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Aene Hienne, RP Character.
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Used in : ORPG Name : Aene Hienne Age : 14 Gender : Female Birthdate : 3rd Day of the Sun Month (July) Alignment : Good. Race : Human. Body Build : Slender. Natural light tanned skin. Height : 4 feet, 3 inches. Weight : 94 lbs. Personality : Aene is sometimes quiet, but very tempting at times. She absolutely loves to pay tricks on her enemies while in a fight. She is quite clever, but she cannot sense danger well. She is sometimes wise, but sometimes stupid enough to not realize a killer is behind her. But she can still survive from silent attacks if she is injured only slightly. Silent attacks occur rarely on her, so she doesn't have to worry about anything. Appearance Facial Features : Left eye is Caribbean blue, other is lush green. They are almond shaped, and a bit large. Eyebrows are thin and brown. Face is clear of any beauty marks except for a natural one beside her right eyebrow. Cheeks are slightly rosy and also slightly plump. Lips are full and naturally pink. Face build is roundish square, but not too square.
Hair is straight, brown, and long. It goes down evenly in a diagonal position. The left side goes diagonally down to the right, as the right side goes diagonally down to the left. The end meets its point, finishing to Aene's waist. Hair has slanted bangs over her forehead, diagonally going down to one side of her face, mostly the right side. Attire : Aene wears numerous piercings on her ears. She wears a diamond brooch that has the crest of her family on it. A dark blue and green horizontally striped scarf was wrapped around her neck. She wore a brown strapless tank top with a fading pink jacket with its sleeve rolled up to her elbows. Aene wears gold and silver bracelets on her wrists, and one snake-wrapping bracelet on her arm. She wore fingerless knuckle gloves with a ruby ring symbolizing her birthdate. Aene wears light green shorts on top of her black leggings. She also wears black boots laced up with white strings. Weapons : She carries a pair of Kimber 1911 .45ACP (guns) around her carrying belt. The gun is completely decorated in all kinds of silver, loaded with as much as 50 silver bullets. The guns are very accurate, though not strong enough to kill a large creature. It is still possible for the guns' bullets to wound the large creature.
She has a dagger secretly tucked in her left boot, in case of knife fights. The dagger is made of shiny silver. It has carvings on the blade written in the Arabic language. It says in English translation "The Light Guides You." The blade was orginally made from Saudi Arabia, as the language comes from. The dagger can pierce only any substance except for steel.
History Bio : Aene was born under a virgin mother in Croatia. Since the Civil War between Yugoslavians broke out, her mother abandoned Aene for her safety. Aene ventured out of the Yugoslavian territory and ended up in Italy, where she was raised by a Mafia. She was taught to fight for those who she loved, to kill those who terrorizes the world of humanity, and to defend to survive. She learned numerous ways of fighting : knife fighting, Ju Jitsu, and other forms. When mastered all of them, she left her caretakers and went off to explore the outside world. She still ventures on, residing in London, England. She gets involved in a lot of problems, such as mobs, burglary, robbery, and murder. She became a detective in England's CSI Organization. She works there solving crimes, even though she is very young. But she acts mature enough to be considered an adult. She received her pair of Kimber 1911 .45ACP (guns) from her Mafia caretakers before she left to explore the world. Aene received her Arabian dagger from a Makarajah in disguise in Romania, after she learned the truth about him.
First Impressions : She would be friendly, but quiet in some way. If she was asked some personal question, she would immediately drop down to silence and look away. If she met a child, she would turn friendly. She would start giggling like a girl. But if she met a adult, she would be serious.
Aene would react if she saw danger ahead. Strengths : Aene can punch a brick wall and leave a small dent, but that doesn't use all of her strength if she was just practicing. She can lift up things only up to 4 tons, unusual for her slender size. When she punches a target, she can wound the target very badly. But what she lacks is her accuracy, so she sometimes misses her target while fist-fighting.
If a target's health was at 600, Aene's strength of one single punch would minimize the target's health to 550, approximately. 5 punches would drop the target's health bar to 350. Speed : Aene's speed is great, for her talent in free running. After a 10-second build up, or maybe even longer, she can run as fast as a roadrunner. She can sidestep quickly, but not without a small scratch. Aene's attacks are fast but quite unaccurate. Endurance : Aene would take a small damage from a small creature, but quite a large damage if from a large creature. Aene can fight for as long as an hour, but not more. If she did, she would pass out immediately. The stamina of Aene is medium, but she can still survive, even from her lack of stamina. Reflexes : Aene lacks the ability to react quickly. She can react to something in fron of her, but not above or behind her. If she sees a bullet fired in front of her, she can react quickly and move out of the way. But from behind, she can still survive if the bullet was not accurate to hit Aene. Fighting Style : Aene's fighting styles are mostly martial arts. She rarely uses any other fighting style except for martial arts, shooting, and knife fights.
For martial arts, Aene uses the tactics only when neccessary. For Ju Jitsu, she uses it on stronger humans. For Tai Kwon Do, she uses it on other humans, such as assasins and murderers. Armor : Aene does not wear any type of armor except for the diamond brooch that she wears. The brooch reflects most black magic from the wearer except for Comet and Aero, which wounds the brooch, but it regenerates gradually. Abilities : Aene's abilities are very few. She only has two : One to scream and gain supreme fury, and the other to sacrifice HP for other allies.
The first ability is called Battle Shout. Aene gains the energy to her soul. The energy then bursts in her soul, releasing great fury. Aene screams, and starts running at her target, releasing highly accurate attacks of fire based blows. The energy in the beginning of the ability are long, soft green lines with a small ball of light at the end of the line. The ability ends after about 8 minutes.
The second ability is called Sacrifice. Aene looks up into the Heavens, and calls for forgiveness. Two angels clad in white come down from the blue sky. The angels then circle Aene, who looks down at the ground. Aene then bursts out thousands of green energy lines from her soul, which enters the ally's/allies' soul, renewing it. Aene then falls down lifeless.
The ability Sacrifice is NEVER used. Aene only uses it when she's ready for her time, and when she wants to save those who she loves most in the world. Magic : Flare : Is Fire-Type, Black magic. Looks like a blasting fire in the middle of nowhere. Resembles the Big Bang from the beginning of the universe. Flames are yellow/white in the middle of the explosion, but uses gradient fades to turn into red in the rim of the explosion. Costs 20 MP/Magic Energy/Mana to use.
Holy : Is Black Magic, and kills undead creatures. Starts as a bright white ball of light in the user's hand, but when thrown at a target, it turns into a massive explosion. An angel clad in gold appears at the target and flies up into the Heavens, finally going down to release thousands of throws at the target. Costs 35 MP/Magic Energy/Mana to use.
Cure : Heals targets, is White Magic. Green vines embraces the target. The vines then burst, causing tiny green speckles to land on the target. The speckles enter the target's skin, making a renewing feeling inside it. Costs 12 MP/Magic Energy/Mana to use.
I hope you like my brand-new RP character. I took me about half an hour or so to finish this up, so if you have any concerns, just post in this thread and I'll figure it out. =]
There, I edited. =]
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Well, for starters, we would ask that you use the bio format outlined here. If you do not wish to use this format, you must PM the one you do want to use to either myself or Contra Fates, so that we may determine whether it is acceptable for The Legends.
But here are the things you will need to fix up in either case:
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Weapons : She carries a pair of Kimber 1911 .45ACP around her carrying belt. She has a dagger sercretly tucked in her left boot, in case of knife fights.
We'll need you to describe each of these weapons. No use in going into a fight with somebody who hasn't a clue what a Kimber 1911 is. Describe what you can, and I would personally suggest that you add a sort of 'trademark feature' to each weapon, just for a personal touch
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Magic : Flare, Holy, Cure.
We'll need to know what those attacks do, how they look, energy/mana costs, etc. Even if we knew what Flare 'did' in Final Fantasy IX, it does things (and looks) totally different in VII, so it's not a given what the spells actually do or look like.
So, for now, it's [NOT APPROVED]. Fix it up, PM one of us with the bio format you wish to use (or use our own), and then we'll have another look-over.
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Ah, I'll fix it ASAP. I'll PM you when I'm finished editing it.
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You've done a great job on this bio, Cherri. Very detailed. =)
Since this is only meant for ORPG use, I just suggest you explain a little bit more about her guns, and you'll be good to go for approval.
The updated version of the guns is the the quote box below. =]
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Weapons : She carries a pair of Kimber 1911 .45ACP (guns) around her carrying belt. The gun is completely decorated in all kinds of silver, loaded with as much as 50 silver bullets. The guns are very accurate, though not strong enough to kill a large creature. It is still possible for the guns' bullets to wound the large creature, but causes great damage if the creature is a lycanthrope (werewolf). The pair of Kimber 1911's were given to Aene when she finished her training with her caretaker Mafia. The head of the Mafia explained to Aene that the pair of Kimber 1911 is the only one left in Italy to use. The head of the Mafia warned Aene to take care of it greatly, and to not lose sight of it.
I suck at describing weapons, so that was probably my best shot. But if it's not goo enough, I'll try more harder. =]
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Silver Shot I : lol does everyone know like everyone's name? xD
Casanova : I do know a few people's...
Cherri : Do you know mein?
Casanova : I do, yes.
Cherri : Whut, then.
Casanova : Trevor.
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