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| The Realm of Fighters Post your RP Bios here, and see if YOU'RE worthy to take on the stuff of Legends! |
November 7, 2007, 1:05 PM
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Peace is the Path.
Class: Veteran Member
Level: 6
HP: 174/200
MP: 100/100
EXP: 10
Join Date: October 2006
Location: Dartmouth, Nova Scotia (Canada, eh?)
Age: 19
Posts: 1,542
Threads: 101
Gil: 8,469
Member No.: 844
My Mood: 
Rep Power: 5
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Help on Bios!
Well, here's how it goes. I am not a mod, and as a result, I have no power to approve the bios that you people are making. However, I DO have the power to critique them, and help you to make them approvable.
This thread is designed for those who need help with their bios. Mods usually outline why your bio is unacceptable, and even if they do, you may be having trouble getting what they want in your bio.
Come here for advice on your bio. Even better, come here and ask for critiques, I'd be glad to help out. Just remember that you have to keep your bios in the same format as FFF's format, and keep them within the guidelines as well.
By asking for a critique, you must understand that the critique may not be to your liking, and that the critique is designed to make your bio approvable and that you may not like the things that the critiquer says.
Also, if you want to sign up for being a critiquer (you don't have to, this is just a reference so people know who to expect to critique their bios), please place it in the underlying section.
Critiquers
Red Fox
Julius Argexis
Dknight
Shadowfaith
Fair_Game
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Jake Long and Felldoh are the reasons I live. I breathe, walk, learn, and most of all, fight, only so that I may carry on their memories. I shall avenge Felldoh, and I shall protect Jake, no matter the cost!
Formerly Hera Ledro
Ghandi: oh-em-gee, chocolate chips are coming out my arse 
Virgin Mary: You need to lay off the fucking curry, Ghandi.
Last edited by Hera Ledro : June 30, 2008 at 3:11 PM.
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November 7, 2007, 11:53 PM
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Banned
Class: Banned
Level: 0
HP: 0/0
MP: 0/0
EXP: 0
Join Date: March 2007
Posts: 740
Threads: 44
Gil: 0
Member No.: 4467
Rep Power: 0
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*stickied fgj*
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November 8, 2007, 12:14 AM
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Peace is the Path.
Class: Veteran Member
Level: 6
HP: 174/200
MP: 100/100
EXP: 10
Join Date: October 2006
Location: Dartmouth, Nova Scotia (Canada, eh?)
Age: 19
Posts: 1,542
Threads: 101
Gil: 8,469
Member No.: 844
My Mood:
Rep Power: 5
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I was hoping that would happen  I'd had this in my head for a while, and thought that I'd take a risk and put it up today
So, any takers for critiquers?
Or is anybody here in need of some help?
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Jake Long and Felldoh are the reasons I live. I breathe, walk, learn, and most of all, fight, only so that I may carry on their memories. I shall avenge Felldoh, and I shall protect Jake, no matter the cost!
Formerly Hera Ledro
Ghandi: oh-em-gee, chocolate chips are coming out my arse
Virgin Mary: You need to lay off the fucking curry, Ghandi. |
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November 8, 2007, 2:10 AM
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Yeah, what he said...
Class: Veteran Member
Level: 2
HP: 140/140
MP: 100/100
EXP: 5
Join Date: July 2007
Location: Norway
Age: 22
Posts: 1,168
Threads: 22
Gil: 1,816
Member No.: 6289
Rep Power: 3
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Sure, I can take you on.
im pretty sure it will be accepted, but it never hurts to get a second opinion.
the history is very dialog oriented, it wasn't intentional, it just happened.
so. criticize away ^^
http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/ha...o-s-11243.html
Last chara, Aloc
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Reason for my inactivityness.
Is detailed Here
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November 8, 2007, 5:42 PM
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Peace is the Path.
Class: Veteran Member
Level: 6
HP: 174/200
MP: 100/100
EXP: 10
Join Date: October 2006
Location: Dartmouth, Nova Scotia (Canada, eh?)
Age: 19
Posts: 1,542
Threads: 101
Gil: 8,469
Member No.: 844
My Mood:
Rep Power: 5
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Very well then, let the evil critiquer begin...mwahahahaha X
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Jake Long and Felldoh are the reasons I live. I breathe, walk, learn, and most of all, fight, only so that I may carry on their memories. I shall avenge Felldoh, and I shall protect Jake, no matter the cost!
Formerly Hera Ledro
Ghandi: oh-em-gee, chocolate chips are coming out my arse
Virgin Mary: You need to lay off the fucking curry, Ghandi. |
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November 8, 2007, 5:46 PM
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the perfect Nobody
Class: Full Member
Level: 19
HP: 216/260
MP: 100/100
EXP: 45
Join Date: July 2006
Location: California
Age: 21
Posts: 570
Threads: 14
Gil: 1,768
Member No.: 449
My Mood: 
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I can help out as a critiquer
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I am not attacking your opinion. I am just correcting your misunderstanding.
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November 8, 2007, 6:39 PM
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Peace is the Path.
Class: Veteran Member
Level: 6
HP: 174/200
MP: 100/100
EXP: 10
Join Date: October 2006
Location: Dartmouth, Nova Scotia (Canada, eh?)
Age: 19
Posts: 1,542
Threads: 101
Gil: 8,469
Member No.: 844
My Mood:
Rep Power: 5
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@Red Fox
I've looked over your bio, and there is a rather short critique in your bio thread 
@Sylar
Welcome to the Critiquer Club XD We can use more (I'm the only one so far XD).
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Jake Long and Felldoh are the reasons I live. I breathe, walk, learn, and most of all, fight, only so that I may carry on their memories. I shall avenge Felldoh, and I shall protect Jake, no matter the cost!
Formerly Hera Ledro
Ghandi: oh-em-gee, chocolate chips are coming out my arse
Virgin Mary: You need to lay off the fucking curry, Ghandi. |
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November 10, 2007, 9:43 PM
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Chocobo Breeder
Class: Junior Member
Level: 0
HP: 0/0
MP: 0/0
EXP: 0
Join Date: November 2007
Location: Salt Lake City
Posts: 14
Threads: 1
Gil: 0
Member No.: 7339
Rep Power: 0
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November 11, 2007, 1:07 AM
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Peace is the Path.
Class: Veteran Member
Level: 6
HP: 174/200
MP: 100/100
EXP: 10
Join Date: October 2006
Location: Dartmouth, Nova Scotia (Canada, eh?)
Age: 19
Posts: 1,542
Threads: 101
Gil: 8,469
Member No.: 844
My Mood:
Rep Power: 5
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Why, certainly I'll have a looksee right now.
EDIT
Crap, um...that's actually gonna have to wait >.< Sorry, real-world stuff. I'll do it ASAP.
EDIT #2
Alrighty, I've looked over it and provided you with the critique you asked for, hop you find it useful
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Jake Long and Felldoh are the reasons I live. I breathe, walk, learn, and most of all, fight, only so that I may carry on their memories. I shall avenge Felldoh, and I shall protect Jake, no matter the cost!
Formerly Hera Ledro
Ghandi: oh-em-gee, chocolate chips are coming out my arse
Virgin Mary: You need to lay off the fucking curry, Ghandi.
Last edited by Hera Ledro : November 11, 2007 at 10:57 AM.
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December 17, 2007, 5:19 PM
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Newbie
Class: Junior Member
Level: 0
HP: 0/0
MP: 0/0
EXP: 0
Join Date: December 2007
Age: 16
Posts: 3
Threads: 1
Gil: 0
Member No.: 7720
Rep Power: 0
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I'm having a writer's block right now... Could use some suggestions.
http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/sh...164#post252164
P.S. Personalities and histories are the hardest thing for me to do. I know I should have more, but I can't think of something worth the time to read and type! |
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Help on Bios! 
