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| The Realm of Fighters Post your RP Bios here, and see if YOU'RE worthy to take on the stuff of Legends! |
February 9, 2008, 6:18 PM
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Revolutionary
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The changes say 10 metres.
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February 9, 2008, 6:22 PM
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Yeah, what he said...
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Sorry. I haven't read the changes, I just read what you stated in the post ^^
Well. if you have done what I said
then I say post it here on FFF:
and post a link to the post in "Bio approval: Waiting list"
http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/ha...list-9917.html
and await Hera ^^
he might have more things to state.
NOTE, I am NOT a moderator, I can NOT approve it.
I'm just here to help. Thus making it easier, or giving it a bigger chance to get approved.
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February 16, 2008, 3:17 PM
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Magister Julius Aurelius
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Count me in as a "Critiquer" but I would prefer "adviser" seeing it sounds less...erm..you know 
Glad to know I can help you Hera 
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February 16, 2008, 5:03 PM
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Peace is the Path.
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New critiquer!  woohoo!
*adds Julius to the List*
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Jake Long and Felldoh are the reasons I live. I breathe, walk, learn, and most of all, fight, only so that I may carry on their memories. I shall avenge Felldoh, and I shall protect Jake, no matter the cost!
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February 16, 2008, 5:17 PM
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I won't look back
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Oh hey do you have to pass a test to be one, I'd like to try! I'm pretty thorough and though I haven't got the writer bone, I've got the editor bone definately!
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February 16, 2008, 6:57 PM
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the perfect Nobody
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Hey Hera I still plan on helping out with this. You can put me back on the list. the only reason I wasn't too involved before was because there was a period without anyone wanting help.
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February 16, 2008, 11:34 PM
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Peace is the Path.
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@ Sylar
Oh, lol, my bad xD Sorry bout that.
@ Fair_Game
Hmm. I don't know you too well, much less your critiquing skills. To give me an idea of the way you critique, choose an unapproved bio from here and send me a PM with a critique of it. I'll see how it is, and see if you can do a critique.
I wouldn't ask this, but I only heard of you today XD I've known the others for a while 
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Jake Long and Felldoh are the reasons I live. I breathe, walk, learn, and most of all, fight, only so that I may carry on their memories. I shall avenge Felldoh, and I shall protect Jake, no matter the cost!
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February 17, 2008, 8:46 AM
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I won't look back
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Looks like I'll have to wait for the next one, Julius hit em all! He's a machine!
But yeah, I'd love to give 'er a go.
Quick question I've got a character concept (one I drew) but its kinda lacking personality, history etc.
I guess the concept was combine a Predator with an Insect and squash in some Iron Man. I was sitting in my thinking chair and started listing off whatever thoughts came to mind, and I ended up on the word 'lancer' so I started drawing a lance then the rest just came out of nowhere.
I think it looks pretty BA so I decided I really want to run with it. Any advice on how to flesh it out a bit? I'm hoping to make a dynamic character, and really really try not to make him overpowerful.
He's going to have futuristic armor, a lance that starts as a short sword with a long handle for easy storage, a antimatter shield and some way to perform a super jump, something like 'if he creates an antimatter barrier ontop of another it causes a miniature explosion'. Is any of this stuff allowed? Or is it too powerful?
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February 17, 2008, 9:23 AM
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the perfect Nobody
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well it depends on what effect the antimatter has. There are more than one ideas on antimatter and what happens when it comes in contact with matter. The super jump should be fine, but you will have to limit the height/ distance of the jump. and give some sort of idea of how high up the character can fall from without harm since you want to use the superjump. The whole lance from short sword is perfectly fine, but you'd have to explain how the transition is made.
if you need anyhelp with coming up with a name for the character or race I might be able to help you with a visual or better description.
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February 17, 2008, 2:55 PM
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Peace is the Path.
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O.o
Guys, maybe there's been a misunderstanding of the critiquing stuff
Have these people PMed you to critique? While I love what you've done, we should still wait for people to PM you or for them to post in here, asking for a critique. We can't just assume they want it, or they will start trying to get you guys for pseudo-modding 
Be careful kiddies 
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Jake Long and Felldoh are the reasons I live. I breathe, walk, learn, and most of all, fight, only so that I may carry on their memories. I shall avenge Felldoh, and I shall protect Jake, no matter the cost!
Formerly Hera Ledro
Ghandi: oh-em-gee, chocolate chips are coming out my arse
Virgin Mary: You need to lay off the fucking curry, Ghandi. |
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