude. His large, crystal blue eyes sparkle in all light and can easily see deeply into the eyes of others.
Personality:
Spence is open-minded and brave, and although he dislikes school, very intelligent. He likes to behave goofy and easy-going to make others feel comfortable and happy, but also at times can act and talk very mature, so is not to be taken lightly. He likes to be around others, and when he is alone, he uses the spirit in people to spur himself on. He carries courage and a sense of independence also, disliking to involve others in his problems. If others do become involved, he takes the responsibility for them on himself. Spence is very clever, with a sharp intellect and a snappy wit. He is quick to jump at opportunities, although he always foresees the consequences of an action and takes care of it accordingly. Spence is responsible, with a natural forthright curiosity that sometimes makes him appear innocent, but in reality, he is very stoic and does not let others take advantage of him. Spence also cares deeply about others. Spence covers up his true loyalty for his friends with a sometimes brash, selfish attitude, but usually only does this as a defense mechanism, or even as a joke. He has a natural charm and flair about him, making him an outgoing person, with a talent for winning trust and friendship.
Spence is very noble and not afraid to stand up for what he believes in. He makes no excuses, and finds an inner strength in his honesty. When he does make a mistake, Spence is not afraid to admit that he was wrong, accepting it and looking for the best possible method to correct it. Spence does have a spark of a temper, however, and can become defensive when he is accused of something. He carries an air of self-confidence, and although at times he likes to show off, he ordinarily uses this confidence to make others feel at ease and prove that he knows what he is doing.
Spence generally is guided by his heart, and would never disregard his feelings if he sensed that something is wrong. He is a deep, dynamic person, with a wonderful mixture of a pure heart and a sense of humor. Spence is strong and dependable with a warm interior, and almost always can respond to a situation with a smile. He is quick to defend what he cares about, and upholds a powerful sense of justice.
Spence is very courageous, adventurous, and loves stepping up to a challenge and he never hesitates to tell things like they are. Never hesitant to spring to the defense of someone he cares about, Spence is protective and never gives up. Though rough on the surface, and slightly rude with a smart-aleck attitude, Spence is very kind and loyal to his friends. He can, however, have very quick spark of temper and, because of his quick spark of a temper, Spence can at times be a little insensitive without meaning to be, but is redeemed through his inner honesty and straightforwardness. Fun-loving at all times, Spence is always ready with a quick comment or sly joke to cheer others up.
Spence takes on the role of an older brother to his female friends, being best of friends with all and behaving protectively. Spence and some males are very much like brothers, and fight as such. They constantly squabble and brawl in a friendly, affectionate fashion; their fights never being too serious or lasting long. Spence often gets caught up in matches of wit among his friends. Loyalty is a trait that Spence possesses in the truest sense, never betraying a friend and valuing others’ comradeship with him.
Biiru's Bio Thread 
I must say, great grammar and spelling and such. Your personality is rather long, much longer than I ever would have expected it to be, but very good either way. Same with the Appearance; much more concise than the Personality, maybe, but still very good.
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